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MATTEE1 vs Mistic-Rogue
Battle Rules:
6 - 16 lines, no less than 6, no more the 16 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting. no droping your nuts. no bulshit no mocking mums, cuase thats just low! Minimum posts to vote: 1 Check in by: 09-24-04 at 06:58 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
MATTEE1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 10:48 PM.
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now what tha fuck r u gunna say bout an AUSTRALIAN emcee
cos when i drop ma first verse, you'll duck, bail n flea... why tha fuck does every1 call you KIWIS sheep fuckers n shit is because youse are all ugly cunts and thats all ya'll can get a fuck wit... braise urself cos your gunna get smashed and disposed out to da trash when we collide n clash, ma ryhmes will stick to ya lika deadly rash... i'll have you runnin a faster 100 than MAURICE GREEN on tha track you'll be shittin youself cos i'll be commin at you lika pissed off SHAQ ATTACK... if you met me il'd have screamin lika bitch from a ghost-train admitt urself to a mental home cos u'll go all crazy n insane... a multiple sentice spat at you would be very revoltable, when ur murdered your case wont be solve-able, cos ur face wont be reconisable... so back da fuck off, cos i'll hit you so hard u'll be bleedin when ya cough i bet you couldnt even defeat a lil mouth, cos ur ryhmes r 2 weak and soft... your ryhmes are too wack not too mention minimal there a crime, you'd get a whole life sentince you criminal... KIWI= NEW ZEALANDER SHEEP FUCKERS= theres a rumour that they fuck sheep |
Mistic-Rogue has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 01:57 AM.
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aight check it out...
yo yo... Its time to diagnose you, with my ill as rymes// The disease will kill you, over a long period of time// I think you misconcieve me, my mission is to destroy you// And if i fail, ill just send micheal jackson to exploit you// Im sending my lyrical offences, to strike down your defences// No guns needed, ill beat you with harsh language and rude guesters// You better gap to the fridge, before this heats up// Or ill leave your mind crooked, like the leaning tower of pisa// Im diabolical and disasterous, like the devil himself// Ill devastate you lyrical divices, with Amazing stelth This cat is getting dirty, ima need to clean him up// If this bitch dont choke, ima nail his oesphogus shut// Im outrages and unstobable, like a thundering avalanche// This guy doesnt understand shit, he uses more "Wats"(whats) than a power plant// Your carrer is exstingquishing like a candle, Its nearly burning through// next time you try to rap pople will be like, YOU THE FUCK ARE YOU// YO, sorry man this was a bit rushed |
yo uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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come people uppin!!
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Voted For: MATTEE1
mattee had better rhymes, punch lines and shit mistic u had some pretty stupid rhymes that barly rhymed |
uppin for votes..
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uppiiin........
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
now what tha fuck r u gunna say bout an AUSTRALIAN emcee cos when i drop ma first verse, you'll duck, bail n flea... ^ Um, not a real hard punch here. why tha fuck does every1 call you KIWIS sheep fuckers n shit is because youse are all ugly cunts and thats all ya'll can get a fuck wit... ^ An aight punch, could have been done much better braise urself cos your gunna get smashed and disposed out to da trash when we collide n clash, ma ryhmes will stick to ya lika deadly rash... ^ Crappy multi no real punch i'll have you runnin a faster 100 than MAURICE GREEN on tha track you'll be shittin youself cos i'll be commin at you lika pissed off SHAQ ATTACK... ^ An aight punch if you met me il'd have screamin lika bitch from a ghost-train admitt urself to a mental home cos u'll go all crazy n insane... ^ Weak played punch a multiple sentice spat at you would be very revoltable, when ur murdered your case wont be solve-able, cos ur face wont be reconisable... ^ You just threw in big vocab. Didn't make sense so back da fuck off, cos i'll hit you so hard u'll be bleedin when ya cough i bet you couldnt even defeat a lil mouth, cos ur ryhmes r 2 weak and soft... ^ Weak whack punch your ryhmes are too wack not too mention minimal there a crime, you'd get a whole life sentince you criminal... ^ An alright closer, not that great Now for Mistic Its time to diagnose you, with my ill as rymes// The disease will kill you, over a long period of time// ^ An aight opener, nothing special I think you misconcieve me, my mission is to destroy you// And if i fail, ill just send micheal jackson to exploit you// ^ A funny idea, not too strong Im sending my lyrical offences, to strike down your defences// No guns needed, ill beat you with harsh language and rude guesters// ^ Guestures and defences doesn't really rhyme, no real punch You better gap to the fridge, before this heats up// Or ill leave your mind crooked, like the leaning tower of pisa// ^ An aight punch and meta Im diabolical and disasterous, like the devil himself// Ill devastate you lyrical divices, with Amazing stelth ^ Not a real punch This cat is getting dirty, ima need to clean him up// If this bitch dont choke, ima nail his oesphogus shut// ^ Haha, best line of the battle Im outrages and unstobable, like a thundering avalanche// This guy doesnt understand shit, he uses more "Wats"(whats) than a power plant// ^ Pretty good punch Your carrer is exstingquishing like a candle, Its nearly burning through// next time you try to rap pople will be like, YOU THE FUCK ARE YOU// ^ Weak closer Neither verse was that great. Mistic killed it with the esophagus line. He just had some better and realer punches and he used things like metas. Stay Up. |
yo uppin again!!!
