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$ik Wit It™ vs ella
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10 Lines [5 Barz] No D/R Votes No Hate Votes No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-19-04 at 10:16 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
$ik Wit It™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 10:19 PM.
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ella has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 10:25 PM.
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We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day …
U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away… Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists… Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz… Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz… Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz… This kid a Hero? Shit he aint Fly and he even has a Torn Cape… And I hit punches in his Face like Graphical Porn Tapes… Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse … This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse… |
Ok umm...
calls me out, n unlike half this site i dont make an eternal excuse. i had no idea you cats were still around, after the open mic by verbal abuse. im ferdal with truth, and deadly as im servin him fonts. and all Ai said was: Quote:
i better go back and retake social studies as this months elective. cause i was unaware that ppl who duck so often, can be so much respected. fuck effective, all together you need to quit spits. hows this bitch avoiding to slit wrists when hes just a check on a hit list. your only dope with a bong, and its too late to forfit this. ellas missed it, cause im still wondering what it is that your sick with?[/FONT] |
Voted For: ella
hot battle punches- tie personals- ella multis- $ik metas- $ik word play- $ik flow- ella Ella u won wit the personals. $ik dang i wanna vote for ya but ella got it wit the personals. so put in personals. Ella: "calls me out, n unlike half this site i dont make an eternal excuse. i had no idea you cats were still around, after the open mic by verbal abuse." nice personal $ik: "This kid a Hero? Shit he aint Fly and he even has a Torn Cape… And I hit punches in his Face like Graphical Porn Tapes…" v/ella (but barely) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
how is my vote inadequate? i explained everythin and said how they could be better
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Voted For: ella
i liked tha rhyme scheme i caught on to it pretty fast, i didn't understand what tha quote was suppose to do but u were the better rapper today. Yer internal rhyme scheme is nice. Why: Ella won because he/she had more punchlines and made more since towards a battle i thought that sik wit it was nice but more literature has to be used towards battlin than jus rhymin both of yall were str8 tho |
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Voted For: ella
Damn, nice battle Sik: You've verse was nice, but it wasn't enough. First of all, I'm pretty sure ella is a she, not a he. You had multis and stuff, but they were kinda filler, you didn't have that strong punches. Ella: You straight up ripped it with the personals. This verse was very, very nice. You absolutley handed him his ass with the punches. Stay Up |
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^like i care?..but i lost this one..wasnt thinkin str8 anyway up this |
Voted For: ella
ok sik good structure good ass vocab and multis were there a little nice punches and disses couldve been better but good shit here flow was hard to catch but a overall decent spit a 7/10 ella dope ass flow lol dope fucking second bar that was fire lol and the fucking third bar was pure fire too dope shit yo you are fucking dope and i never heard of you ender was fire yo this is a dope fucking verse here good flow great vocab good structure personals punches were hard as fuck damn this was gansta a 10/10 yo i aint never heard of ella i though sik would roost her but damn ella spit fire here and won in all catagorys damn yall return honest votes in my battles |
Voted For: $ik Wit It™
emcee had harder punches than ella ella u only had one-punch line & that was tha Phantom one...ur structure was decent & tha flow kinda lack'd...elevate more $ik..yo shit was aight..structure & flow was good..and you kept landin ella wit yo punches... v/ $ik |
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Voted For: $ik Wit It™
calls me out, n unlike half this site i dont make an eternal excuse. i had no idea you cats were still around, after the open mic by verbal abuse. ^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD OPENER AND A PUNCH im ferdal with truth, and deadly as im servin him fonts. and all Ai said was: Quote: Originally Posted by Phantom something that wack, doesnt even deserve a response. i better go back and retake social studies as this months elective. cause i was unaware that ppl who duck so often, can be so much respected. ^^^^^^^^^^^ OOOO NICE PERSONALS AND A PUNCH NICE fuck effective, all together you need to quit spits. hows this bitch avoiding to slit wrists when hes just a check on a hit list. your only dope with a bong, and its too late to forfit this. ellas missed it, cause im still wondering what it is that your sick with? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE YO GOOD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES ELLA-HAD GOOD PUNCHES&PERSONALS AND FLOW We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day … U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away… Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists… Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz ^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCH HARD PUNCH NICE FLOW Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz… Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz… This kid a Hero? Shit he aint Fly and he even has a Torn Cape… And I hit punches in his Face like Graphical Porn Tapes… Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse … This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse… ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE EMCEE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW VOTE GOES TO EMCEE-CAUSE BASICALLY HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES ELLA-UR GOOD U HAD NICE PUNCHES& PERSONALS BUT DIDNT HIT HARD ENOUGH KEEP IT UP USE HARDER PUNCHES AIGHT~! ~PEACE~ |
