E-Dubz vs intensify effect
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 lines tops
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feeding
no lame votes explain them.....

good luck.. :thumbup:

this should be a class sic battle..... :evilgrin:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 10:02 PM

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e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:35 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:37 PM.

here somethin quik, should b enuff

i got they tongues twisted...... lookin like Thiefs at Night
this nigga spit like a bitch...... i think his briefs is to tight
i hate hearin bout the ‘bread’ from these ‘whites’ who hold heat
who instead know they live right and hey shit is ‘whole wheat’
i’ll wrap flows around you...... till you got a spineless back
you couldnt win if you was Frankee and you stole my track
he in over his head, like ‘lucy and ricky’ this aint ‘classical pairs’
face it you fell off yo game, like parapelegics in musical chairs

dont get the wordplay, dont vote

i know why u a CLASS-SIC... peep and grasp it, how u bitch like a mom
plus u got everyone lost trying to read u'r lines like dyslexic hand readers studying palms

i know playing knock-out kings the only punches u use to throwin
and if i forced ya face down under the stream E-dubs still couldnt be flowing

This Chump Bites, Stumped On Site, I Got you 'Sweating Between My Posts' Like 'Exhausted Up-rights...
You Suck In Fights, Up Your Height, E-dubs 'Shit Never Lands' Like 'Feces On Continued Flights *ha*

E-dubs wouldnt elevate if he was whodini,(magician)
N hes known to be grabbin more mushroom shaped things(dicks)then mario and luigi, * fuck it made it quick*

good drop...lets get votes

^^^ yea tight battle N nice drop....

props N much respect....

upp'in for votes....

uppin..

This was feedback posted for e-dubz
 

i was going 2 vote for e dubz but 100posts blah o well

can yall drop an honest vote

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Voted For: e-dubz

aight battle e-dubz gets this though punches were more complex n his verse was set out with WAY better structure n flow,both had no personals even though ie tried with using his name it jus wasnt cuttin it srry dawg,ie some of your lines were stretched with ok multi's ta cover it up but it was awful hard ta follow your flow at times ...e dubz gets my vote for harder hitting more complex punches..
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Voted For: e-dubz

I.E.- ehh very very simple. nothing special bout ya verse except for the feces on continued flights line(good job choosin a closer) but the rest was pretty simple to me. punches was ehh, wordplay was ehh, flow was ehh, basically just all ehh.....5/10

E-dubz- i hate you for not writing a verse like this against me! lol j.k. what im sayin is you have done much better. punches were iight, wordplay was nice, metas structure and flow was all on point so overall good job.....7/10

RTF....links in da sig :thumbup:

^haha fo sho.. uppin

Voted For: e-dubz

lmao...e-dubz nice short verse... the punches all hit hard... good overall verse... nice wordplay and punches... intensify ur verse was aight.. i expected a little bit more from u... but u still held your own... but dubz got this one with wordplay and punches..

Voted For: intensify effect

aiiiiight, not bad..
both produced some decent punches..
effect took the personal side of things, an the better structure, but wordplay n metas go to dubz, but effects punches got him this battle...

dubz you just lacked that killer punch to finish effect off, still a decent drop from both, but effect just scarped it in my opinnon..

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eeeeh..... phatom i think u was hate'in on me seriously!! my verse was eeh all the way u crazy i dont want to toss no dirt on no-one shoulders but i had better punches, multis, the last line was done at the time i was soppuse to drop and i wasnt trying to think just drop whatever came to mind.....

no disrespect e-dubz u nice but i just thought i out did u this time i would admit if i got beat but some of these votes are from u know........ BUDDYS!!!!

upp'in....

nah they aint.. no hate to u IE but i think i got u on dis one.. uppin

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

inteseify boner you weak you dont carry anything but no heat on any batttle ever you had haha

battle me.......^^^^^^^^^

upp'in this.........

plez no hate..........

