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Boy_wonder 09-15-04 11:55 PM

Boy_wonder vs final
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 12:25 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 09-15-04 11:55 PM

Boy_wonder has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 11:55 PM.

System 09-16-04 12:01 AM

final has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 12:01 AM.

Compose 09-16-04 12:04 AM

to this kid banks is the one to be admired/
he aint got enough skills for that role t be aquired/
im wonderin why this boys battling me for/
fuck wit this ill have you home walkin over claymores/
you a wannabe banks with ya skills that shit is stupid/
then u wonder why ya 2nd rate and my shits exclusive/
ready to battle me, that decision was foolish/
if i have to ill take you out with arrows from cupid/
im not clueless, followed me and now your brain has been decieved/
its Final, i forsee there will be no victory (banks victory)

Boy_wonder 09-16-04 12:05 AM

yo like i dont have time to drop tha final** curtain...
yurning fer a battle your gonna get a merkin...
spit flows so tight youll lose yer focus...
cuz i work magic fukk yer hocus pocus....
gotta steady flow of money cuz i gotta madd talent....
ill take yer rymes to da trask cuz they say invalid.....
your a cheap ass niggas yer style cheap and cracked...
while im flippin over benjis countin on my stacks....
i think imma go get tha new album buck dropped...
u so fukkin broke u cant even window shopp....
work magic**young buck song he said in pm if i didnt have time**and he said he was yurnin fer his first battle u honest votes yall

Compose 09-16-04 12:18 AM

second line is to* next to role, most could figure out just sayin incase anyone didnt know

Compose 09-16-04 01:15 AM

im out going to sleep check back tomorrow uppin for votes

Compose 09-16-04 10:06 AM

uppin, more votes.................................

Dirty Nigga 09-16-04 10:11 AM

Voted For: final

Aiiight

This Battle Lacked Hard Hittin Personals n Punches, Based On The Fact He Had Better Wordplay n Vocab My Votes Goes Too FINAL, He Dropped An Aight Verse...

Both Emcees Could Improve--Structure, Punches, An Metas, But One The Whole The More Complex Wordplay From Final Got This...

Return The Favor

P E A C E

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-16-04 10:43 AM

Voted For: Boy_wonder

to this kid banks is the one to be admired/
he aint got enough skills for that role t be aquired/
^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD OPENER NOT AN GOOD PUNCH

im wonderin why this boys battling me for/
fuck wit this ill have you home walkin over claymores/
^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH MAYNE WEAK

you a wannabe banks with ya skills that shit is stupid/
then u wonder why ya 2nd rate and my shits exclusive/
^^^^^ AIGHT COOL NICE PUNCH

ready to battle me, that decision was foolish/
if i have to ill take you out with arrows from cupid/
^^^^^^^^^ ARE U GAY (FAGGET) BUT NOT AN GOOD PUNCH WEAK

im not clueless, followed me and now your brain has been decieved/
its Final, i forsee there will be no victory (banks victory)
^^^^^^^ OK NICE CLOSA


yo like i dont have time to drop tha final** curtain...
yurning fer a battle your gonna get a merkin...
^^^^^^^ WEAK OPENER

spit flows so tight youll lose yer focus...
cuz i work magic fukk yer hocus pocus....
^^^^^^^^ OK DATS AN PUNCH

gotta steady flow of money cuz i gotta madd talent....
ill take yer rymes to da trask cuz they say invalid.....
^^^^^ PUNCH

your a cheap ass niggas yer style cheap and cracked...
while im flippin over benjis countin on my stacks....
^^^^^FLOW NO PUNCH

i think imma go get tha new album buck dropped...
u so fukkin broke u cant even window shopp....
^^^^^^^^^^ HUH? W/E PUNCH

I THINK BOY WONDER GOT DIS

HIS SHIT WAS BETTA DAN FINAL

YALL NEED TO ELEVATE YALL HAVE BASIC WORDS

ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES YO
\
V-BOY_WONDER

Compose 09-16-04 10:46 AM

no im not gay.....just used the arrows as weapons nothin else lol

SinDrome 09-16-04 10:49 AM

Voted For: Boy_wonder

weakish battle ... not alot of wordplay, multies .. vocab

flow: Boy
punches n personals:Boy
mettas: tie ... none that were good

that kinda a whack break down ... but hey

other categories were tied..

vote ....

