Nfamous vs MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 04:30 PM

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Nfamous has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 04:01 PM.

i would take it easy being that this is a lady
give her a couple of dollars to take care of her babies
one of the femcees claiming to be the princess of rv
when she's only the princess of the hoes of all streets
hair is to short for weave so she uses clamp -ons
it's that time of the month so she needed 15mins. to change her tampons
she was probably at crew mugshots finger bangin the post
sucking dick to get more votes
so now she'll probably cough up a comeback topped with cum out of her throat

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 04:14 PM.

jus deleted my post ..but ima de-feat u coz u aint standin...
your style a lil wobly round the edges..ill issue a quik sanding..
u from hells soul..but even wit the devil in u cudnt spit fire..
u outta look boy...coz u like ya "beef"..is about ta ex-pire...
like a car hire..ya gon return all used and abused...
you aint playin my game...coz you clearly aint "clued"...
name got it bout right coz in rap...u gon remain NON-famous..
aint all that..elevate..ya newb battles aint gon entertain-us

yup deleted my first.thatr woz like a straight 2min keystyle....
ha.but woteva.

it was pretty good you probably go this one respect

uppiin 4 votes

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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

manipulation got this
opener:manip...
structure:manip
closer:manip
personals:manip
overall:manip

yo drop an honest vote here
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

close average battle

punches- tie
personals- lation
multis- famous
metas- lation
word play- lation
flow- lation

Lation good drop, good flow, and nice punches. work on more personals

Famous u had a good verse, lation's wuz just better. work on harder punches.

lation:
"name got it bout right coz in rap...u gon remain NON-famous..
aint all that..elevate..ya newb battles aint gon entertain-us" nice personal.

famous:
"one of the femcees claiming to be the princess of rv
when she's only the princess of the hoes of all streets" nice punch.

v/lation

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uppin this wack ass piece of shit..................

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

flow-manipulation got this down here, nfamous lines were streched and some were too short, manipulation for the most part everything was put together

punches/personals-manipulation, lot better punches that were more creative and hit harder, all of nfamouses verse was basically dissin the fact shes a girl, gotta switch that shit up then the whole verse is plain and played wit no creativity

vocab-manipulation, not much to say here she had better vocab here

overall picked manipulation harder hitting punches and better flow, no hate on nfamous...did good too good luck

peace

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drop a honest vote on my shits, dont vote if u dont like me or cuz i didnt vote for u or somethin, just a honest vote, thanks

peace

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

w00t u came harder

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

nfamous...aight verse...a few aight punches...nuthin special tho...ok personals...good flow...they were about the same....overall just an ok verse...

manipultion....ur verse was better..purely on the punches hittin harder and u had better personals...structure and flow was good...overall decent verse...

my vote...manipulation