WORDPLAYA vs ella
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 is a k.o.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 10:30 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

ella has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 10:45 PM.

WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 10:53 PM.

diss battle is a wrap................. we gone tELLA dat
pussy so loose n wit my rhymes it can't help but clap
u spit crap....... a mischieveable deciever a fuckin hoe
got lime light no swallowing 'sticks' is da only way u 'glow' *
to late 2 escape u accepted regrettin is where u headed
yo legs have been spreaded like stretches in athletics **
get it........ probably not da cockin leavin ya brain rotten
n fuck a dog infer red light or sperm is how u been spotten

[CLOSER]
so stop it like a sign ya rhymes made 3RD Eye Blind***
wit 50%............ while mine a 100% like GINUWINE

*GlowSticks or stick meaning dick
** u stretch ya legs in sports or spread dem to stretch out
*** 3RD Eye Blind is a band 100% is GINUWINE the singers
old album

yo we uppin 4 sum votes ya
so give a honest vote we'll
return da favor

Voted For: ella

Hands down ella.
Like your style...you flow like me.
Any how...
As far ans punches,flo,wordplay and metiphores go.
Ella controlled it all.

Playa.
you were just a lil to basic an well, I guess dumb wit ya lyrics.
Smartin wem up a lil. get sum wit, an u'll be fine.
You had sum nice...Word play on his name.

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Voted For: ella

aiiiight

ella definately came stronger...
nice mixture of vocab, humour n personals ella, u got talent...
maybe need'a up ya punches just a lil, but on the whole it was a damn decent drop...

playa ya flow was aight, u didnt hit hard enuff, i dunno if u underestimated or what, but your whole lyrical content was nuthin compated to ellas...
i wasnt feelin ya opener either, could have used ya words alot better...

but ella wins hands down...

return the fave in my sig

p e a c e

Voted For: ella

ella had a better all together verse thats true speaking

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Voted For: WORDPLAYA

playa takes this cuz his had creativity and ella came mad weak and i wasnt feelin it,the wordplay u attempted failed and just didnt sound witty and u kept using future-tense,elevate....no hate tho...

yo word,return the favor na mean,thx-1-

Voted For: ella

ella gets my vote for vocab n effort both came tight, but ella triumphs.

uppin for votes
Nutz vs wish
Nutz_B vs oreo
Nutz_B vs Duke
thnx peace.

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Voted For: ella

i vote 4 ella...her verse flowed better and had better punches, not really any metaphors (good thing she didn't need any)

wordplaya's verse...it would've been a lot hotter if wut he wuz saying about her wuz tru...but he made up the part about her being a hoe (even though it wuz a lil' funny) and thats all his verse was about...i've seen better from you...and wit 4320 minutes to write i know you could've come hotter

still uppin 4 honest votes
cum give a honest vote n
i'll return da favor

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

verbs scalp em with malace...n comidate your hair as a bandage.
put scare in this savage...you couldnt use prayer as advantage.
OK WACK PUNCH GOOD FLOW
ellas got this kid sprung n hungry...n its origin is hollow.
like sick kids with small tubes...im forcin em to swallow.
AGAIN NO PUNCH GOOD FLOW
only thing you forge is my motto...your rap's wack resident.
to believe you defeat chicks like me...you better photograph the evidence.
NICE DISS GOOD FLOW STRUCTURE STRECHED
must serve the greater half of elements...or eye the gutter.
my presence aint to can your rhymes...but merely guide the cover.
FLOW AGAIN NO PUNCH
keep keying your life away...and youll forever live your days obsurd.
this a game of numbers n stats...theres no slot to PLAY A WORD.
FINALLY DOPE FUCKING PUNCH GOOD PERSONAL FLOW AGAIN GOOD STRUCTURE STRECHED
forget the future, its present...votin for you would be the worst lie.
if id key wack punchlines...wed see rap verses very first tie.
DOPE PUNCH AGAIN GOOD
bread n chicken dinner...will have me wrappin this fool's leg.
your easily digestive...down you like black kids with kool-aid.
WACK PUNCH HERE
punches landin...write this story fiction, like hes handing me wet fire.
even your internet knows your wack...how it randomly expires.
WACK AGAIN
got you cascet ordered...you wont be a bitch to bury.
you dont scare me...your an upated list, a played words dictionary.

DOPE PERONAL ENDER ALSO
OK ELLA GOOD FLOW AND VOCAB ALL THROUGH PUNCHES WERE IFFY SOME HIT SOME SLACKED A OK VERSE NOT YOUR BEST BY FAR

diss battle is a wrap................. we gone tELLA dat
pussy so loose n wit my rhymes it can't help but clap
GOOD PUNCH HERE BAD WORDING OK OVERALL GOOD FLOW
u spit crap....... a mischieveable deciever a fuckin hoe
got lime light no swallowing 'sticks' is da only way u 'glow' *
DOPE PUNCH AND WORDPLAY HERE NICE GLOWSTICKS THATS SOME OLD SCHOOL SHIT
to late 2 escape u accepted regrettin is where u headed
yo legs have been spreaded like stretches in athletics **
OK PUNCH NOT GOOD
get it........ probably not da cockin leavin ya brain rotten
n fuck a dog infer red light or sperm is how u been spotten
OK PUNCH ENDER WACK WONT EVEN LIST IT

OK BOTH GOOD FLOWS WORD HAD BETTER STRUCTURE BY FAR FLOWS TIED ELLA HAD BETTER VOCAB WHILE ELLA DID HAVE SOME GOOD PUNCHES THE MAJORITY WERE WACK SO WORDPLAY WINS MY VOTE WITH A HIGHER PERCENTAGE OF GOOD PUNCHES ENDER WAS WACK BUT WORDPLAYA HAD BETTER PUNCHES OVERALL

BOTH YALL RETURN HONEST VOTES BACK

Voted For: ella

Ella won this battle hands down. the punches were harder n more imaginative than word playa's. structure was good work on ur rhymes tho some of them were a stretch. Word playas spit was too simple to beat ella in this battle he could have done better n the lines were stretched holla at me

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Voted For: ella

i think ella won dis battle, because he ahd da harder punches as well as the better flow and wordplay. playa did good but was not as good as ella punch wise. my vote is ella

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

ella got gsame i luvd dat verse it was tight an u won ella i like it i liked dat play a word line dat wuz tight u got the vote

Voted For: ella

damn this was close

punch ella came a little harder
multis non
enjoy ella i like it more
structure wordplay had a beeter one

w/ ella got this by a hair