wish vs oreo
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-23-04 at 02:46 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

wish has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-04 02:46 PM.

oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-04 02:52 PM.

You need to ADOPT a little FEROCITY
And POSSIBLY work on your lil' vocab PERIODICALLY/
I'm similar to da BIBLE; if you wanna BE-AS-HOT-AS-ME
Just read my word my DISCIPLE and PATRIOTICALLY FOLLOW ME/
I'll "Desiel" A MAN APART who STARTS TO BATTLE ME
So I UNDERSTAND you weren't enough "man" TO CHALLENGE ME/
I'M-SAD-TUH-SEE dat' oreo BECAME A CASUALTY
This is Mortal KOMBAT, in FACT, I'll EXPLAIN MY FATALITY:/
I RAISE A KNIFE, ENGRAVE-N-SLICE yuh chest CAVITY
And hit you wit an uppercut n make you defy GRAVITY/
But GRADUALLY you'll descend RAPIDLY on a SPIKE BED
And I'll decapitate you cause I heard that you LIKE "HEAD"/
And then violentIy STRIKE with da KNIFE to SLICE LEGS
And I MIGHT use the same KNIFE to cut out yuh WIFE'S EGGS/
DESPITE F.E.D.S, I still JAB and STAB YUH-WIFE-DEAD
And then leave-the-crime-SCENE AS CLEAN AS A WHITE KED/
I-MEAN-WHAT-I-SAID, I'm GONNA'-BE-SERIOUS
Youre a DELERIOUS little' WANNA-BE-LYRICIST/
HERE-IT-IZ: I'm the teacher-n-you REQUIRE DA' PADDLE
How could you suck-so-much you lose FIVE CONSECUTIVE BATTLES?/
Your loss record proves dat youre a LIAR-DAT-BABBLES
So WHY LIE when you MIGHT-DIE and just LIE-IN-DA'-GRAVEL?/
Well, I slaughtered oreo and butcherd THESE twenty LINES
So, I'll kill you da next TIME when yo' loss record REACHES FORTY-NINE..

yes its more then twenty lines but nolimited

the only good rapper that ever came from detriot was em,
and your scared to show your record cuz your from michagan,
you pm'ed me saying ill go first, ill win ether ways
now you aint dropped in two days,
now you scared so ill drop a verse,
scared oreo would put you in a lyrical herse?
call yourself wish cuz thats what you depend on to win,
you wouldnt be half as good as me if your were my twin,
ya gonna be sad cuz i eat rappers like taffy,hint fool,
shit even your creat a rapper aint happy,with you,
hardly got the ballz to face me you lady,ya crazy
losing to me gonna give you more problems than jay-z,
ya shitty at spiiting so maybe youd be better at coffin,
cuz all my lyrical punches put you in a lyrical coffin,
ya sorta like a drain, cuz your flow get used over and over,
wouldnt even be lucky to beat me if you rapped with 3leaf clovers,
im a lyrical asassain and your skillz im over passin,
and your like a garbage rapper cuz all you spit is trash man,

finished " wish you could beat this"

man i used that mortttal kombat shit in my last battle man wat the fuck is this, u using my bars!!!!

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a he weak as hell i coped, here's hie verse , get that wack shit out of here uppin

man ill go first,

man how you gonna make it as a rapper if you scared to lose to a cracker???

bithches wont wait to understamd my wrath,
so i gotta shower them in bullets till they take a blood bath,
I came into the fame to bring max payne and lets just say he aint talking bout the game,
i make your dreams a mentality, nightmares a reality, in the hospital is the only time i show hospitality,
battling me is like the game of mortal kombat,
i end it with a fatality,
Everone wanna know wat oreo's about,
but hoes must think my name is a dick cuz they always gott it in they mouth,
i stay blowing like suicaidal arabs,
but if im out of explosions ill put to eagles to the side of your head like donvamin mcnabb

y you bring an adition verse into this battle are you that scared wish, that some pussy shit,its just funny how when you verse me you decideded to say that mortal combat hit

