ContagiousVenomz vs Proverse
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-21-04 at 09:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 09:45 PM.

ContagiousVenomz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 09:45 PM.

Bitch, im serious and psychologically delirious/
leave you subject to infections like eatin bitches on their period//

Look,

Picture your moms at ur funeral thatz a closed casket/
2 days later, i Fed-Ex your remains in a clothes basket/
rotten and infested by a congregation of maggots/
open ur mental with cookin' utensils, cuz thatz what we do to faggots/
your rhymes resemble ur grandma's tits 'cause they over-used, droopin' and saggin"/
How da fuck were you conceived? ur moms must've licked the semen from the napkin/
Bitch!
The Lyncher come to distribute continuous lyrical pain/
superior lyrical verses deteriorate your skull, look like Godzilla stepped on ur brains/
im insane/ consume my supper while watchin' ur plasma drain/
envision your head and shoulders seperated by a window pane//

I was lyricsizing while you was spinnin' bottles and playin footsy/
1 chick in your whole clique but all you niggas pussy/
5 dicks and a pretty tushy// (LaLa) i know she aint fuck 'em all/
so who's the Fowl Mouf and who's the ODD BALL?//
Get it? dont fuck wit it/
you lyrical unintelligent, couldnt bust a egg with an iron skillet/
Ill make u swallow gasoline and send a lit match to go and get it/
you must've left your lyrics in the same spot u shitted/

Ultmate verbal terminology burns this bitch in the third degree/
Bitch if you were born with 10 dicks you still couldnt fuck with me/
this coward's yellow like urine residue on toilet seats/
Dusty Blunted get smoked with superior lyrical heat/
This bitch lost the battle with his penis when he tried to beat his meat//

i went easy on this one..don't feel to god about that rhyme

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

HAHA NICE BATTLE BUT I THINK CV WON CUS HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES THA FLOW WAS A LIL OFF BCUS THA PEPL HE WAS SAYIN(LALA) WHO THAHELL IS THAT BUT NO HATE..
HE HAD GOOD MULTIS AND I LIKED IT

PV URS WAS KOO 2 BUT I THINK CV CAME A LIL HARDER YA STRUCTURE WAS BETTER THO

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yo mayn you sure you aint recycle or bite?

you spit ALL that in 3 minutes

unless you got supa hands that seems impossible

uppin this shit
don't sleep on this
i'm 100%sure you DR'D man

and i aint persuaying cuz they can't read my post untill
the vote

so jus admit you cheated and i won't get you banned :)

i work for adz, a computer place, where i type all day..i didn't bite or recylce, stop being a bitch, because mine was better...

actually you had no personals at ALL

you coulda used that shit against any rapper here

so THAT'S why i susect you of biting or recycling

boy u not even in my league don't even play

:)

im new to the rappin sites, my friend made this name for me..yo stop gurlin, and in your league, my name is more complex than your whole rhyme book..

yo don't sleep on this battle, lets get some votes

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

ContagiousVenom won this battle easily...spit harder punches, and came right at proverse...flow was there, but what stood out were all those punches...nice wordplay and metas as well...Proverse you didnt really have alot of punches in your verse, and the punches you did have were pretty weak...so, overalll, C.V takes this battle

This was feedback posted for ContagiousVenomz
 

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6 he had to use his own verse i know u from kali homie dis is da CAPTIAL E

No duh, im from kali, i say that on my profile, and i wouldn't use that on kali, and when you can show me where i used it only kali, then do so, if not shut up bitch, VOTES

uppin this shit

mayn soon as some real rap fans vote....

mayn you said momma jokes and shit...

uppin

Voted For: ProVerse

wow there is mad d/ring goin on here...
my vote goes easily to proverse

Proverse
you have one win...wow...it still for you no trouble to lose
because you're named after something that makes others improve
pretty decent opener
but still you prove elevation isn't waiting,only ink wasting
your rank want even attempt a move,liked UHAUL has lost there placement
Decent
you "draw" losses like your one win has missplaced a "tracing"
even your VENOM isn't sick, it barely phases to create a sensation
Lol
i'm sure it crossed your mind..."man, i believe that rap isn't for me"
I predict you verse has the worst...probably used self glory
you bite off other sites...you CROOKED like lyrics wih braces,
double sides to you, which explains your two higher casing (C-V-)
LOl.. good shyt ..


