Red Bull vs lyrical madness
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 03:25 PM

Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in.

Its up to you if you wanna battle, and when, you got 3 days to check, dont prewrite :thumbup:

oh aight, i'll write later then, im gonna battle some fag in a rematch, word

aight, but when you done just check in and pm me, when you do, we check in at around the same time

lyrical madness has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 08:21 PM.

Red Bull has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 08:22 PM.

had to spit quick, had shit to do, but whatever...good luck...peace

lyrical madness, the bitch formally known as headgames
got KO'ed by me before so decided to change names

now watch who you're dissin, why choose me for recognition?
if this was tha special olympics you couldn't put up competition

your records 0-1, this is just a re-run, still won't end in celebration
because the only sensation you can get is your dads ejaculation

this win wasn't hard, "mad" couldn't keep up to par
with just one bar i've left him more empty then his avitar



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Personals N Shit for people that don't understand
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kids old alias is headgames, don't believe it check IP address
...heres our battle where i KO'ed him
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141918

says he wants to battle me to get noticed...post 16
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=144480&page=2

this is just a re-run...as in he is going to loose again

"mad" as in his name lyrical madness...he has no avitar

My punches hit hard, leave you bloody and dead.
Sure your rockin pink now but youll be rockin red.
Got that rec battlin rooks, but I aint no average noob.
I've seen peeps like you, but only inside a test tube.
It's like Wagner and Francis, we dont compare to eachother.
You beating me is like people actually watching Big Brother.
My flow will bust yo ass, youll be goin to footlocker to buy a new 'cap'.
Homeless get a job, go work at burgerking, my bad you cant 'rap'.
You'll never be 'above my level' no matter what you drink.
See Red, the truth is that only real faggots would rock pink.

Line 2. His sig look
Line 5. wagner and francis, bball players, ones an allstar other is wack.
Line 6. Big Brother is a wack show no one watches
Line 7. Cap in yo ass
Line 8. Wraping ham burgers
Line 9. Red Bull gives you wings think bout it
Line 10. His sig again

Aight uppin this shit

This was feedback posted for Red Bull
 

Can't vote on this one, just checkin' the count...

it didnt let me vote for some reason, its not showin my vote but ill put it here, strobe add it to the voting thing on the top, it wont put it on

flow-red bull each bar was better then lyricals and everyone the syllables matched

punches/personals-red bull, lot better in this case and more creative, and hit harder, lyricals didnt hit good and were weak (no hate)

vocab-red bull- lyrical didnt have any good vocab in here, red bulls was better in every line compared to lyricals

in end i pick red bull
no hate on u lyrical both did good job just honest vote
good luck peace

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check out my battles that r up wen u get a chance (yea i kno i need to elevate but gotta battle to do that learn from mistakes), anywas check it out thanks
peace

you couldbt vote cuz you didnt have enuff posts, so no strobe that vote doesnt count uppin this

sall good, uppin this shit.....

Voted For: Red Bull

ok lyrical that flow was ok a little but ok verse was good wordplay and vocab punches were weak though and disses aint really hit and that pink shit been used to death already and you aint word it good a ok verse but you need to elevate and drop better punches and whats big briother?who is francis?anyways a 4/10
red ok opener personal that was a gansta cardpull but it couldve been worded better good second bar punch that was good the ejacaluation bar was ok good flow and wordplay on the ender flow was consitent here as well as vocab punches were not great but better then lyricals by far and disses were ok as well a ok overall verse but punches that were better and a nicer to follow flow won you this a 6/10

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damn, its cuz I forgot to post the explanations in my verse fuck, blah Big Brother, you dont now it cuz its a show people dont watch, wich would explain why you dont know it, and Francis, steve francis is a basketball player, damn, oh well, if red wins sall good n e ways, like some people I dont make a big deal of it, aight uppin this shit

up.

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Voted For: Red Bull

ha ha this nigga got my vote he came harder personals and his structure was decent he had good punches nice vocab

madness
you was aiight but you could do better

uppin this shit, come on...to much shit gets slept on here fuckkk

up.

Voted For: Red Bull

Bull got this...
more complex rhyme scheme, few nice hitin punches redbull, decent wordplay too, u came alot harder than ya oppenent...
nice drop.....

madness, ya flow was way too basic, i'm sure u can do alot better, no hate or nuthin, just step ya vocab n pinches up, ya rhymes were too predicatable

return the fave ya'll

p e a c e

thanks for the feed back and votes...up up up.....

Voted For: Red Bull

lyrical madness, the bitch formally known as headgames
got KO'ed by me before so decided to change names
Liked this pretty dope. i checd into it

now watch who you're dissin, why choose me for recognition?
if this was tha special olympics you couldn't put up competition
Descenet played bt still funny

your records 0-1, this is just a re-run, still won't end in celebration
because the only sensation you can get is your dads ejaculation
AGin this was pretty funny and could have been said better

this win wasn't hard, "mad" couldn't keep up to par
with just one bar i've left him more empty then his avitar
This was pretty cool as well liked the punch in it

My punches hit hard, leave you bloody and dead.
Sure your rockin pink now but youll be rockin red.
didnt like at all

Got that rec battlin rooks, but I aint no average noob.
I've seen peeps like you, but only inside a test tube.
started off ok and ended wack

It's like Wagner and Francis, we dont compare to eachother.
You beating me is like people actually watching Big Brother.
This was pretty funny

My flow will bust yo ass, youll be goin to footlocker to buy a new 'cap'.
Homeless get a job, go work at burgerking, my bad you cant 'rap'.
Didnt like the concept or the punch in general
Playd out

You'll never be 'above my level' no matter what you drink.
See Red, the truth is that only real faggots would rock pink.
too much pink talk aint diggin it at ll


Over all dsecent battle for what it was.....
LM HEADGAMES not bad seen better from you.....

VOte red bull for better personals and punches....
Better wordplay aswell


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Voted For: lyrical madness

lm wins dis 1 his punches were harder i lyked his verse more my vote gose to lm easy as hein no quistions
pz out
v/ lm

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mc bad boy is such a hate voter fuck hahahaha what a queer.uppin this shit

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Voted For: Red Bull

Red Bull: good structure, great flow, nice personals with the alias and avatar lines, i liked the line about the special olympics. all and all 8/10


Lyrical Madness: had some nice personals with the colors (pink), liked your closer, structure was ok (had some stretched lines), some line just weren't good like the big brother line, elevate a lil more and ya be good. all and all 6/10


vote: Red Bull