other prospectiv vs final
 

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Check in by: 09-22-04 at 08:13 AM

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other prospectiv has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 11:17 AM.

Yo this bitch final properly thinks hes the shit, his whole style is properly also bit,
After you check in ya got one day to submit, which means you got 24 hours to make it,
Gonna make a mark on this site, you most definitely aint cus your to wack,
Just watch some proper battles, from the legends, look and take a step back,
To think why the fuck your still rappin, well at least your tryin to, but havin no luck,
Cant think on lines so he just steals them when his brains blocked and hes stuck,
No will want to not battle you, cus your so weak in the punches, and flow,
As you close your eyes at night you will see “other prospectiv” in red and black glow,
Why bother with rap cus even you know that your crap and cant rhyme a simple verb,
This battle Is now over, it was me gainst you, might both be new be but you’ll always be a herb,

final has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 12:40 PM.

i feel it burning inside its about to ignite/
now its accelerating to 400 farenheit/
this guy aint being listened to and maybe not me neither/
but the only way hes being heard is speaking through a speaker/
i got so much fire i could light up all your reefer/
but you wouldnt be hot if you had a portable heater/
you reading this now, your mouth dropped and your shocked/
you should stick to game designing and get off raps cock/
now im done and hopefully i put you in perspective/
cuz the only words u sayin against me is your check-in

you should stick to game designing and get off raps cock/

^profile says hes a game designer

good luck uppin this honest votes peace............

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Voted For: final

this was close but also weak elevate fella's....

flow: final
punches:final
creativeness : final cuz the other guy just seem as if he was talking not raping......

vote: final....

but ya both still need to elevate....

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Voted For: final

I vote for final. Both people were tight but i think final is better. Final said some tight shit that really caught my attention than prospetiv. You both should work a lil harder on your punches but it was tight. No hate. Final i like that speaker line. That was some creative stuff. Holla back

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Voted For: final

final got this one if u ask me, his structure was more understandable, his flow was ok, no metas, mo multis, punches kinda hit, well hit hard enough to win. i saw one good personal. u could elevate all round but ok shit. 5/10


other prospectiv: ya verse was ok if u ask me, wasn't feeling it as much as final's, ya structure kinda threw me off, saw a few ok lines here and there, ok personals, no metas no multi's,
wordplay was simple, u could elevate on an all around bases to.

vote: Final

no hate

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Voted For: other prospectiv

ok battle. final had a good verse he needs to work on his voc and punchlines. some of them were whack. other prospectiv gets my vote for better structure,flow,wordplay and punchlines. No Hate.
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you need work on ur flow man its way off... yo check ma battles...peace...

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Voted For: other prospectiv

u just ripped this nikka d00d u came wayyyyy harder better punches and better flow ur structutre was also better final is a n00b who should go home and sit in his closet

v/other prospectiv


OwNeD?

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stop voting on my battles, the only reason u vote on them is cuz u dont like me, ill battle u anytime, jus shut the fuck up

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