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Fiya Spitter vs White_tee
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8-12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-20-04 at 10:50 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Fiya Spitter has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 02:33 PM.
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You like to talk the shit, "Bye, bye, bye", you're all ass
You come as hard as a nigka, that's jackin' off to Lance Bass I mean, you keep on talkin' tall, but you always act a bitch You never do what you say, you're all fart and no shit You callin' me retarted, what the fuck you tryin' to do? Like burgers to Opera, the losses keep on flyin' to you I'll chop you up like Hannibal, you sucky lines are bent And man, I ain't kiddin', cuz I ain't a parents Kid, you made a mistake, and that was goin' up against me Cuz yo verse is as blank.... as a white tee We all kno you suck. That's a pun, you fuckin' hoe What does you crew think about you... like at the quote below gameova119 (1:03:54 PM): ok then he is cut gameova119 (1:04:05 PM): cause i want u to join Genocide, to me on AIM about me joinin' the crew and cuttin' White_Tee. That's word. |
WhiTe_Tee has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 06:42 PM.
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Nigguh You Couldnt Be 'Hot~Moving' To Hell Wearing Sweaters~In~Summer/
C...I...8...U...N...1...L9...just only using Letters And Numbers/ (See I ate u in one line) This nigguh named himself 'fiya spitter' hopin he could spit some 'hot~shit'/ But yo punches couldnt be 'hard hitters' and end my 'game' if ya name was 'LiL Flip'/* Nigguh write your shit, perfect it, if you need to, rehearse it/ Yeah youre not wack.. Only thing that's not ill is your verses/ Now this nigguh is a dork, forget the guns that he 'claims' to hold/ Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/ damn you could 'stitch' up your 'asshole' and your 'shit' still 'wouldnt~be~tight'/ and you 'couldn't see' your way to a win if Sean Paul 'gave~you~the~light'/ Dogg u aint gettin no respect from me like a 'substitute~teacher'/ so im a switch these punchlines wit infared nines..see 'if that a reach ya'/ * Lil Flip sings the song Game Over |
lets get them votes in...
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This was feedback posted for WhiTe_Tee
Fiya Spitter HONESTLY i think ur verese was wack and white_tee is ill i dunnno if he said that but o well....
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uppin ^^
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter
flow-fiya, not as stetched as white tee and easier for read punches/personals-this was close but i gotta go wit fiya, both had a good amount but his hit harder in my opinion, the gimme the light and eleven year old were good punches but fiya spit more that hit, i wasnt feelin that first line u claim to have ate him with creativity and vocab-white_tee,fiya had some creativity but i picked white over this because his punches were creative even though they didnt hit hard enough, vocab ill give to tee also, fiya i didnt notice any intriguing vocab no hate at all both did really well but found fiya to be better in this case, good luck honest vote up this shit yall peace |
LOl very nice.. very nice dick ride indeed
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dick ride? i never spoke to fiya spitter,voted on any of his battles, and straight up dont know him and i dont know u either, dont get pissed cuz u lost 1 vote, take it like a man and stop complaining i dont know both of u so no dick riding from me
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lol @ you kid. dick ridin' lol wow |
lol... any NON herb will know i koed u dogg... dont even pull that bs
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^i got no hate on u and i dont need to gain any so watever, im not dick riding anyone
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lol its cool i dun care... this is the reason why i dont wanna battle in front lines... herbs cant vote for shit
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter
ok, since we all in the same crew, i can vote in this, i think fya~had the better verse here, because of the personals and his punches were original and his words were creative, some spelling and grammar errors but not bad, it was a prety good verse, i liked the line"cus ya verse was as blank as a white tee", and the closing lines were good too, i just think you came harder here, white tee~your verse was good too, nice flow, i liked your closing lines,but the opener wasn't that strong, tho i understand the concept, and what you tried to do, was creative tho as well, good job both |
then just dont battle in front lines if u feel so strongly about it, no need to call anybody a herb just because they voted against u
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Voted For: WhiTe_Tee
White Tee- your verse was aight.....i liked your punches but only some hit hard...but overall they were good...your structure i think you should fix up a little bit...maybe a line or two was long...but overall decent...you had some personals...but overall you get my vote cuz i thought your punches hit harder through out this battle...Honest vote... Fiya Spitter-your verse was aight too...but your punches some hit hard and some did ...your structure was good...you had some nice personals...some funny tho...but overall this was a close battle but iam say White Tee cuz his punches hit a tiny bit harder then yours...honest vote... v/White Tee... |
Voted For: Fiya Spitter
WT- nah. i didnt really like ya punches, and the wordplay and meta4's were simple as shit, seems like you got talent but it just aint comin out, kep elevatin.....5/10 FS- umm punches were on and off. on=fart and shit line.....off=lance bass line.(ugh!) but anyways you had a better overall verse. more complex, better metas and wordplay, that type of shit. but there is no doubt you can elevate on complexity.....7/10 RTF.....links in da sig. |
