Empire vs triple_n
 

Battle Rules:

6 -10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Time for me to expose you to them folks who dont know you accept fag :gfy:

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-20-04 at 11:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 11:35 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 11:36 PM.

ROLMFAO...YO!!!!!!!!YOU NEED THREE DAYS TO DROP 10 LINES?....your even more garbage than I realized

ill drop tonight i got shit to do right now ill be back later

Ah'ight here we go, I don't need links or quotes to win this, I will beat you with what u will never have--->lyrical ability.


In jail empire was a "joke, fisted daily" their surrogate lady
Wow!..can I get ya autograph?..I neva met a muppet baby
Closet homos insinuate gayness to cover theirs, proven by shrinks
Empire has accused others of it over 200x, hmm..makes ya think
Like farmers I'm butcherin' this cattle for harvest relief
He's the rv cow, cuz here he's only good for beef
He can't post in a timely fashion, cuz it'll be his demise
Cuz this fat bitch sweats while typin', postin's exercise
U touch ya keyboard so much dat its claimin' rape!!!
Cpu's ya life, for $5.99 a month u couldn't "netscape"



Its a wrap!!!Just to add insult to injury everyone peep my audio diss track to empire as well...boy to get sonned in text an audio the sameday, u don't get sadder than that.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149995

Fags question ya sexuality you deny but fall into rages(1)
Why brag you below salary ya work like mexican wages(2)
Not a game i smoke lames hope you came with ya patches(3)
Stop fronting ya punches do nothing like slapboxing matches(4)
Nobody respects um like he stalking inspectors how he chasing dicks(5)
Rock pink like cam homo man should be banned faster then racist pics
Got this sown up im surprised you showed up for the battle
All in all you can be 26 ft tall and yall still stand in my shadow
Never spit fire he got dick riders but who cares what i think
Fuck what i say think he not gay?then follow the links..Link 1Link 2






Explanations if you dont understand nothing this will help if you understand then you dont need this and if you dont understand and dont wanna read this dont fucking vote!!-
1)why get mad if the person is lieing?
2)mexicans work below meniumum wage and his work is rap hes below the normal
3)metaphore patches stop people from smoking and im gonna smoke this lame
4)metaphore for the punchlines they weaker then slaps when he spits them
5)a inspector is a dective and another name for detective id dic some wordplay for that homo

Voted For: Empire

yo this goes to empire man this battle was close and evrythin but when it came down to punches i think empire took it but not easily triple N dawg u had some good lines Like farmers I'm butcherin' this cattle for harvest relief
He's the rv cow, cuz here he's only good for beef
dat was a good ass line but then empire struck u wit Fags question ya sexuality you deny but fall into rages(1)
Why brag you below salary ya work like mexican wages(2)
yall both did yall thing but when it came down to it Punches where harder from empire but yall keep on doin yalll think good battle!!!! NO HATE EITHER


v/empire

yall return da vote links r below

Voted For: Empire

This shit was pretty close.. Both came with some pretty good punches.. But at the end of the day, Empire took it, no hate was just feelin the verse more. Tripple used good personals but some of the beef shit was played, some of ya lines also were a bit weak like te muppet baby..

Empire also played a bit too much on the gayness thing, but the disses were more effective.. Thats why he got the vote.

Flow- Empire
Personals- Tripple N
Punches- Empire
Vote- Empire...

And if thats not explained well enough pm me and I will explain it further why you lost. But I dont think I need to. So blah.

Voted For: Triple_N

yo this battle was aight empire your shit was aight structure was bad no vocab witch i rate highly on some punches i felt tha opener was racist wasnt feelin that so you had some punches not alot that i was feelin so because of lack of punches an vocab an personals witch u had none i give this verse 6/10 wasnt feelin it triple n you had a aight verse no vocab either punches i felt hit harder though structure was bas as same wit empire but i was feelin your verse more so vote/triple n

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This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

^^^Aiyo, triple...suck a dick you bitch-made nigga

Voted For: Triple_N

Damn this was a close battle!!!!......one of the best i have ever seen......Empire i liked the word play and you had some good points in your verse...but you didnt show me any more than two rhymin words and it wasnt very diverse...no multies....no metas from what i saw....and i dont like how you had to explain your self.first impressions alwase leave a mark...you went to complex i couldent even tell what you were writing about but good verse regaurdless.....Triple-you came harder wit dis battle......i liked your verse alot.....and what you lacked you made up for in your personals....great flow.......no multies that i saw......but like i said this was a very very close battle but i got to give it to Triple by a hair....drop an honest vote on Me Vs. eveO on the front lines....exellent battle!.......peayce

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

yo, this was a pretty tight battle. but I think Triple took this. No hate Empire., but I think his punches hit much harder. His were more original. Also, one of your lines you like were braggin' about yourself. In a short battle like this, that isn't smart to do. But you had a pretty nice verse. But I think he got this over you. No hate. props to both. pc

Voted For: Empire

hahaha, holy shit...very good battle both of you. Now lets break it down a little shall we...