Voted For: oreo

wishes stocture was wack he treid pointing out his rhymes, you dont do that, its not good to do:D thats the reason why he lost pretty much i dont like wack guys that do that:laugh: but heres what i came up wit on diss battle:
punches: oreo
vocab: wish
wordplay: no one
metas: oreo
multi's: no one
flow: both did
stucture: no one
opener: oreo
closener: oreo
vote: oreo

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people vote on this shit this battle been here for daays!!!

a ~{ExClusive}~ suck my dick uppin

man dont hate, and you could neer come up with a better meta4 than my ncnab one, and that was a qiuk freestlye,hater

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bitch me bit off you get the fuck out of here you weak ass fuck i just posted yur verse cause you said i bitt off you suck my dick he not fuckin with me upppin 4 votes

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Voted For: wish

iight to be honest both yall came strong wit dis shyt....bit foreal wish took this easy in my mind here is a break down...

opener: wish
closer: wish
multis: wish
structure: oreo
vocab: wish
personals: wish

wish took this easy in my mind both came strong but wish jus dropped some hot shyt on dis iight.....gl to both....

i wo this man uppin for votes,
id couldnt suck your dick wish sorry im allergic to shrimp!!!!

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Voted For: wish

Yo i Swear...Dawg had KILLER Multis. Hot Ass Flow. Waay Better Verses. More Punches. The Whole Nine....


Vote = Wish

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uppin. that wasnt even a real vote..................

Voted For: oreo



the only good rapper that ever came from detriot was em,
and your scared to show your record cuz your from michagan,
you pm'ed me saying ill go first, ill win ether ways
now you aint dropped in two days,
now you scared so ill drop a verse,
scared oreo would put you in a lyrical herse?
^best lines outta the whole battle.......... lmao..... ha ha
oreo gets my vote cuz, he had the betta flow, had sum funny personals, the only thing i didn't like was the closer- witht eh trash and garbage- it was nice wordplay but a lot of people tend to use that, so it wasn't very creative, but the flow was on point, structure was aight........ multis needed work but overall it wasn't bad at all......... 7.5/10

wish:
ur verse had a good flow too, but them (-) dashes doesn't help ya flow unless u usin' it for wordplay...... your had a really dope closer as a nice personal.... lmao however, you verse had sum fillers basically....... and capitolizin' words doesn't give them an extra effect, nice diss but not very strong in my opinion...... nice vocab, and ur best lines were:
I'M-SAD-TUH-SEE dat' oreo BECAME A CASUALTY
This is Mortal KOMBAT, in FACT, I'll EXPLAIN MY FATALITY:/
I RAISE A KNIFE, ENGRAVE-N-SLICE yuh chest CAVITY
And hit you wit an uppercut n make you defy GRAVITY/
^^^^^^^^^ nice, lol..... 7.2/10 overall, good luck..... with this, ~wun~

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Voted For: oreo

Shit...Oreo had the better lookinf verse...the capital letters and the hyphens and the slashes were whack as fuck.

Oreo wins this for having harder punches and more consistency. Wish had WAY too much self glorification and wannabe net gangsta punches in his verse which are all played to hell...

Vote=Oreo

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Voted For: wish

this verse was wayyyy better...multis were OK an vocabulary is aite...if u graduated from harvard....it shuldnt appear that u went on word an got rhymin words from the thesarus...but this verse was better than oreo if yal battled again i think oreo wuld get cha..personal oppinion but this battle is wish's

this dickrider votes get this guy out of herr uppin

Voted For: wish

this guy is hotttttt
Puncheswish
Flowboth
Multisboth
Creativitywish
Vocabboth

only reason wish won cause of the Mortal KOMBAT thing that was out cold

Voted For: wish

a this was a ok battle wish won
breakdown
pun wish
str oreo
verse wish
tight battle but wish won cause he had better flow