Voted For: Fiya Spitter
yo lmfao um ok......this battle goes to spit fiya for not bein wack white tee your lines were stretched structure was fucked no personals or hard hittin punches fiya spitter your shit was ok lmfao tha quote about cuttin him was fuckin funny though lmfao vote goes to fiya spitter Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: WhiTe_Tee
Nigguh You Couldnt Be 'Hot~Moving' To Hell Wearing Sweaters~In~Summer/ C...I...8...U...N...1...L9...just only using Letters And Numbers 5/10...dont do sumthin like this ever again. This nigguh named himself 'fiya spitter' hopin he could spit some 'hot~shit/ But yo punches couldnt be 'hard hitters' and end my 'game' if ya name was 'LiL Flip'/* [/b]6/10...weak.[/b] Nigguh write your shit, perfect it, if you need to, rehearse it/ Yeah youre not wack.. Only thing that's not ill is your verses/ 6/10...ok Now this nigguh is a dork, forget the guns that he 'claims' to hold/ Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/ 8/10...this was dumb dope. damn you could 'stitch' up your 'asshole' and your 'shit' still 'wouldnt~be~tight'/ and you 'couldn't see' your way to a win if Sean Paul 'gave~you~the~light'/ [/b]7/10...nice.[/b] Dogg u aint gettin no respect from me like a 'substitute~teacher'/ so im a switch these punchlines wit infared nines..see 'if that a reach ya'/ 6/10...ehh overall - 6.3...the age line was ill son. You like to talk the shit, "Bye, bye, bye", you're all ass You come as hard as a nigka, that's jackin' off to Lance Bass [/b]4/10...cum line = :nono:[/b] I mean, you keep on talkin' tall, but you always act a bitch You never do what you say, you're all fart and no shit 6/10..weak You callin' me retarted, what the fuck you tryin' to do? Like burgers to Opera, the losses keep on flyin' to you 6/10..lol..wtf I'll chop you up like Hannibal, you sucky lines are bent And man, I ain't kiddin', cuz I ain't a parents 7/10...nice. Kid, you made a mistake, and that was goin' up against me Cuz yo verse is as blank.... as a white tee 6/10...simple. We all kno you suck. That's a pun, you fuckin' hoe What does you crew think about you... like at the quote below 7.5/10...nice. overall - 6.083... v/suprisingly...White Tee |
Voted For: Fiya Spitter
ohh,personals out the ass,fiya spitter came pretty hard in this,flow was nice,punches were pretty good nice closer... meta's n wordplay was decent,overall good verse... white tee your punches were aight but they werent set out properly to be really hard hitting reword some of your stuff n it would've come off alot better,some stretched lines compaired to the rest of your bars which through off ya flow at times..ok opener,but some played lines,closer was weak..no real personals,overall ok verse but lost in personals n punches.. |
lol @ white tee openin' it again. up....
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Voted For: WhiTe_Tee
personally i think white tee got this battle heres the break down fiya: u were ight man.. i mean u had the nice flow and the nice structure.. u just lacked a few more personals and punches overall: 6/10 White_Tee: Ight man ur shit was hot cuz.. keep the shit up.. u were very creative SPECIALLY inthat opener.. that was ill shit This nigguh named himself 'fiya spitter' hopin he could spit some 'hot~shit'/ But yo punches couldnt be 'hard hitters' and end my 'game' if ya name was 'LiL Flip'/* ^^ that was a nice personal.. overall the thing u lacked most was structure overall: 8/10 |
Voted For: Fiya Spitter
Nigguh You Couldnt Be 'Hot~Moving' To Hell Wearing Sweaters~In~Summer/ C...I...8...U...N...1...L9...just only using Letters And Numbers/ (See I ate u in one line) hott opener, with decent wordplay and a good punch This nigguh named himself 'fiya spitter' hopin he could spit some 'hot~shit'/ But yo punches couldnt be 'hard hitters' and end my 'game' if ya name was 'LiL Flip'/* nott hat bad, pretty poor punch tho Nigguh write your shit, perfect it, if you need to, rehearse it/ Yeah youre not wack.. Only thing that's not ill is your verses/ decent punch on the second line, but first kinda reminded me of a 8 mile freestyle Now this nigguh is a dork, forget the guns that he 'claims' to hold/ Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/ thats a good punch with a decent personal, but it only works if its actually true damn you could 'stitch' up your 'asshole' and your 'shit' still 'wouldnt~be~tight'/ and you 'couldn't see' your way to a win if Sean Paul 'gave~you~the~light'/ not bad, usin sean paul wordplay tho.... Dogg u aint gettin no respect from me like a 'substitute~teacher'/ so im a switch these punchlines wit infared nines..see 'if that a reach ya'/ closer was ok, but the attle had some better punches, so not very good as a closer over all i'd give that verse a 6/10, wordplay and punches are good, but it could do with a bit of better structure, but yeh decent You like to talk the shit, "Bye, bye, bye", you're all ass You come as hard as a nigka, that's jackin' off to Lance Bass decent opener, and well formed punch, pretty good I mean, you keep on talkin' tall, but you always act a bitch You never do what you say, you're all fart and no shit could be a good personal, but again is it actually true?? You callin' me retarted, what the fuck you tryin' to do? Like burgers to Opera, the losses keep on flyin' to you lol, that was good punch, nice wordplay I'll chop you up like Hannibal, you sucky lines are bent And man, I ain't kiddin', cuz I ain't a parents ok guess, not the best bar i'v seen from you Kid, you made a mistake, and that was goin' up against me Cuz yo verse is as blank.... as a white tee that was decent, good wordplay and nice personal We all kno you suck. That's a pun, you fuckin' hoe What does you crew think about you... like at the quote below good closer, and with a decent personal and 2 nice punches overall i'd say that your verse was better than tee's, bcos you used personals well and the punches hit harder |
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