CFAstunna1 vs final
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 08:16 AM

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Iight Nicca Lets Do This Nice And Sweet

CFAstunna1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 08:19 AM.

im tellin u niggaz u dont wanna hear my glock sing the way ur blood was on ur shirt it looked like a miskeen a wear meezan or meja mikasa u keep talkin shit u gonna see my meja
A-Kasa i wear nothin air onez and girbaud wit wite t and a chain wit rolls gold u dont want shit man uz a bitch man wit the ak or 9 u gonna get hit wit man i dont kare no more and ur girl'z still a hore and while im getin richa ur steel gettin poor and dont think takin a shot at me will com painless ill find out were u r and hit u wit the stainless...steel that is wit a laza and shit i aint and one but my girl still say im sik wit it but on the mic im a professa cuz ill have the gun giv u a pop quiz and have ur brainz out like cheez wiz i could rap fast i just chooz not cuz i wanna rip u niggaz as slow az booze rots ayo i got to go so smoke a blut while im in ur mamaz bead........fukin ur ho

final has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 12:35 PM.

with this kids record, all hes gettin is neglected/
not being respected, now hes yearning for attention/
hes not accepted, cuz his rhymes are needing help/
you couldnt STUN a crowd if you had a tazer on your belt/
you claim that your a gangsta and your toatin glocks/
you couldnt be a G if you pac in ya socks/
ima keep elevating until im at the top/
but for you, my advice is to just switch to rock

^pac=2pac but i think thats pretty straight foward

good luck uppin this, no hate honest votes

peace

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Voted For: final

honestly this was hand hard to vote on but look...

flow: final
punches: none
creativeness: CFA
strucsure final

vote: final...

CFA u'r verse sound more like a open mic then a battle....
but u still had some good lines but i wouldnt follow them
brake ya lines up dont make them look like a praragraph cuz that def wont help u but u was more creative N that was about it....

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Voted For: final

My vote goes to final because his structure wasn't fucked up and he had good punches and some OK personals.
Stunna,your verse was pretty much garbage.You had some crappy attempts at wordplay and your punches were very soft-hitting. final,i liked your very last line,the gumour was pretty good in there.Stunna,you should get a new structure,elevate with your wordplay, and get some better punches.

V/final.

aight thanks uppin this more votes get it over with..........

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Voted For: final

not the strongest battle in the battle....

final, ya structure was better, both lacked creativity in ya rhymes, the better vocab was from final an the better strcure came from final so he gets my vote...

return the fave in my sig

p e a c e

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Voted For: final

firstly
CFASTUNNAL
WACK-seriously pathetic.sorry lol
no structure,no flow,no multies.......
u didnt have a single punch or personal u jus through a bunch of words together,half ur shit didnt even make sense,u had no vocab,no wit,no metas.nothin at all........horrible verse....
take a look at ur opponents n set ur shit like that ..elevate.

FINAL
structure was good....
flow was ok....
basically u had a better verse,beta punchesw,stuc,flow,etc....
still say u need to elevate a lot though...
ur best line was the stun a crowd shit,coz u attempted a meta and sum wordplay,all the rest were really jus filler....
u gotsta cum wit metas n wit to make ya punches dope.
u won.but elevate....

hit me up if u want any help wit anythin..

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Voted For: final

just a bit of feed back man, no hate, you are gonna lose this man, exstend you verses, get better flow and increse your vocab man!