LyricalDon vs spiderman
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 01:02 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

LyricalDon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 12:34 PM.

You can floss like a baller and be in ya CADILLAC B// but im shootin through ya SHIELD just to put the DRIVER in the BACKSEAT!!!//

You claim you on TOP but i just regain the soul of this dude// and keep him on the bottom like the SOLE OF MY SHOE// ok

And im a make sure ya BALLS aint RESTIN// put the long nose down ya mouth and have you SHITTIN out ya SMALL INTESTINE!!!!

This GUNNA go to the cops and be peeil with his gums// Me and EAZY hang you with a rope from the ceilin by ya tongue//

I can be a man you a WOMAN but// the only time you see me soft is when im done bustin nuts//

You wanna feel the power of the 45 or the SMITH and WESSON clown// but the GAGE put you in the sky and have you lookin like you sittin down//
After i'm done i need vacation so im a find a spot to go to// and stay in FLORIDA more than a CUP of ORANGE JUICE// OK!

You cant take the GAGE so i guess LONG SLEEVES HURT// but the 9 grip to you so lets see how the SHORT SLEEVE WORK!!!// UH HUH
Fuck sellin you slugs im a keep em all free// and make ya CHEST HANG DOWN to ya KNEES like TALL TEES!!!//

Spiderman has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 01:02 PM.

Aight, check it...
Ur a big joke on this site, I've seen it, kid, you're lame
& how many heads on this site got Don in they name?
Like that retard Radio, with u we all change da station
So I'll give Lyrical some tips, cuz bum needs a Donation
To you, no one says wassup
You suck, you're outta luck, so just give up
Ur below most of us, like a nigga from the dirty South
Only time Spidey's nuttin' is when it's in ur girl's mouth
See, I'm lyrically ur superior, so bitch, just take a bow
I'll have all RV talkin' bout how LyricalDon-e did it now
Later

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Voted For: Spiderman

spiderman merked lyrical here, beta punches, much beta structure n flow n had some gud wordplay in there too...o.k battle....keep droppin

Voted For: Spiderman

woah... Lyrical... your style sucks...
Imma break this down simple...
Flow... spidey
Structure... spidey (you need to work on it tho)
Vocab... spidey (I liked it... I thought it was kinda tight)
Wordplay... spidey
Metas... tie
opening...lyrical
closer... spidey (wasn't that good tho)
personals... spidey

VOTE: Spiderman
Lyrical: up your vocab... work on punches
spidey: keep writing... you gettin' better.

Voted For: Spiderman

hey yo this was no competiton. Spiderman took this battle easily. Better flow, harder punches and better wordplay.
No Hate
My Vote- Spiderman

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Uppin for the win.

Voted For: Spiderman

Aiiight, spider got this in my opinnon..
loved that bum need donation line, that was funny as hell, but the better structred rhyme, ya flow semed kinda laid back n chilled, i like that....nice vocab too, keep em comin spider

lyricle, ya flow was...
i dunno, lines seemed stretched, too many fillers too, stuff that didnt need to be in the verse, ya know?
wasnt feelin that floirda line, or ya finisher...
no hate, just givin my vote

return the fave in the sig ya'll

p e a c e

Voted For: LyricalDon

LD KILLED THIS THA PUNCHES WAS HARD AS HELL
STRUCTURE WAS OK
METAS DAMN...

THIS WAS A CLOSE ASS BATTLE BUT I THINK LD PULLED THIS OFF CUS THA PUNCHES...

FAV LINE...

Fuck sellin you slugs im a keep em all free// and make ya CHEST HANG DOWN to ya KNEES like TALL TEES!!!//

Voted For: Spiderman

ok
spiderman
he had little better punches n more better pers better verse altogether

lyricaldon
he had some punches little weak but he had some not good enuf to match spidermans not many pers


winner-spiderman