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Nfamous vs MaNiPuLaTiOn
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-16-04 at 04:30 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Nfamous has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 04:01 PM.
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i would take it easy being that this is a lady
give her a couple of dollars to take care of her babies one of the femcees claiming to be the princess of rv when she's only the princess of the hoes of all streets hair is to short for weave so she uses clamp -ons it's that time of the month so she needed 15mins. to change her tampons she was probably at crew mugshots finger bangin the post sucking dick to get more votes so now she'll probably cough up a comeback topped with cum out of her throat |
MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 04:14 PM.
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jus deleted my post ..but ima de-feat u coz u aint standin...
your style a lil wobly round the edges..ill issue a quik sanding.. u from hells soul..but even wit the devil in u cudnt spit fire.. u outta look boy...coz u like ya "beef"..is about ta ex-pire... like a car hire..ya gon return all used and abused... you aint playin my game...coz you clearly aint "clued"... name got it bout right coz in rap...u gon remain NON-famous.. aint all that..elevate..ya newb battles aint gon entertain-us |
yup deleted my first.thatr woz like a straight 2min keystyle....
ha.but woteva. |
it was pretty good you probably go this one respect
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uppiin 4 votes
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
manipulation got this opener:manip... structure:manip closer:manip personals:manip overall:manip |
yo drop an honest vote here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148857 |
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
close average battle punches- tie personals- lation multis- famous metas- lation word play- lation flow- lation Lation good drop, good flow, and nice punches. work on more personals Famous u had a good verse, lation's wuz just better. work on harder punches. lation: "name got it bout right coz in rap...u gon remain NON-famous.. aint all that..elevate..ya newb battles aint gon entertain-us" nice personal. famous: "one of the femcees claiming to be the princess of rv when she's only the princess of the hoes of all streets" nice punch. v/lation |
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uppin............................................. ......
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uppin this wack ass piece of shit..................
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
flow-manipulation got this down here, nfamous lines were streched and some were too short, manipulation for the most part everything was put together punches/personals-manipulation, lot better punches that were more creative and hit harder, all of nfamouses verse was basically dissin the fact shes a girl, gotta switch that shit up then the whole verse is plain and played wit no creativity vocab-manipulation, not much to say here she had better vocab here overall picked manipulation harder hitting punches and better flow, no hate on nfamous...did good too good luck peace |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150480 drop a honest vote on my shits, dont vote if u dont like me or cuz i didnt vote for u or somethin, just a honest vote, thanks peace |
Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
w00t u came harder |
Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
nfamous...aight verse...a few aight punches...nuthin special tho...ok personals...good flow...they were about the same....overall just an ok verse... manipultion....ur verse was better..purely on the punches hittin harder and u had better personals...structure and flow was good...overall decent verse... my vote...manipulation |
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