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CarsonJetX2 vs intensify effect
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CarsonJetX2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 11:35 AM.
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 11:50 AM.
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Its sad, you rap for the respect...an I merk for laughs-
I mean come on...Effects bar's look more like paragraphs Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit.... And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's I Spit welt's to ur spine...fold back, an ruin your posture.. Your whole"violent type"sucks. There's not one'vet'in your roster So if you wanted closure, Intensify....you can feel it 5-0... Cus the only way u got 7 wins'is cus you"blue'like ur glow Another Herb tryna fuk wit Jet-scrypts...because you felt neglected End it...call phorensic's...this kid's jus a wana-bee pyrotechnik.... |
u better get in the "car-son N-jet" cuz u'l get dispose from this relevance
N even if i tossed "Einteins remains" on u'r text u'r verse still wouldnt contain intelligence i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS im attacking with missle, unleasing automatic spits like blastin a pistol fuck, N ya audios shit.... i done herd better tunes with a fucking dog-whistle *ha * (its better if we hear noting) carson ya audios fell out, getting in ya bones... throw ya nerves out cuz my punches leave u "ripped N cut" worse then a cardio workout my hits come with percicion, ya punches strain from collision u wanna "blast-for-me? (blasphemy) not befor i Change u'r religion BITCH!!! BANG-BANG-EARLY.... |
Voted For: CarsonJetX2
wow......fuckin solid drop here...one sided for sure CarsonJet - ...wow....man that was so dope, wicked punches, amazing flow, perfect strucutre, solid punches...personals everything just came together dope 9/10 intensify effect - ...not bad, but not even close to as good as carons....structures wack, flow is allright, wordplay is pretty good, punches and personals aren't bad....7/10 v/carson Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
please drop an honest vote on this battle, since i have dropped one on yours...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150254 |
^^^ i just battle u like 20 min befor i battle carsonjet.......
that wont count........ HATE vote..... |
Voted For: intensify effect
good battle punches- tie personals- X2 multis- effect metas- effect word play- effect flow- X2 Effect nice personals and metas. Work on flow though. kinda fell off some times. X2 good verse, but you didn't have the metas, multis, or word play as good as effect. X2: "Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit.... And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's" nice personal. Effect: "i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS" im from detroit so that line is great. good meta punch. v/effect Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin
"won't count" giggle's..... |
Voted For: CarsonJetX2
Aight, I Dont Like Either Of Ya'll... But Carson Got This... Nice Personals On His Part... His Line Were Direct, Short An Sweet, Nice Drop From Carson... Effect, Ya Flow Was Aight, Few Lines We're Strectched So I Lost Intrest In The Lines At Some Parts Nice Finisher, But Carson Just Got This... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: intensify effect
good battle both of you punches:intensity structure:carson personals:carson word play:intensity opeaner: itensify i had to go in deep to find a winner but thats what it rakes in good battles drop an honest vote here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148857 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
Wow...you suck...
Your punches are so simple...and ya structure is dumb ugly. and then you said some bullshit after your line...wtf were you doing. PS: Dont take my 'EARLY' line no mo' |
He Bit a line off you?
If he did....link me to the proof -1 |
This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2
sorry bro but i gotta say that carson had the win all thorugh the whole verse had it with better personals and punches
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hahahaha........ he means... my endings fool....... which is MINES all u gotta do is ask anyone i've been saying it..... BANG-BANG-EARLY YA HERD!!! upp'in for more votes..... |
How you can say fool after this is beyond me.
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Voted For: intensify effect
Its sad, you rap for the respect...an I merk for laughs- I mean come on...Effects bar's look more like paragraphs ^^ok opener,played concept though...7/10 Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit.... And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's ^^7/10...good personal but worded wierd"uncoordinated"? I Spit welt's to ur spine...fold back, an ruin your posture.. Your whole"violent type"sucks. There's not one'vet'in your roster ^^ehh,ok..6/10..diss your opponent So if you wanted closure, Intensify....you can feel it 5-0... Cus the only way u got 7 wins'is cus you"blue'like ur glow ^^ok personal..6.5/10 Another Herb tryna fuk wit Jet-scrypts...because you felt neglected End it...call phorensic's...this kid's jus a wana-bee pyrotechnik.... ^^weak closer,but flowed well...6/10 overall 32.5/50....personal were ok but your originality n creativity with ya punches lacked some,flow was good though.. u better get in the "car-son N-jet" cuz u'l get dispose from this relevance N even if i tossed "Einteins remains" on u'r text u'r verse still wouldnt contain intelligence ^^ok name play,played concept..7.5/10 i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS ^^was'nt feelin it much,6/10 im attacking with missle, unleasing automatic spits like blastin a pistol fuck, N ya audios shit.... i done herd better tunes with a fucking dog-whistle *ha * (its better if we hear noting) ^^good line,nice personal,8/10 carson ya audios fell out, getting in ya bones... throw ya nerves out cuz my punches leave u "ripped N cut" worse then a cardio workout ^^ok...6/10 my hits come with percicion, ya punches strain from collision u wanna "blast-for-me? (blasphemy) not befor i Change u'r religion BITCH!!! BANG-BANG-EARLY.... ^^ok closer 6/10 overall 33.5/50,ok verse personals were decent,more originality with punches,flow was there,good word/nameplay. aight this was close but from punches carson you jus lacked a lil,structure n flow were fine but nothin you used as a punch was'nt played,meta's on both verses were weak,ie,again some of your punches were based on played concepts,flow was there n all,your closer had decnt wordplay but was a weak closer....overall i gave my vote to ie for slightly more creative n harder hitting punches.... |
ok lets get a few more votes in this................