Compose 09-16-04 11:02 AM

uppin............................................. .

mc-bad-boy 09-16-04 11:27 AM

Voted For: Boy_wonder

boy wonder wins this 1
more punches and better
better
met
mul
and all that his verse was much better

mc-bad-boy 09-16-04 11:30 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149552 return the fav

the_crazy_one 09-16-04 12:21 PM

Voted For: final

final that was great i loved it you merked him to the end of merking ness that was great for only taking 15 mins to do i mean it Great

Compose 09-16-04 04:17 PM

it was just ...ok... i just wrote it for like 5 minutes last night, should of put more work since my first battle but whatever....uppin for more votes

Epical 09-16-04 07:31 PM

This was feedback posted for Boy_wonder
 
average battle

punches- wonder
personals- neither
multis- wonder
multas- neither
word play- wonder
flow- final

Wonder u had some nice punches and punchlines, but u need more hard hittin and more of em.

Final liked ya flow, but your punches were weaker than wonders.

Wonder:
"i think imma go get tha new album buck dropped...
u so fukkin broke u cant even window shopp...." nice closer

Final:
"to this kid banks is the one to be admired/
he aint got enough skills for that role t be aquired/" nice opener.

v/Wonder if i could vote

intensify effect 09-16-04 08:47 PM

Voted For: final

this was tight...

flow: even
punches: even
diss: final

all around basicly it was final who had the better ending which helped me make my final answer but seriously ya are preety even and tie.......

nice battle

untouchablekilla 09-16-04 09:48 PM

Voted For: Boy_wonder

boy_wonder just came harder his flow and punches were better and had bettern punchlines final ur just a n00b who whould leave this site u suck ur structure sucks and ur verse was wack just plain wack

v/Boy_wonder

Boy_wonder 09-16-04 09:53 PM

lmao ,yeah dogg, uppin yall will return honest votez peace yall

Compose 09-16-04 10:12 PM

lol untouchable u just mad cuz i voted against u in one of your battles, talk about honest votes pick a winner cuz u thought it was hot not cuz u dont like me

untouchablekilla 09-16-04 10:17 PM

i did he ripped u son enuff said no go run along and play kid.

Compose 09-17-04 01:15 AM

untouchable just shut up no need to argue about stupid shit like this but dont come here sayin stupid shit like "enuff said no go run along and play kid.", just because your mad at me cuz i didnt vote for u doesnt mean u could be disrespectful....just grow up man got nothin against u, im ending it now....honest votes yall uppin...im out for today peace

¤ÐÅž¤ 09-17-04 07:51 AM

Voted For: final

BLAH,WEAK BATTLE ya'll both need to elevate alot,work on your punches n structure them right,go to the tutorials cause both you are badly needing it....final gets my vote for attempting a battle verse n not having as much self glorification in his verse...nuff said..elevate..!!!

Compose 09-17-04 10:48 AM

uppin......1 more vote just close battle on the next vote whoever it is, dont care if i win or not i need to elevate more

Compose 09-17-04 01:57 PM

uppin............................................. .

Spektikul 09-17-04 02:32 PM

Voted For: final

Boy Wonder:
Overall - 2/10

-Vocab was elementary
-didnt need the ... after every line
-Only multie was weak (hocus pocus)
-Basically whole verse was talking about what your gunna do to him, those arent punches, they are threats that will never happen...

Final:
Overall - 5/10

-Good vocab
-Solid structuring
-metas/multies are needed
-Personals are definatly needed cause you could basically use that verse on anyone on the site

As you can see from what I have just said above ^^^ Final is the winner here today. No hate, just an honest vote in my opinion. Peace....


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