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ThaDiplomat 09-19-04 05:24 AM

Quick Witted vs Logikal"Lyrickz
 
Battle Rules:

6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
yall know tha rest

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-19-04 at 05:54 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 09-19-04 05:25 AM

Logikal"Lyrickz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 05:25 AM.

System 09-19-04 05:27 AM

Quick Witted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 05:27 AM.

ThaDiplomat 09-19-04 05:32 AM

Ayo ima damage dis bitch and make it hereditary/I got off wid his sister,his mom and her secretary/
Coz ill excavate into ya arterie/Rip all ya genes and anomoles/
You a minor and im collosal-Fuck killin ya ill reduce u to a fossil/
See,im a lyrical assasin/Me and u aint even clashin/U cant live up to my lyrical fashion/
Nigga dis is my bloodsport/Wont let ya breathe le only givin ya a thought/Im a poacher ur in my jungle/Coz Bitch when u challenge me get ready 2 Rumble

Scenario 09-19-04 05:43 AM

ya lyrickz come weak~ain't nothing in ya verse that's remotely logical *
u adopt ya rhymes~while mine beat u like a father who's not biological

u ain't known kid, u heading for no.3~so go back to hiding in the shadows **
gay marriage supporter, dildo?, vibrator?, dick?~u've probably had those

no talent, style is unknown~like vegetables trying olympic swim events
u come 'cold'~faggot probably done blown on more niggas then 'ac vents'

kid couldn't come fresh~if he was a 'leprichan' showering with 'irish' spring
u never get any props~can't handle rap go get tickets and watch prince sing

u the next victim on my list to get merked~won't show mercy cause ya new to rb ***
go get 'ken' and ya lil car~get beat turn into a bitch with blone hair like 'barbie'


*his name
**his record, bout to be 3 losses
***title under his name

Scenario 09-19-04 05:45 AM

uppin for this

Scenario 09-19-04 08:30 AM

uppin for this battle vote up

..ADLIB.. 09-19-04 09:03 AM

Voted For: Quick Witted

this battle was pretty good shit.

Logikal- verse was alright some decent punches, wordplay was aiight and vocab was pretty good.

Quick Witted- this was a dope drop with good meta4s and punches hit well. personals were there and well written. vocab good. structure good.

Vote - Quick Witted

Scenario 09-21-04 01:17 PM

uppin for this, i'll return honest vote

Mc *MaZe* 09-21-04 03:11 PM

Voted For: Logikal"Lyrickz

im voting for L.L. he had a better flow and a more understandin verse L>L> had harder punches and they connected quick witted had a few punches but they missed L>L> has got my vote

Scenario 09-21-04 03:47 PM

dick ride vote, fucking wack mc, i'll battle u later, uppin for this

Scenario 09-22-04 11:27 PM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Mc *MaZe* 09-23-04 07:18 AM

it is an honnest vote i dont even know anyone on hear and i play str8 u prick u just mad coz u losing and if i could vote again illd vote for logikal"lyrickz agen and do u know y coz i cant stand ppl that dont know how to loose bitch

Scenario 09-23-04 01:12 PM

u talk shit but will see how u back it up later on, uppin for this

Scenario 09-24-04 08:55 AM

i need battles closed people come on, i'll return the honest vote, uppin for this

Adam 09-24-04 09:13 AM

Voted For: Quick Witted

Scenario - good drop, structures good, and has a good flow to it. persoals and punches were also solid. you had a solid opener and a good closer..good vocab through-out
8/10

Logikal"Lyrickz - you had a good verse, and you had good punches and personals but the structure is way off, like it flows, but you really gotta work on your structure...

6.5/10

v/Scenario came a bit harder and had better structure

keen2B 09-24-04 09:26 AM

Voted For: Logikal"Lyrickz

aight both yer off on the rymhe'n styles
logical gets this cause he was slighty better with everything flow,structure,e.t.c
nice ideas though in both of ur spits

Scenario 09-25-04 09:30 AM

uppin for this contest

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-25-04 10:14 AM

Voted For: Quick Witted

Ayo ima damage dis bitch and make it hereditary/I got off wid his sister,his mom and her secretary/
Coz ill excavate into ya arterie/Rip all ya genes and anomoles/
You a minor and im collosal-Fuck killin ya ill reduce u to a fossil/
See,im a lyrical assasin/Me and u aint even clashin/U cant live up to my lyrical fashion/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE SHIT MAYNE U GOOD OPENER AND PUNCHES WAS THROWIN


Nigga dis is my bloodsport/Wont let ya breathe le only givin ya a thought/Im a poacher ur in my jungle/Coz Bitch when u challenge me get ready 2 Rumble
^^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD CLOSA AND GOOD VERSE U HAD PUNCHES AND MULIT'Z AND

ya lyrickz come weak~ain't nothing in ya verse that's remotely logical *
u adopt ya rhymes~while mine beat u like a father who's not biological

u ain't known kid, u heading for no.3~so go back to hiding in the shadows **
gay marriage supporter, dildo?, vibrator?, dick?~u've probably had those

no talent, style is unknown~like vegetables trying olympic swim events
u come 'cold'~faggot probably done blown on more niggas then 'ac vents'
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE U HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES



kid couldn't come fresh~if he was a 'leprichan' showering with 'irish' spring
u never get any props~can't handle rap go get tickets and watch prince sing

u the next victim on my list to get merked~won't show mercy cause ya new to rb ***
go get 'ken' and ya lil car~get beat turn into a bitch with blone hair like 'barbie'

^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD CLOSA U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

YO I GOTS TO GIVE DIS YO QUICK CAUSE HE CAME HARD WITH DEM PERSONALS AND PUNCHES

LOGIKAL KEEP DOING YO THANG U HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW
BUT USE PERSONALS U CAN WIN BATTLES LIKE THAT


MY VOTES GOES TO QUICK CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

~PEACE~

Scenario 09-25-04 05:12 PM

uppin for this shit

Scenario 09-26-04 11:33 AM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Scenario 09-26-04 03:45 PM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Scenario 09-29-04 11:20 AM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Scenario 09-29-04 05:59 PM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

Scenario 09-29-04 09:35 PM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest votes

Scenario 10-01-04 05:15 PM

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

Scenario 10-04-04 08:49 PM

uppin for this people, come on vote

Scenario 10-05-04 08:43 PM

uppin for more votes, let's get this closed people

Scenario 10-07-04 11:22 AM

uppin for this, it's been up forever, let's get some votes

...Nemesis... 10-07-04 11:40 AM

Voted For: Logikal"Lyrickz

alright check it. diplomat u had some pretty good punches and i liked ur flow with the heriditary thing, scenario u had harder punches, but u talked about dildos and stuff to much, u need to step it up on ur vocab. so right here my vote goes to ThaDiplomat.
winner-Tha Diplomat

Terumoto 10-07-04 12:08 PM

Voted For: Quick Witted

scenario took this easy..

dip: you had no structure... not really many punches.. wierd flow.. no wordplay.. not a very good drop at all..

scenario: you came pretty good, i seen better though... that ac vent line was dope.. flow was fine... wordplay good... a pretty good drop

La Cosa Nostra 10-07-04 12:14 PM

Voted For: Quick Witted

Alright, Scenario got this battle. Diplomat had better flow but his structure was all over the place.. And he didnt have the vocab Scenario had.

Scenario, good drop, you used some pretty decent personals and you had good connections and metas. Overall good drop.

Diplomat, you suffered from lack of personals and basically i think you were maining focusing on wriitng about killing him more then dissing him.

No hate, jus truth.
Vote- Scenaio.


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