.::PV is finished::.

Cot
I know you fukin bit from some where that vers was long as hell and it only took you like 5 minutes to write it??
Hell naw... Punchline..,,,None! .. personals....None..Multies..played as helll an......all your lines were stretched ass hell..

overall vote-proverse

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

CONTAGIOUS
he got my vote cuzz he came harder with his punches and he had some good vocab nice structure both yall had a nice structure but i gotta got with CONTAGIOUS cuzz he came harder

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^^

unexplained

but thanx for voting though
you seem like you know rap so i respect your vote

uppin for more

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

vote to contagouis, becuase he had the chekkiest flow and mean azz punches.

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^unexplained

damn I hope I get ome vets who understand my punches
like Joka


uppin

This was feedback posted for ProVerse
 

checkin this shit out

can we get some votes in here, finsh this battle off

uppin

uppin for votes please.....................

yo uppin this battle

Voted For: ProVerse

Yeah well, this battle was aiight, but no doubt the votes gotta go to proverse. venom, you had good rhymes, but they wernt nessecarily good battle rhymes.. Especially when you started off with self glorification.. The rest was mainly jus tryin to think of dirty shit but no real personals at all..

Pro, you got some aiight rhymes, you got pretty good flow too.. I dont really have any problems with your verse, just keep elevating and learn to use some wordplay maybe..

Vote- ProVerse.
Peace..

uppin for

constructive critisism
discussing the objectives of
the musical involved practising
technique

i mean vote on this battle

peace

uppin yizzet agizzain

just vittote so I can wizzin lol

please vote

Uppin Puhhhlllleeeeease

Voted For: ProVerse

Pretty weak battle.....but proverse just takes it, neither really had any quality punches but ur structure and flow took this for ya, contagious i wasn't feelin ya structure at all it ruined ya flow in places....so im givin it to pro...

peace

v/pro

can you hit up this battle wiv an honest vote...thanx
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=152023

uppin for some

critisism on my
rap comparisin
competition

please

This was feedback posted for ProVerse
 

Nice Drop.... Just Checkin How Use Goin... Good Luck To The Both Of U

Voted For: ProVerse

lol this was a funny battle one the other side of proverse he had like to mayny lines haha just makes me laugh out loud:laugh: heres what ima say:

Proverse:
k clearly he KOed you lol he had a lil vocab and he had some wordplay and a lil better punches cleary played proverse worked this guy he also was startin on stucutre kinda and he flowed

ContagiousVenomz:
k you have a real mixed verse try and work on all yer shit elvation elavation elavation also i still need it but not as much as you do im almost a vet haha im 14 to haha but anyway ya you cleary got worked by stucture and every thing i said on proverses part, and the only thing you had was chilish wordplay:laugh:

VOTE: ProVerse

return the favour in my battle verses mike hawk try to explain it to like i did:D peace
~1~

uppin for some votes pleeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeee

uppin for some votes
please

I will return the favor IMMEDIATLEY

please

uppin for some votes PUHLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEE

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

WHOOOOA!!!! Nice shit hmmm Bla yer shit whack and self applauded don't jock yaself let us (tha voters do that 4 u).
C had more punchlines better punchlines a better structure and way more creative lines as well Bla i took yer critism and so now i'm uppin my skillz u need to take ya own advice kuz u got raped kuz

Voted For: ProVerse

punches-bla
stukture-bla
pers-bla
best-bla
b.l.a wins
plz return the fav on battlin in da sig
pz