Opener - Triple, a harder punch than emps
Closer - Emp, very creative + those links are fuckin funny
Punches - Triple, had some hard punches that made me laugh
Personals - Emp, hittin hard with the last 2 bars
Metas - Emp, had more + were layed out better
Multies - Emp, for actually havin some
Structure - Tie, both were fine
Vocab - Triple, more tech words
Wordplay - Triple, I feel triple had some very clever wordplay
Creativity - Emp, some of triples lines were played

Triple, you had some lines that were alright, but some I wasnt feeling. The Empire beeflines are just getting old, hes not even beefin with ppl anymore, plus everyone has taken a turn usin a beef line on him. You needed better personals and more effective metas. Also you used no multies which gave the verse less entertainment/complexity.

Empire, you needed to throw harder punches and use better vocab in this one. I know what your capable of and this one wasn't as hard as they usually are. However, it was good enough to beat this guy. Mostly because you had as very good researched closer, harder personals and metas, actually used multies, and had the overall more creative and original verse.

I just gotta say props to both, this was a close one, but I was just feelin Empires verse more than you Triple, he came out to win today. No beef, just my honest opinion of who won.
And if you do get upset about how I voted, too bad, cause I actually took the time to vote, and if nobody voted it would defeat the purpose of critiqing ppl on this site...

Please return the favour as I have just done for the both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...249#post1599249

Peace.

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

wow, nice verse man, uppin for the crew...........

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

just checkin the polls.......Mindz Kollide stand up.....

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

yo empire you got Ko'ed lol no ofense but triple is way more played with punches but i cant vote we the same crew:(

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

i think empire took this....tripple n your punches were pretty good..and one stood out...it was by the best punch in the battle

Closet homos insinuate gayness to cover theirs, proven by shrinks
Empire has accused others of it over 200x, hmm..makes ya think

and the one about beef was true too...but over all...line for line..i thought empire came harder

Voted For: Empire

AIght u got this but really u gotta elavate jus a lil but your rhymes are good 9/10 structure is a 8/10 and your punchlines are 10/10 so tripple n keep practicein and u can get sum ppl aight so my vote goes to-----> Empire

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Voted For: Triple_N

damn
empire
u had good punches but they didnt hit hard but some did,ur flow was good,ur structure was nice man,u had good vocab and personals iguess,ur opener was okay,but your closer was poo poo....i also liked the wordplay set into your verse dawg....

triple
your punches were good man they hit hard...although the first couple lines were wack..u raped this kid towards the end and the rest of your verse,ur flow was coo,and the structure was dope also,ur vocab and wordplay was nice in this too....nice personals towards the end,wack opener and a hard hitting coler that did damage

overall both had good wordplay,vocab,structure,flow,and okay personals in this,but with better and hard hitting punches im gonna say triple n takes this....empire not bad man props

v/triple n

Voted For: Triple_N

aight hee we go i say htat trioke n wins this

TRIPLE N: you got this becuz you actually had good punches and good personlas......that beef line was aight....you shoudl have just used alil more meta4s and liek one more perosnal....but all ina ll good battle..

empire: no hate just waas only feelin the gay lines those were the only good lines...but i aint homo pobic or nothin so i didnt really care.......but yeah i think since you battlin so much you are fallin offf but just calm down with the battlin....but good spit though...im lookin foward to battle you

vote=triplen

Voted For: Empire

way betta personals personals win battles, shit more flow and structure, and vocab was a wee betta

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Voted For: Triple_N

This was a hard decision... didnt wanna vote on either one in case i changed my mind.. lol.. cos they were both good..

but..

Empire: Good flow, good backed up punches... But i wast feelin ya metas and wordplay.. It's not as good if you dont get wordplay straight away, n ya have to read explinations n all that shit... But it was a nice verse. Some original and witty stuff in there.

Triple: Ya flow fell off BIG TIME at some points... but only like twice.. then ya got it back on quick.. Made up for it with them punches though.. some good shit.. and nice personals..

^^no disrespect.. cos you both came well... but voters gotta make choices... -_-

Voted For: Triple_N

aiiiiiiiiight

Triple N Got this....

more complex verse, better structre n punches, loved the finisher too, nice drop N...

empire, ya flow was ...BLAH, it was neither here or there, some of ya punches hit hard, but other lines failed you, TRIPLE N got the more consistent verse thats why im votin for him...

return the fave in my sig

P E A C E

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Voted For: Triple_N

This goes to triple, easily in my opinion...

Empire ya verse started out okay, had some decent personals thrown in there except for the mexican wages line, it didn't make sense... but after you got past ya 5th line, wit the "racist pics" line, it went downhill... that really threw off ya flow, and took away from the rest of ya verse...i mean u tried rhymin "battle" and "shadow".. WTF? Your closer was decent, but you coulda done more wit it, or made more lines with it

Triple N you had a nice verse... opener was nice, hit hard and gave you a good start...Next 4 lines were so/so, but the exercise line killed it, it was a hard hittin personal and was funny as fuck... Also ya closer was nice, and i think it's important to have a solid opener and closer, it makes your overall verse better...Some of ya lines were played, like the "beef" line, but it wasn't bad and didnt' take away from the rest of your verse...

Overall my vote goes to Triple, he had harder hitting punches and better personals, and he stayed more consistent throughout his verse than empire did...

V/ Triple N