Red Bull vs intensify effect
 

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6 - 8 Lines
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Check in by: 09-18-04 at 11:38 AM

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it's on, good luck niggs

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 11:31 AM.

accept this battle already................................

Red Bull has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 11:35 AM.

hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that

your a bitch made vermon, when you see my name your worryin, gettin nervous
i'll leave you to fry like a jew in the furnace screamin "please don't burn us"

its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic
kids fuckin drastic, only action he gets is from his avitars graffic

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Personals
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kids callin on newbs to battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...781#post1593781

avitar has an anime picture of a girl twirling her tits

my mind convinced for acepting u'r stupied heres the consequence
punch u in the cheat so hard forensic gotta dust ya spine for prints *ouch*
ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off *HA*
my verse i'll have ya "not lookin to drop" like good boxser with large names
i'll put ya bars 2 ashame w/ viscious shot that'll have ya trying to "deal with faults" like "retarted card games"
u couldnt spit ill so it time u get off my nuts
plus u couldnt spit fire if ya verse was attached to a ciggertte butt's

word, solid drop....up

Voted For: intensify effect

close battle

punches- effect
personals- Red
multis- Red
metas- effect
word play- effect
flow- effect

Effect u had better punches and flow mostly. Close battle though, it coulda gone anyway.

Red u barely lost. You had the personals, and multis, but not the punches. If u had had the flow u woulda won.

Effect:
"ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off " nice punch.

Red:
"hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that" nice personal.

v/effect
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word, thanks for the feed....uppin this shit for some votes

up.

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This was feedback posted for Red Bull
 

I can't vote, just checkin' the count on this one...

Voted For: Red Bull

wow, this was bad from both of you, ive seen you guys do a lot better, Red Bull had this one but it was very slim

hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
nice opener, but not true 7/10
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that
good multis, but no punch in there really 6.5/10

your a bitch made vermon, when you see my name your worryin, gettin nervous
nice set up 8/10
i'll leave you to fry like a jew in the furnace screamin "please don't burn us"
not bad 7/10

its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic
nice set up 8/10
kids fuckin drastic, only action he gets is from his avitars graffic
8.5/10, its played line man
overall 45/60



my mind convinced for acepting u'r stupied heres the consequence
lol what??? 3/10
punch u in the cheat so hard forensic gotta dust ya spine for prints *ouch*
pretty good 7.5/10
ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
blah 6.5/10
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off *HA*
nop, you cant rime somtin wit a *HA* thats wack man 6/10
my verse i'll have ya "not lookin to drop" like good boxser with large names
okay ur gettin there 7/10
i'll put ya bars 2 ashame w/ viscious shot that'll have ya trying to "deal with faults" like "retarted card games"
8/10 pretty good
u couldnt spit ill so it time u get off my nuts
blah to plain 6.5/10
plus u couldnt spit fire if ya verse was attached to a ciggertte butt's
nah man 6/10
Overall 49.5/80 nop that wont do it v/red bull

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word, thanks for feedback....................uppppppin

Voted For: Red Bull

ie- nah horrific structure, bad punches, everything was off please stop the insanity and drop waaaaaaay better than that next time....2/10

red- ehh urs was iight i mean like enuff to win but not ill. structure was streched, punches were played and the rest was just average which makes it way better than a 2 soooooo........5/10
both need to continue elevatin
rtf links in the sig

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up.

Voted For: Red Bull

Intensity Effect

my mind convinced for acepting u'r stupied heres the consequence
punch u in the cheat so hard forensic gotta dust ya spine for prints *ouch*

didn't rhyme, not a hard hitting punch.

ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off *HA*

didn't really make sense. not feelin your punch.

my verse i'll have ya "not lookin to drop" like good boxser with large names
i'll put ya bars 2 ashame w/ viscious shot that'll have ya trying to "deal with faults" like "retarted card games"

decent punch. stretched though.

u couldnt spit ill so it time u get off my nuts
plus u couldnt spit fire if ya verse was attached to a ciggertte butt's

not a bad closer, 1st line was strange though. 2nd good.

Red Bull

hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that

nice multi's in there, good punch. didn't rhyme the 2 lines though.

your a bitch made vermon, when you see my name your worryin, gettin nervous
i'll leave you to fry like a jew in the furnace screamin "please don't burn us"

also good multi's, decent punch.

its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic
kids fuckin drastic, only action he gets is from his avitars graffic

lol, good personal. hard hitting. again, good multi's.

overall, red bull took this one, he had harder hitting punches and a witty closer. intensity, i wasn't really feeling your verse, some of it didn't seem to make much sense. no hate, just honest opinion.

v/ red bull

Voted For: Red Bull

red bull - nice sturcture and flow through out, good punches aswell, good personal at the end aswell, liked that very much. i liked your whole verse good opener and closer.

intestify effect- aight your lines didnt even rhyme until the 6th lines which is wack. even if the lines did rhyme they would still be wack and didnt really hit hard. try and keep your line length more consistant, they were all over the place.

vote goes to red bull, for better punches and basiclly everything.

no hate

uppppp..................................

Voted For: intensify effect

intensify effect wins this cuz red bull always puts some shit bout some one screaming outloud something,
rd bull, i waana rematch

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^^^ hahaha hate vote idiot, be dq'd your a loser, i koed thats right 5-0 go finger your asshole...up up bitches

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uppidy uppidy once again...fuck, somebody drop some votes on this shit

Voted For: Red Bull

aightyou got this mainly becuz of your personals....that vet line was perfect becuz all he does is battles newbs,,,,,but good battle you guys were both good but need to elevate a lot more....godd spit though..........goood battle though

i would liek to battle intesy effect or watever his name is

word, thanks for feedback.....up up up up up and away bitches

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Voted For: Red Bull

rebull took thi shit, he came out eit a better opener, much better closer and a couple of tight personals, altought his structure was alittle off
intensify effect had a average verse eit nuthing special in it a t all, and i couldn't get past tha horrible structure
vote=rebull, for punches,structure, opener and closer

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retuen tha favor on either one of tha battles in my sigg

thanks for the feed back and votes...up up up.....

Voted For: Red Bull

Vote red bull


its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic
kids fuckin drastic, only action he gets is from his avitars graffic
That right there killed it


my mind convinced for acepting u'r stupied heres the consequence
punch u in the cheat so hard forensic gotta dust ya spine for prints *ouch*
Not really feelin it

ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off
This was ok could have been said better
*HA*
my verse i'll have ya "not lookin to drop" like good boxser with large names
i'll put ya bars 2 ashame w/ viscious shot that'll have ya trying to "deal with faults" like "retarted card games"
Strecthed and pretty much weak and didnt really c the point in it

u couldnt spit ill so it time u get off my nuts
plus u couldnt spit fire if ya verse was attached to a ciggertte butt's

That was horrible

No beef
BulL Killed it

Voted For: Red Bull

i think red bull got some skill best lines from him

your a bitch made vermon, when you see my name your worryin, gettin nervous
i'll leave you to fry like a jew in the furnace screamin "please don't burn us"

its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic

hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets

i think he had better flow an punchs his word play was good structure of his verse was good overall his verse was better

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your such a bitch intensify, give it up, you lost, your a fuckin herb, i merked you, your not gonna win, i've koed you like 10 times, fuck, your a bitch....up up again, so ican win again leave good feedback or this bitch will get it dq'd again cause hes a fuckin ball sac loving queer

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Voted For: intensify effect

I.E. yook it
liked da wordplay nice punches
kinda stretched structure but worked
overall good shit


Red Bull
ur lines were stretched no real punches
nice flow but pretty basic it was ok dough
good try

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