ella vs Stephen Elwood
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines.
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-21-04 at 07:43 PM

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Stephen Elwood has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 07:44 PM.

ella has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 07:44 PM.

Aint knowone feelin' your effect, But man i dont really need em,
Cause E dont want it with me,Cause i put the 2 L's between em,
Cause you come piss poor, Im a nice guy still,
I'll knock your lights out, now you can afford your electric bill,
No name bitch, Only ever coming whack and then....,
You winning? Impossible, like RV and original merging bak again,
Cause im talking E-Style, when your just plain obsessed,
I'll rip your custom title... now your really Fect (think)
Am taking his title, Taking his head and bout to spin it,
When i drop you in hour battle... Like 60 minuites...


dont get it dont vote.. pretty self explanatory...

upp for ella....

Voted For: ella

ella-punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Elwood-yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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Voted For: Stephen Elwood

id condemn you a pink slip, but I don’t think newbs can retire.
claimed a 70% chance to beat insane, then got down sized by empire.*
1., links are so fuckin gay and played in battles, and this wasnt really awe-inspiring anyway

your not a comic, it’ll take God's help to knock out shapelle.
you relate to true artist, cause you’re a college drop out as well.
I dont get it, :(


like cops in a cell, I’ve got the system appalled to its purpose.
like global gravity, its funny how your elevation will fall to the surface.
elevation lines are played. . . .

I desperately needed a win, so it was hard to pass up your call.
gives himself the max to post, like claustrophobics using retarded stalls.*
best bar in your verse, but, its wack, because you had to explain it.

your audio fell under, cuz your voice is like someone distorted a sound.
but your not one to quit, cuz puberty's always easier the fourth time around.
ok.


Aint knowone feelin' your effect, But man i dont really need em,
Cause E dont want it with me,Cause i put the 2 L's between em,
this was certified gangsta

Cause you come piss poor, Im a nice guy still,
I'll knock your lights out, now you can afford your electric bill,
i get the concept, but it wasnt worded right.

No name bitch, Only ever coming whack and then....,
You winning? Impossible, like RV and original merging bak again,
played.

Cause im talking E-Style, when your just plain obsessed,
I'll rip your custom title... now your really Fect (think)
i thought it, and you're an idiot for this.ROFL

Am taking his title, Taking his head and bout to spin it,
When i drop you in hour battle... Like 60 minuites...
Dope concept, but played wordplay.
anyway, i will have to give this shit to my main main main mans Elwood.
His verse was overall more witty than Ella.
But, aiyo, Ella, you got some skill, and with some elevation you'll be dope.
Come try out for E-Style, click the link in my sig.

uppin for some real votes.

Voted For: Stephen Elwood

Ok.....I actually didn't expect this one to be that close, but here it goes....

id condemn you a pink slip, but I don’t think newbs can retire.
claimed a 70% chance to beat insane, then got down sized by empire.*
Honestly....I really don't feel like checking a link
your not a comic, it’ll take God's help to knock out shapelle.
you relate to true artist, cause you’re a college drop out as well.
Booooo.....this was pretty gay, honestly
like cops in a cell, I’ve got the system appalled to its purpose.
like global gravity, its funny how your elevation will fall to the surface.
Ummm....is it just me, or is this not even really a diss?
I desperately needed a win, so it was hard to pass up your call.
gives himself the max to post, like claustrophobics using retarded stalls.*
What does "max to post" have to do with claustrophobics shitting?....poorly used punch here
your audio fell under, cuz your voice is like someone distorted a sound.
but your not one to quit, cuz puberty's always easier the fourth time around.
Are you serious?


Aint knowone feelin' your effect, But man i dont really need em,
Cause E dont want it with me,Cause i put the 2 L's between em,
Nice spelling jackass.....would have been better if his name ended with e too...
Cause you come piss poor, Im a nice guy still,
I'll knock your lights out, now you can afford your electric bill,
LMAO.....I don't know why, but this was definately the best punch in the battle :thumbup:
No name bitch, Only ever coming whack and then....,
You winning? Impossible, like RV and original merging bak again,
ehhh.....not really
Cause im talking E-Style, when your just plain obsessed,
I'll rip your custom title... now your really Fect (think)
Not really feeling this one either
Am taking his title, Taking his head and bout to spin it,
When i drop you in hour battle... Like 60 minuites...
I liked the wordplay in this one. I thought it was horrible at first until I looked at it right.

Basically, Stephen had two nice lines while ella had none...

Vote - Stephen Elwood

This was feedback posted for Stephen Elwood
 

Bang Bang!
Estyle is gangsta as fuck!
Cant fuck with us.
Opener was ill dunny.
Just peepin the polls

Voted For: ella

ella came harder he had better punches and wordplay didnt quiet see any personals really better vocab shit was tight but you structure didnt quiet work theres no periods in songs or freestyle mayn

altho stephen was good but this battle went to ella big ups both yall

punches=ella
vocab=ella
wordplay=ella
structure=stephon
overall ella got it

good lord.

Voted For: ella

wow

this was a close battle....sike

ella took this and buried it

S.E. had WAY too much self glory
you can say that against anybody
need personals and not bragging about yoself
and gun rap don't work in battles unless
they are TRULR off the top of ur head in a live battle

Ella

nice flow and strcuture
punches were nice
but that 2nd line insulted empire more then him
but still good and original
with personals

you win

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150389

return the favor please

Voted For: ella

Aight Imma Give This One To Ella Basically Cause Had Better Punches And Vocab Was Definatly More Efficient.

Structure: Would Have To Give It To Ella. Close But, Stephen,
Some Of Ya Lines were "Choppy".

Punches And Personals: Ella Again. Stephen Some Of Ya Punches Hit While Others Were A Lil Weak. I Liked The RV One. Try To Be A Lil More Creative With Ya Punches.
Ella I Liked Ya Personal In The Opening Bar. Hit Hard. Ya Second Last Bar Was Dope Too (For Those Who Actually Understood It.. Lol) And Ya Closer Was Ill.. Nice Job Funny Too.

I Give this To Ella Coz Of Ya Vocab, Punches. And Stephen Didn't Have Any Personals While Ella's. Also I Found Ellas Humerous. Stephen, The Only Punch That Stood Out Was The RV One. Apart From That Nothin Really Hit.

Vote: Ella

Voted For: ella

dis battle was one sided (no hate), i think ella won dis one, because ella had betta punches and flo, not to mention structure
v/ella

Voted For: ella

punches-ella
stukta-tie
pers-none
best-ella
ella won dis 1
pz