plustwo vs street poet
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

ok make it 30 mins after check in aight...

good luck :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-21-04 at 03:37 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

plustwo has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 03:40 PM.

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 03:46 PM.

people know that plustwo is metamorphically insane
my punchlines are like a gun, they aim straight for ya brain
in one end and out the other its easy as me beating you
im picking up the pieces, youve already been eaten and chewed
you get stomped on worse than chewing gum sticking to your shoe
you hold the record for being a chump i hold the street blues
popping pills is your hobby i hope one day you overdose and die
im holding a piece, cuh cuh bang! noe say goodbye.

IF U DONT GET DA PERSONALS DONT SAY NOTHIN NOR VOTE


Yo u think like yo sig u'll fight anotha day,,,, bitch how u going to say dat when ur going to die today and i'll put yo ass in an casket with an dissectable head//////

YO ur in debt so pay up,,,,,what dont act crazy i'll put 12 through yo chest and put yo body in an dumbster like brenda'z baby (whoA)

Ill "hit you up" puttin you in a "ICU hospital bed" while your "about to flat line"//
my "punches" will "hit" you in "your jaw so hard" your "teeth and your gums will no longer align"//

Ill "split your wig" then "divide" it among "mathematicians" who wanna become "professors"//
Ill "chop your body" into "traces of pieces", then "own you"...you "address" me as you "possessor”// (someone who owns somethin)

last bar

plus2u thnk u came at me with 100% but i'll take da machette and cutt u in half so u worth 50%
nigga i'll take yo soul before i take yo death,,,,,,i know why u call yo self da grim reaper becuz u be grippin and reapin yo dick

~peace~

holy shit!!!!!!!! doen think i got any chance wit day one that was a hella hot verse.

Voted For: Street poet

I DEF THINK STREET GOT THIS HE CAME ALOT HARDER N HAD MORE TA SAY.HIS FLOW WAS NICE N HAD SUM KILLIN VOCAB IN THERE. HIS PUNCHES N PERSONALS WERE SWEET SO...
VOTE=STREET

yo let me get mindz kollide to look at dis shit dey kick me out cause of no personals and wat dats personal

This was feedback posted for Street poet
 

YOU'RE A FUCKIN' BITER!!! BITER BITER BITER!!! Cassidy vs. Freeway round 2, the "brenda's baby" line was Cass' closer. Goddamn you're a BITER!

Wtf What Da Fuck U Talkin About....................

I Didnt Bite It Dat Shit Was From My Head Omg~!

Sure, whatever you say...
"If I pass you base and you spend my gravy
Then I ask for my paper and you pretend you crazy
I'll put 10 in ya avy and pretend you pay me
Leave you stuffed in the dumpster like Brenda's baby"
Sorry, you said 12, maybe I was wrong...

Voted For: Street poet

merkin

punches- street
personals- street
multis- street
metas- street
word play- street
flow- street

Street u merked him. U got everythin and good to see u use personals. keep elevatin so u can take everyone down.

+2 you have come a long way. just keep elevatin cuz u r gettin better, use personals too. not just punches and self glorifyin lines.

Street:
"YO ur in debt so pay up,,,,,what dont act crazy i'll put 12 through yo chest and put yo body in an dumbster like brenda'z baby (whoA)" ouch good punch.

+2:
"in one end and out the other its easy as me beating you
im picking up the pieces, youve already been eaten and chewed" decent punch.

v/street

This was feedback posted for Street poet
 

Ill "chop your body" into "traces of pieces", then "own you"...you "address" me as you "possessor”// (someone who owns somethin)


there is not a doubt in my mind i have seen that before...

Voted For: Street poet

street poet gets my vote,
his structure was solid
had good ass multis
and his personals would make +2;s gums and teth do that

Voted For: plustwo

plustwo gets this for a tight flow and gd structure...he had decent multies and harder punches...his wordplay was good too(7/10)..street poet ur verse wasnt flowing...and ur rhymes were placed a lil outta track..u just gatta keep ur lines in oder like ur opponent's (plustwo)..and ur verse will flow better...u had punches and gd wordplay too,but plustwo gets this vote for coming up with a well structured vote with a tight flow...

yoo hit my battle with intensify effect(sig)....and please drop an honest vote like i did in herre...thank you.

aWTF U HIGH OR SOMTHIN I WAYYY BETTA VERSE DEN DAT FOOL~?

Voted For: Street poet

THIS WAS A EASY WIIN STREET POET PERSONALS WAS FIRE, THA STRUCTURE WAS KOO NICE PUNCHES I LIKE THA FLOW..

PLUTSO URS WAS OK HAD SOME METAS NO REAL PUNCHES YA STRUCTURE WAS KOO BUT HAVE SOME HARDER PNCHES AND DISSES ELIVATE HOMMIE

Voted For: Street poet

weak battle
plus two
yu had simple and basic lines,ur flow was okay but not great,ur structure was also decent,i didnt really see any personals so yeah,you had a okay opener and closer

street poet
you also had an okay flow but ugly structure man,ur punches were kinda weak but decent mayne...but you win this based on personals you had personal he didnt...overall ive seen you do better but you get this...

v/street poet