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This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2
good battle. wen i com bak ill vote
ill up it 4 u though |
uppin this.
I can't believe you got two votes taken away.... I mean....WOW....I killed you lil boy..... If you win this.....BY poll's....There's summin wrong wit the system. -1 |
Voted For: intensify effect
i think that carson took it, he had positively better stracture and flow, the word selection was also quite over intensify's. vote honest on my battle PEACE. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
sorry wrong name i ment intensify ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^6
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Voted For: CarsonJetX2
ok this is kinda close but carson gots 10/10 on punches and a 10/10 on his structure and he has 10/10 on his rhyming so he got a perfect on dis 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
haha, on the jock a little to much u think he got a perfect 10.....
haha thats crazy.... |
Voted For: CarsonJetX2
i.e.- na. punches were poo and im tired of u tryin to convince people that the line was hot by typing *ha* and *lol* after ya shit...stop it! structure=off wordplay=nah metas=weak....keep elevatin.....3/10 carson- so youve merged back in to text huh? anywayz your punches were hard as fuck, i reallllly liked that one bout the tits....lmao! personals were on point everything was just good this time around...8/10 nobody get this shit takin off, this is plenty of feedback. i summarized and gave tips. rtf....;) |
This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2
lol both of you are wack and intensify won:) but lol wack
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Voted For: CarsonJetX2
Carson: Its sad, you rap for the respect...an I merk for laughs- I mean come on...Effects bar's look more like paragraphs nice personal and it is true 7/10 Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit.... And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's personal again and connected 6/10 I Spit welt's to ur spine...fold back, an ruin your posture.. Your whole"violent type"sucks. There's not one'vet'in your roster nice again 7/10 So if you wanted closure, Intensify....you can feel it 5-0... Cus the only way u got 7 wins'is cus you"blue'like ur glow played personal/punch 5/10 Another Herb tryna fuk wit Jet-scrypts...because you felt neglected End it...call phorensic's...this kid's jus a wana-bee pyrotechnik.... nice line and complex 7/10 intensify: u better get in the "car-son N-jet" cuz u'l get dispose from this relevance N even if i tossed "Einteins remains" on u'r text u'r verse still wouldnt contain intelligence it was okay but einstein lines are played as fuck 6.5/10 i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS another played line again 5.5/10 im attacking with missle, unleasing automatic spits like blastin a pistol fuck, N ya audios shit.... i done herd better tunes with a fucking dog-whistle weak this was played aswell 5/10 carson ya audios fell out, getting in ya bones... throw ya nerves out cuz my punches leave u "ripped N cut" worse then a cardio workout ass line 3/10 my hits come with percicion, ya punches strain from collision u wanna "blast-for-me? not befor i Change u'r religion another played one wtf 2/10 vote: carson check averages |
See waht happens when vet's vote...
Hmm... Uppin. even tho it's 5-1 when Strobe fixes shit. Let's close it before that. LOL. |
upp'in this battle
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UPPIN. keep erasing vote's ;)
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Voted For: CarsonJetX2
this was a masscre.... carson i like ur text u should do it more often puncehs- carson flow carson really one sided... maybe intensity for multis... but one sided as hell.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
this fag....
upp'in this joint N explain ya vote or it wont count... |
Story of your life.
just understand you lost. and let it happen. UPPIN> |
Umn yeh...U suck...UPPIN ;)......
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UPPIN. Lets Close this No?
3-1. In reality it's like 12-4. UPPIN |
what the hell?? u aint get u'r L'ost already????
upp'in |
This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2
no hate i know carson will bitch if i vote but i really think intensify owned him badly you verse was ok but he merked you badly with puches wordplay and personals and his opener was dope
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Thats why you think your dope.
And go ahead and vote as empire. |
This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2
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