Nutz_B vs wish
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-20-04 at 01:54 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

wish has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 01:56 PM.

Nutz_B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 02:00 PM.

I'll SNAP this AMATEUR'S-BACK til' he HAS-an-ASTHMA-ATTACK/
And his BLADDER-CONTRACTS and his bones CRACK-n-COLLAPSE
Fuck HAVIN'-A-GAT, I'll DETACH his NUTSACK-wit-AN-AXE/
I'M SMACKIN'-THIS-CAT//me slacken OFF// CUM harder than you
when im JACKEN off//On a WEB-SITE you REP-LIKE you're a big, SAVAGE-MONSTER?
But you're just a High School freshman that getz SLAMMED-IN-LOCKERS//
Have some DECENCY and practice on an HOURLY-BASIS
THIS COWARDLY-RACIST-AWAITS-SPITS that DEVOUR-HIS-BASICS/
He's the FAKEST wanna' be "Gansta" the MEDIA FACES
He couldn't "spit" intelligent if he ATE ENCLYCLOPEDIA-PAGES/
And REGURGITATED da' PHRASES like BOLEMIA-STATEMENTZ//
, you make rap look like A PATHETIC HOBBY
Cause you're unoriginal like A GENETIC COPY/
If you SIT-N-WATCH ME, you'll learn to SPIT PROPERLY
But you'll PROBABLY get chewed up and spit out like BROCOLLI/
OBVIOUSLY you NOT ME, CUZ I BE a PRODIGY
You're a tresspasser in rap and this is my PROPERTY/
You type your lyrics GENERIC-N-SLOPPILY
Even if you were a state trooper YOU STILL COULDN'T BE "STOPPIN'" ME//
If I was a sleepin baby YOU STILL WOULDN'T BE "ROCKIN'" ME
The only time you not broke is when you playin MONOPOLY/
Could you POSSIBLY BEAT, DEFEAT or TOPPLE ME?

Its over

my lyrics get u hooked, like tha purest form of coke
you call yourself an mc this must be a fuckin joke, im reppin D.O.P.E.
smokin droe ta ease tha pain
tha 1 to blame on tha way 2 fame u niggas know my name
It's Nutz...
44 Magnums bust, tha most qualified mc wit a flow u just cant touch.
I'm on tha hussle, slangin rhymes like thay was crack
deliverin verbal blows knockin mc's on they back
This shit _B ill, my tech 9 shoots ta kill
plus my lyrics B_real enough ta kick wit cypress hill
yall know tha deal....
Tha D.O.P.E crews where im from
you wanna battle me i hope u "Got your self a gun".

Voted For: Nutz_B

ok breack down

opener-Nutz-b
flow-both (felt they both came good)
punches-nutz-b had a few but not to meny
closer-wish i liked his closer but thats about it

so vote goes 2 NUTZ_b

yo can you return the favor please id really aprichate it

i said no dickriders uppin 4 votes and ill battle the dickrider

Voted For: wish

this one is a no contest wish has this on hands down.

Voted For: wish

dawg what tha fuck is this omg
yo wish got my vote on this one he came harder his punches was nice he had a better structure his vocab was mad crazy yo so overall wish got this vote

what up uppin for votes

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uppin 4 votes can i get 2 votes so i can get some new battle up damn

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Voted For: wish

vote goes to wish, over all a very good verse, it was mainly ryming but it was quite funny.

Intro:

I'll SNAP this AMATEUR'S-BACK til' he HAS-an-ASTHMA-ATTACK/
And his BLADDER-CONTRACTS and his bones CRACK-n-COLLAPSE, Pretty plain intro for wish, but...

my lyrics get u hooked, like tha purest form of coke
you call yourself an mc this must be a fuckin joke, well thats just plain stupid.! no hate just bro you need some wordplay

now nutz, you need to cut the self glorization, shit like....tha 1 to blame on tha way 2 fame u niggas know my name
It's Nutz...
44 Magnums bust, tha most qualified mc wit a flow u just cant touch....oi thats just like WTF, you are ment to be battling the other guy and mocking him not explaining who you are, i mean, who gives a f888. no hatte man just saying, stop saying good shit bout yourself and focus on making strong punches for your oppsition!

Have some DECENCY and practice on an HOURLY-BASIS
THIS COWARDLY-RACIST-AWAITS-SPITS that DEVOUR-HIS-BASICS/ now wish, this is good rymng, and pretty funny, but really its bullshit for rapverse, you'll get away with it early on but later you'll get dissed and start loosing, you need to have metaphores and word play, take the raping tutorials for some help, and study them ok, they really help.. no hate you guys just telling it how its is,

return the favour and jump in a vote on these please, i am dying to get these battles colsed, thx bye

Voted For: wish

wish shoulda KOed this guy lol how did he get a vote? lol some dumb fag voted for him haha wish took this with ease