Voted For: ella
ella took this, over all a better flow, a few personals and harder hitting punches, some of emcees were ok but not as hard hitting! both were simple but worked well.... nice battle but ella came out on top! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: $ik Wit It™
Emcee: k sik wit it came way ahrder he had stucutre and flow on even like a vets and mine now:) but anyway he hit harder with his punches and wordplay he was also hittin with un common words in his lines witch i liked, he came way harder but hsi vocab was weak coula been bette rwhats with hearse and verse? whats hearse mean lol? Ella: fuckin dope for a newb lol i belive a newb but anyway she or he im gonna say she. she had nice vocab but off on stucutre and wordplay she was played by her one vocabulary is what i felt i dont know about any one else but sik wit it is beoned her. VOTE: Emcee aka. sik wit it return the favour in any of my battles.. |
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Voted For: $ik Wit It™
wow first off hott battle and its obvious that you both are at eachothers throats so ill start my vote... Emcee:Emcee lol Verse: We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day … U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away… Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists… Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz… Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz… Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz… This kid a Hero? Shit he aint Fly and he even has a Torn Cape… And I hit punches in his Face like Graphical Porn Tapes… Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse … This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse… Comments:ok hott shit...straight outta ya ass...lol i have nothin else to comment on... Marks: Wordplay - 7/10 Metas - 8/10 Vocabulary - 7/10 Structure - 8/10 Punches - 8/10 Opener - 6/10 Closer – 7/10 Personals – 6/10 Enjoyment – 7/10 Creativity - 6/10 Overall - 67/100 ----------67% Emcee:ella Verse: Ok umm... calls me out, n unlike half this site i dont make an eternal excuse. i had no idea you cats were still around, after the open mic by verbal abuse. im ferdal with truth, and deadly as im servin him fonts. and all Ai said was: Quote: Originally Posted by Phantom something that wack, doesnt even deserve a response. i better go back and retake social studies as this months elective. cause i was unaware that ppl who duck so often, can be so much respected. fuck effective, all together you need to quit spits. hows this bitch avoiding to slit wrists when hes just a check on a hit list. your only dope with a bong, and its too late to forfit this. ellas missed it, cause im still wondering what it is that your sick with?[/FONT] Comments:man..you really took it to the guy.....nice personals...luved the open mike part and the quote by phantom...i just liked emcees more...no hate Marks: Wordplay - 6/10 Metas - 7/10 Vocabulary - 5/10 Structure - 5/10 Punches - 5/10 Opener - 8/10 Closer – 7/10 Personals – 9/10 Enjoyment – 6/10 Creativity - 7/10 Overall - 63/100 ----------63% |
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Voted For: ella
wow this one was close. ella u had some good punches and vocab.emcee u had some pretty good punches to but when it comes down to it i think ella took this one. check out my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153747 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: $ik Wit It™
pucnhes-swi/emc stukta-ski-emc pers-ski-emc best-ski-emc emc wins dis his verse was much better pz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: $ik Wit It™
pucnhes-swi/emc stukta-ski-emc pers-ski-emc met-ski-emc pers-none mult-none emcee wins his punches actuly landed ella had punches but wasnt as hard as emcees and didnt land probley pz |
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Voted For: $ik Wit It™
We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day … U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away… Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists… Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz… Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz… Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz… This kid a Hero? Shit he aint Fly and he even has a Torn Cape… And I hit punches in his Face like Graphical Porn Tapes… Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse … This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse… ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE MAYNE GOOD FLOW AND DECENT PUNCHES AND PERSONALS LIKED THE CLOSA~! calls me out, n unlike half this site i dont make an eternal excuse. i had no idea you cats were still around, after the open mic by verbal abuse. im ferdal with truth, and deadly as im servin him fonts. and all Ai said was: Quote: Originally Posted by Phantom something that wack, doesnt even deserve a response. i better go back and retake social studies as this months elective. cause i was unaware that ppl who duck so often, can be so much respected. fuck effective, all together you need to quit spits. hows this bitch avoiding to slit wrists when hes just a check on a hit list. your only dope with a bong, and its too late to forfit this. ellas missed it, cause im still wondering what it is that your sick with ^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT NICE VERSE HERE U HAD PERSONALS AND NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD PERSONALS V-SIK WIT IT CAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND GOOD FLOW ELLA- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE PROPS TO YA,,,,,AN FEW MORE LINES U COULD GOT MY VOTE,,,,,,,SIK JUST EDGE IT WITH DA CLOSA NICE BATTLE KEEP DOING YO THANG ELLA ~PEACE~ |
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