Dmizzle137 vs Golden shellz
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hating
no gayness
this is part 2

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-19-04 at 04:00 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 04:02 PM.

dmizzle137 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 04:03 PM.

u goin to get a lyrical ride on a roller coaster, burn u up ima toast ya. buss u down eat ur insides lik a vulture. my lyrics cost more than an autographed 50cent poster. all u pop is shit dats it, wen i kill u it wont be by a gun, it will be by the lyrics dat i spit. ur rymes is crap, dont get slapped, or get shot up wit my loaded gat, i didnt rap for a little while now im bac and more phat than biggie and pun so its a rap. im tha next tupac, dont get mad cause u not, even ur gurls think im hot. lik llyod banks im on fire, after this u will retire. then i sing at ur funeral lik a church choir. according to this rap game u fired. my rymes is sick, one dose, and u cant spit dats it

u challenged me for the second time, like a white girls pussy i cant have it
ima keep spittin hot shh it comes automatik
its fuckin rooks like these that annoy me the most
its our second battle and look he still got less than 4 posts
im straight infinite nigga u cant stop me
locked g, copy, pop heat its high likely
rappin is life nigga, thats why i do it from 9-5
id pop u wit a cannon and niggas would hear it on Rodeo drive, haha
and lyrically homey, i got special range bullet on me
i got more cannons on my block than the 20th cetury ARMY

uppin here cuz i think i gotta close this shit

Voted For: Golden shellz

wow mizzle u sure r humble :/

punches- shellz
personals- shellz
multis- mizzle (cuz he tried)
metas- shellz
word play- neither
flow- shellz

Shellz ok punches, and a good personal. try some multis and more metas.

Mizzle u need to punch, and glorify when u can bak it up, which u cant right now.

Shellz:
"its fuckin rooks like these that annoy me the most
its our second battle and look he still got less than 4 posts" nice personal. how is it possible to have under 4 posts and have battles? youd think hed try uppin least once

mizzle:
"im tha next tupac, dont get mad cause u not, even ur gurls think im hot" haha that is funny. next Tupac my ass.

v/shellz

lol at ya sig thats hot, ayo uppin

Voted For: Golden shellz

u challenged me for the second time, like a white girls pussy i cant have it
ima keep spittin hot shh it comes automatik
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD OPENER MAYNE

its fuckin rooks like these that annoy me the most
its our second battle and look he still got less than 4 posts
^^^^^^^^^^^ PERSONAL AND A PUNCH

im straight infinite nigga u cant stop me
locked g, copy, pop heat its high likely
rappin is life nigga, thats why i do it from 9-5
id pop u wit a cannon and niggas would hear it on Rodeo drive, haha
and lyrically homey, i got special range bullet on me
i got more cannons on my block than the 20th cetury ARMY
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCHES & PERSONALS




DMIZZLE U HAD PUNCHES BUT YO STRUTURE WAS MESSED UP

BUT ANYWAY U HAD PUNCHES AND MULTI'Z USE PERSONALS PUNCHES IT WILL EDGE DIS BATTLE! BUT NICE VERSE ANYWAY

MY VOTE GOES TO GOLDEN BASICALLY HE CAME HARD WIT PERSONALS AND PUNCHES

~PEACE~

iight uppin here i gotta close this shit out

yea, im up in dis shit so help us close out this batle cuz no its a knockout

Voted For: Golden shellz

golden had the better structure and flow. dmizzle did good. his lyrics if u pay attention relle does make sense but he didnt have as much punches as golden
v/golden

ok upin i need wat 2 more vote and this will be knock out part 2

ok yall uppin to close this shit man !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Voted For: Golden shellz

golden shellz:
that was weak man but you came ahrder weak battle alright verse flow not bad...stucture coulda ben better try and add soem witty metas and punches in there tho...then your verse would be dope try add some complexity by ading vocabulary to but you won you had some tight attepts to punches but at least your stucture was better then your oppenents...

dmizzle:
that was hella weak stucture hella off flow hella off.. vocabulary hella weak as fuck!cant say anything to brring your convidence up cuz that was pure weak..

o and retrun the favour at this link here me verse net explain to ight peace.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151316

alrite im up in dis its a ko so far 1 more vote and then its a rap in terrorist threat part two hey ima make a open mic wit dat name

Voted For: Golden shellz

u goin to get a lyrical ride on a roller coaster, burn u up ima toast ya. buss u down eat ur insides lik a vulture. my lyrics cost more than an autographed 50cent poster. all u pop is shit dats it, wen i kill u it wont be by a gun, it will be by the lyrics dat i spit. ur rymes is crap, dont get slapped, or get shot up wit my loaded gat, i didnt rap for a little while now im bac and more phat than biggie and pun so its a rap. im tha next tupac, dont get mad cause u not, even ur gurls think im hot. lik llyod banks im on fire, after this u will retire. then i sing at ur funeral lik a church choir. according to this rap game u fired. my rymes is sick, one dose, and u cant spit dats it

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT IT DIDNT RHYME IT DIDNT FLOW I READ YO VERSE BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN NICE TRY THOUGH,,,,,,,BUT ELEVATE USIN STRUTURE AND PUNCHES AND PERSONALS DEN U BE ALRIGHT


u challenged me for the second time, like a white girls pussy i cant have it
ima keep spittin hot shh it comes automatik
its fuckin rooks like these that annoy me the most
its our second battle and look he still got less than 4 posts
im straight infinite nigga u cant stop me
locked g, copy, pop heat its high likely
rappin is life nigga, thats why i do it from 9-5
id pop u wit a cannon and niggas would hear it on Rodeo drive, haha
and lyrically homey, i got special range bullet on me
i got more cannons on my block than the 20th cetury ARMY
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE U HAD AN GOOD VERSE HERE

NICE PUNCHES GOOD STRUTURE AND GOOD FLOW

V-GOLDENSHELLZ CAUSE HE HAD BETTA ALL AROUND VERSE STRUTURE,PUNCHES,FLOW.

RETURN AN FAV GOLDEN