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Adam 09-18-04 05:54 PM

Red Bull vs physicist
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 06:24 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 09-18-04 05:55 PM

physicist has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 05:55 PM.

physicist 09-18-04 05:58 PM

I got the same nick name but my name came from humping your mom
making her bleed pounding her like a bull so saying my name was hun
wasnt well suited. u recruted me which leads to your defeat
i know all your shit your nothing but a repeat same shit
rapped back to back.
dissen the white race calling guys limp that shits
older then the word pimp. and ragging on the jews dude "please dont burn us"
u need to stop stealing old jokes that shit disgusts us
and get somethen new.
now that i put u in your grave u can rock your pink with tupac and suck each others dinks
thinking u rock.

System 09-18-04 06:21 PM

Red Bull has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 06:21 PM.

Adam 09-18-04 06:29 PM

this "physicist" ain't no lyricist, he's just a bitch
the tit would rather blow a kiss then clench a fist

this cat dropped his verse in 2 minutes, so i know he prewrote em
only way he gets physical, is when its just him and his scrotem

Your broke, a joke, can't rap an still think your the best
With the ladies your like a stock market crash, they lost interest

no avitar, record, and only one post, your twisted
your more unknown then a rapper thats never existed

Adam 09-18-04 06:53 PM

word.....up...

Compose 09-18-04 06:54 PM

Voted For: Red Bull

flow-red bull, a lot easier to read and syllables matched good, flow was way better then physicist

punches/personals-red bull, a lot better punches and they landed, physicist i guess tried but they werent good at all or atleast on a level that red bulls was on

creativity and vocab-red bull again won this, more creative lines and vocabulary was better then physicist, physicist had not so good vocab, sounded elementary

multies-red bull definately,psysicist had none or not good enough to be noticed, red bull had them in almost every line

not hatin, red bull won this honest votes yall uppin this..
peace

Dirty Nigga 09-18-04 07:59 PM

Voted For: Red Bull

aiiight

redbull got this, even tho his verse was shoter, it was much more to the point, better punches an structure...
maybe could elevate ya vocab redbull, u definately got away with punches n metas, nice drop...

physocist, ya flow was okay, you'd get alot more propps if you improved structre...

tooke me twice to read ya verse n find the rhymes, but when i did they was aight, just improve ya structre n punches, metas an so on will imrove as time goes on (no hate)

return the fave in my sig ya'll

p e a c e

headgames 09-18-04 10:40 PM

This was feedback posted for Red Bull
 
red bull won this

Sik Wit It 09-19-04 12:25 AM

Voted For: Red Bull

Red Bull-punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

physicist-yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..


Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Adam 09-19-04 01:12 AM

...werd......upppin............................... ........

Hate chew 09-19-04 01:23 AM

Voted For: Red Bull

redbull took this one .better punche's .. shit made more sense..opener's and closing hit 10 time's more harder.. just a all round tighter drop ..........pz.

Adam 09-19-04 01:48 AM

up..

Spektikul 09-19-04 02:05 AM

Voted For: Red Bull

Close battle, gunna be tough decideing a winner...

Red Bull: overall - 8.5/10

Punches - Sick
Personals - Where you won it
Vocab - Alright
Structure - Excellent

Physicist: Overall - 3/10

Punches - Wack
Personals - good effort but weak
Structure - All over the place
vocab - haha...

No beef boys, phys...first battle good effort, eleavation is needed. Red just came out today to win and he got the job done. Peace

Adam 09-19-04 09:52 AM

leave proper feed, i hate it when votes get dq'ed...

Abraxas 09-19-04 10:11 AM

Voted For: Red Bull

Red: damn that was good i underestimated you for a sec ya best line was
no avitar, record, and only one post, your twisted
your more unknown then a rapper thats never existed
nice punch you had some good punches ya strucutre is messed up a lil though the bars flowed well with each other

Pycisit: too strecthed no good punches ya flow was bad and y structre was not goos either

Vote: red


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