Voted For: e-dubz

i got they tongues twisted...... lookin like Thiefs at Night
this nigga spit like a bitch...... i think his briefs is to tight
^^^^^^^^^^^ aight nice wordplay good punch

i hate hearin bout the ‘bread’ from these ‘whites’ who hold heat
who instead know they live right and hey shit is ‘whole wheat’
^^^^^^^^ nice wordplays again but u aint hitting hard mayne come i want to see some heat~!

i’ll wrap flows around you...... till you got a spineless back
you couldnt win if you was Frankee and you stole my track
he in over his head, like ‘lucy and ricky’ this aint ‘classical pairs’
face it you fell off yo game, like parapelegics in musical chairs
^^^^^^^^ aight nice punches mayne and wordplays der good (fiya)

i know why u a CLASS-SIC... peep and grasp it, how u bitch like a mom
plus u got everyone lost trying to read u'r lines like dyslexic hand readers studying palms
^^^^^^^^^ nice punch mayne good opener

i know playing knock-out kings the only punches u use to throwin
and if i forced ya face down under the stream E-dubs still couldnt be flowing

This Chump Bites, Stumped On Site, I Got you 'Sweating Between My Posts' Like 'Exhausted Up-rights...
You Suck In Fights, Up Your Height, E-dubs 'Shit Never Lands' Like 'Feces On Continued Flights *ha*
^^^^^^^^^ whoa nice punches homie and wordplays and personals

E-dubs wouldnt elevate if he was whodini,(magician)
N hes known to be grabbin more mushroom shaped things(dicks)then mario and luigi, * fuck it made it quick*
^^^^^^^^ good flow but wack punches mayne

i gots to give dis to e-dubz becuz of harder punches and wordplays (fiya)

i.e u had good punches mayne u was throwin heat but u lost me with da closa mayne

and da opener it was it was an good punch had pesonal

but i liked e-dubz wit dem wordplays mayne

so i vote for e-dubz for harder punches and good wordplays

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Voted For: e-dubz

intensify effect:

i know why u a CLASS-SIC... peep and grasp it, how u bitch like a mom
plus u got everyone lost trying to read u'r lines like dyslexic hand readers studying palms
aight wordplay 6.5/10
i know playing knock-out kings the only punches u use to throwin
and if i forced ya face down under the stream E-dubs still couldnt be flowing
now this line is straight played 3/10
This Chump Bites, Stumped On Site, I Got you 'Sweating Between My Posts' Like 'Exhausted Up-rights...
You Suck In Fights, Up Your Height, E-dubs 'Shit Never Lands' Like 'Feces On Continued Flights *ha*
never use feces in a battle 4/10
E-dubs wouldnt elevate if he was whodini,(magician)
N hes known to be grabbin more mushroom shaped things(dicks)then mario and luigi, * fuck it made it quick*
decent 5/10

e-dubz:

i got they tongues twisted...... lookin like Thiefs at Night
this nigga spit like a bitch...... i think his briefs is to tight
decent 6/10
i hate hearin bout the ‘bread’ from these ‘whites’ who hold heat
who instead know they live right and hey shit is ‘whole wheat’
nice wordplay on this 6/10
i’ll wrap flows around you...... till you got a spineless back
you couldnt win if you was Frankee and you stole my track
LMAO that song irritates me but nice wordplay 7/10
he in over his head, like ‘lucy and ricky’ this aint ‘classical pairs’
face it you fell off yo game, like parapelegics in musical chairs
decent.....6.5/10

[B]vote: e dubz blah battle nothing special:)[/B

Voted For: e-dubz

niceee drop from both parties.......

intensify effect ur verse hit well i liked it. nice werdplay. that line about shit never lands like feces on continued flights....funny shit.

nice drop e-dubz very good structure and flows well. nice werdplay again. i like ur style better than intensify effect. both verses have similiar skill level so im gunna base my vote on style.

sick battle vote goes to - E-Dubz