Diabolic_aka_134 vs Boy_wonder
 

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Boy_wonder has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 11:01 PM.

Diabolic_aka_134 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 11:12 PM.

aka yer name shoulda been like a weapon ,an ak..
cuz your shit is so off you would need it to spray....
while im smokin fat blunts and hittin it up wit my bently...
ill be eating u up like its breakfast and yer complimentry....
i gotta desert eagle heater,but i dont need to shoot...
fukk u up so quik,then be yer best bud and give u gunit recruit
naww i couldent do that,were only one color and u anit blakk. not to mention u ride in an xl,while im rollin on dubs about to prevail...i fukked up my structure,osamas yer luver,
u a dick rider,osamas u must be in al quida..
stepp it up if ya ever wanna make sum cash.....
look at it this way u gott afganastan hash....
so stop talkin trash,yer ass is grass...
smoke you like when i open up my stash......

Uh Oh! looks like another muh fukn front
this cat boy wonder tryna b like g-unit n stunt
well all i can say hees a pussy cunt
but i dang cant eat that out
but imma jus speak the truth
uve probably hit more homos(homers[home runs]) then babe ruth
this cats shook, he aint no assassin
pictures his momma in his head, thats his only contraction
thing is u listen to ya momma, n she listens to me, thats y she told u get tha fuck outta my family
the only money u got is on rap verse
too bad u cant make a withdraw, that must b a curse
ur a dude n act so femineme(duno how to spell it:/)
ur momma know me as the m&m man kuz i nut in her mouth not in her hand
-Holla-

no beef man not hatin

-Holla-

Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

weak close battle.

punches- 134
personals- wonder
multis- wonder
metas- 134
word play- 134
flow- 134

134 decent start but then u started talkin bout bein poor, bein gay, and his mom. battles between u and him, leave the mommas out of it. decent flow, try more personals, keep elevatin

Wonder good start but u fell of mid way. work on keepin everythin consistant.

134:
" thing is u listen to ya momma, n she listens to me, thats y she told u get tha fuck outta my family" decent punch.

Wonder:
" while im smokin fat blunts and hittin it up wit my bently...
ill be eating u up like its breakfast and yer complimentry...." ok punch.

v/134

Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

Vote diabloic

both had bad wordplay and bad punhces

BUT WONDER TALKIN BOUT BENTLEYS AND SHIT
THATS FUCKIN WACK ASS FUCK

VOTE DIABOLIC CAUSE HE DIDNT GLORIFY HIMSELF LIKE HE WAS JESUS

WONDER NO BENTLEY
DONT LIE IN BATTLES LIKE THAT
THAT WILL LOSE VOTES FOR YOU

the only money u got is on rap verse
too bad u cant make a withdraw, that must b a curse
only thing i thought was good

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

I Give This One To Diabolic, Just.

Diabolic: Ya Structure was a lil off and so was ya flow in parts. Decent punches, i suppose. They Difinatly hit harder than wonder. Vocab was, mmmmm, ok. Try to add sum metas and wordplay and maybe work on ya structure.

Boy_Wonder: Ya Structure wasn't great and neither was ya flow. Punches were kinda weak too. Quit talkin about guns and weed and shit. Like Diabolic ya need to work on ya structure.

Vote: Diabolic

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

yo man got this it was not that good of a battle you threw a better verse against me but dude man his stuff was like ohh im gangster and he selfglorified too much i hate that

diabolic had better punches and personals but work on some metas and structure an okay flow but oevr all 7/10

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thnx mayn... we'll hav a rematch sumtym again after we elevate haha aiight uppin this bitch...

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Voted For: Boy_wonder

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Voted For: Boy_wonder

boy wonder takes this battle!!!

Flow= boywonder, better structured and flowed well
Punches= boy wonder took this about 60/40
vocab=deffinatly boy wonder, much better use of words!

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^^ this boys dont know how to vote it wasnt explaind at all and didnt give any feedback on how diabolic did and his thoughts on that..this boy dont know how to vote...i swear

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

they both sucked pretty much.... i guess ill go wit u though.....

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

well after reading these both i have to say the winner is diabolic his structure was a hell of alot better than boys. the punches were almost equal in both but i have to give them to boy wonder but what the fuk happened to your verse boy it was good then if juss fell off a cliff and fukn died after the breakfast line. the flow of both was off but again diabolic had this one boywonder your shit seriously fell apart. diabolics opener was better it hit harder and juss made more sense as for closers diabolic won again even though he miss spelt some words i know what he ment. boywonder your closer juss weak and garbage it was like you gave up writting anything good after the breakfast line. metas were weak in both so no one gets that. so overall i vote for dialbolic

Voted For: Boy_wonder

this was a eack battle, but i think boy wonder took it with a better all around flow...his punches hit harder, and hit structure was hella better...aka. had an okay flow, but i wasnt feeling it...i think you should work on your structure most of all
vote goes to boy wonder


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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

punches-da134
strture-gal_wonder(lol)
pers-da134
lyked-da134
best verse-da134
da134 wins dis 1 gal wonder u need to eleavat(lol)
pz out