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Boy_wonder vs final
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-16-04 at 12:25 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Boy_wonder has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 11:55 PM.
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final has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 12:01 AM.
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to this kid banks is the one to be admired/
he aint got enough skills for that role t be aquired/ im wonderin why this boys battling me for/ fuck wit this ill have you home walkin over claymores/ you a wannabe banks with ya skills that shit is stupid/ then u wonder why ya 2nd rate and my shits exclusive/ ready to battle me, that decision was foolish/ if i have to ill take you out with arrows from cupid/ im not clueless, followed me and now your brain has been decieved/ its Final, i forsee there will be no victory (banks victory) |
yo like i dont have time to drop tha final** curtain...
yurning fer a battle your gonna get a merkin... spit flows so tight youll lose yer focus... cuz i work magic fukk yer hocus pocus.... gotta steady flow of money cuz i gotta madd talent.... ill take yer rymes to da trask cuz they say invalid..... your a cheap ass niggas yer style cheap and cracked... while im flippin over benjis countin on my stacks.... i think imma go get tha new album buck dropped... u so fukkin broke u cant even window shopp.... work magic**young buck song he said in pm if i didnt have time**and he said he was yurnin fer his first battle u honest votes yall |
second line is to* next to role, most could figure out just sayin incase anyone didnt know
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im out going to sleep check back tomorrow uppin for votes
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uppin, more votes.................................
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Voted For: final
Aiiight This Battle Lacked Hard Hittin Personals n Punches, Based On The Fact He Had Better Wordplay n Vocab My Votes Goes Too FINAL, He Dropped An Aight Verse... Both Emcees Could Improve--Structure, Punches, An Metas, But One The Whole The More Complex Wordplay From Final Got This... Return The Favor P E A C E |
Voted For: Boy_wonder
to this kid banks is the one to be admired/ he aint got enough skills for that role t be aquired/ ^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD OPENER NOT AN GOOD PUNCH im wonderin why this boys battling me for/ fuck wit this ill have you home walkin over claymores/ ^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH MAYNE WEAK you a wannabe banks with ya skills that shit is stupid/ then u wonder why ya 2nd rate and my shits exclusive/ ^^^^^ AIGHT COOL NICE PUNCH ready to battle me, that decision was foolish/ if i have to ill take you out with arrows from cupid/ ^^^^^^^^^ ARE U GAY (FAGGET) BUT NOT AN GOOD PUNCH WEAK im not clueless, followed me and now your brain has been decieved/ its Final, i forsee there will be no victory (banks victory) ^^^^^^^ OK NICE CLOSA yo like i dont have time to drop tha final** curtain... yurning fer a battle your gonna get a merkin... ^^^^^^^ WEAK OPENER spit flows so tight youll lose yer focus... cuz i work magic fukk yer hocus pocus.... ^^^^^^^^ OK DATS AN PUNCH gotta steady flow of money cuz i gotta madd talent.... ill take yer rymes to da trask cuz they say invalid..... ^^^^^ PUNCH your a cheap ass niggas yer style cheap and cracked... while im flippin over benjis countin on my stacks.... ^^^^^FLOW NO PUNCH i think imma go get tha new album buck dropped... u so fukkin broke u cant even window shopp.... ^^^^^^^^^^ HUH? W/E PUNCH I THINK BOY WONDER GOT DIS HIS SHIT WAS BETTA DAN FINAL YALL NEED TO ELEVATE YALL HAVE BASIC WORDS ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES YO \ V-BOY_WONDER |
no im not gay.....just used the arrows as weapons nothin else lol
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Voted For: Boy_wonder
weakish battle ... not alot of wordplay, multies .. vocab flow: Boy punches n personals:Boy mettas: tie ... none that were good that kinda a whack break down ... but hey other categories were tied.. vote .... |
uppin............................................. .
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Voted For: Boy_wonder
boy wonder wins this 1 more punches and better better met mul and all that his verse was much better |
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Voted For: final
final that was great i loved it you merked him to the end of merking ness that was great for only taking 15 mins to do i mean it Great |
it was just ...ok... i just wrote it for like 5 minutes last night, should of put more work since my first battle but whatever....uppin for more votes
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This was feedback posted for Boy_wonder
average battle
punches- wonder personals- neither multis- wonder multas- neither word play- wonder flow- final Wonder u had some nice punches and punchlines, but u need more hard hittin and more of em. Final liked ya flow, but your punches were weaker than wonders. Wonder: "i think imma go get tha new album buck dropped... u so fukkin broke u cant even window shopp...." nice closer Final: "to this kid banks is the one to be admired/ he aint got enough skills for that role t be aquired/" nice opener. v/Wonder if i could vote |
Voted For: final
this was tight... flow: even punches: even diss: final all around basicly it was final who had the better ending which helped me make my final answer but seriously ya are preety even and tie....... nice battle |
Voted For: Boy_wonder
boy_wonder just came harder his flow and punches were better and had bettern punchlines final ur just a n00b who whould leave this site u suck ur structure sucks and ur verse was wack just plain wack v/Boy_wonder |
lmao ,yeah dogg, uppin yall will return honest votez peace yall
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lol untouchable u just mad cuz i voted against u in one of your battles, talk about honest votes pick a winner cuz u thought it was hot not cuz u dont like me
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i did he ripped u son enuff said no go run along and play kid.
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untouchable just shut up no need to argue about stupid shit like this but dont come here sayin stupid shit like "enuff said no go run along and play kid.", just because your mad at me cuz i didnt vote for u doesnt mean u could be disrespectful....just grow up man got nothin against u, im ending it now....honest votes yall uppin...im out for today peace
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Voted For: final
BLAH,WEAK BATTLE ya'll both need to elevate alot,work on your punches n structure them right,go to the tutorials cause both you are badly needing it....final gets my vote for attempting a battle verse n not having as much self glorification in his verse...nuff said..elevate..!!! |
uppin......1 more vote just close battle on the next vote whoever it is, dont care if i win or not i need to elevate more
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uppin............................................. .
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Voted For: final
Boy Wonder: Overall - 2/10 -Vocab was elementary -didnt need the ... after every line -Only multie was weak (hocus pocus) -Basically whole verse was talking about what your gunna do to him, those arent punches, they are threats that will never happen... Final: Overall - 5/10 -Good vocab -Solid structuring -metas/multies are needed -Personals are definatly needed cause you could basically use that verse on anyone on the site As you can see from what I have just said above ^^^ Final is the winner here today. No hate, just an honest vote in my opinion. Peace.... |
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