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Voted For: MATTEE1
i honestly thought dis battle was ok, it was not the best i ever saw but it was ok. neither had great structure or flow but i think mistic won because of his punches |
yo change that vote for me i meant to say i think mattee1 won so its correct
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fuck who do you change vote!!!
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
i vote for mistc cuz mistics verse really didnt bore me, they both had flow and structure, but it was the punches, there was bout only one i could really understand and that was the mj one, that matte guy had me lost and if you goota read lower text to understand the punches they really arent that good |
thx, uppin again!!
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
Mistic Rogue takes this.......... now what tha fuck r u gunna say bout an AUSTRALIAN emcee cos when i drop ma first verse, you'll duck, bail n flea... ^^^^aight opener why tha fuck does every1 call you KIWIS sheep fuckers n shit is because youse are all ugly cunts and thats all ya'll can get a fuck wit... ^^^^second line stretched... braise urself cos your gunna get smashed and disposed out to da trash when we collide n clash, ma ryhmes will stick to ya lika deadly rash... ^^^^..........weak i'll have you runnin a faster 100 than MAURICE GREEN on tha track you'll be shittin youself cos i'll be commin at you lika pissed off SHAQ ATTACK... ^^^^.......DRY! if you met me il'd have screamin lika bitch from a ghost-train admitt urself to a mental home cos u'll go all crazy n insane... ^^^^weak punch a multiple sentice spat at you would be very revoltable, when ur murdered your case wont be solve-able, cos ur face wont be reconisable... ^^^^aight punch so back da fuck off, cos i'll hit you so hard u'll be bleedin when ya cough i bet you couldnt even defeat a lil mouth, cos ur ryhmes r 2 weak and soft... ^^^^....another stretched line your ryhmes are too wack not too mention minimal there a crime, you'd get a whole life sentince you criminal... ^^^^Weak closer..... Mistic-Rogue Its time to diagnose you, with my ill as rymes// The disease will kill you, over a long period of time// ^^^Weak opener I think you misconcieve me, my mission is to destroy you// And if i fail, ill just send micheal jackson to exploit you// ^^^^don't really get it...... Im sending my lyrical offences, to strike down your defences// No guns needed, ill beat you with harsh language and rude guesters// ^^^^aight punch You better gap to the fridge, before this heats up// Or ill leave your mind crooked, like the leaning tower of pisa// ^^^^nice wordplay Im diabolical and disasterous, like the devil himself// Ill devastate you lyrical divices, with Amazing stelth ^^^^aight punch This cat is getting dirty, ima need to clean him up// If this bitch dont choke, ima nail his oesphogus shut// ^^^aight........ Im outrages and unstobable, like a thundering avalanche// This guy doesnt understand shit, he uses more "Wats"(whats) than a power plant// ^^^^nice wordplay again, best punch of the battle :thumbup: Your carrer is exstingquishing like a candle, Its nearly burning through// next time you try to rap pople will be like, YOU THE FUCK ARE YOU// ^^^........blah! Mistic wins due to better structured verse and flow, and his punches hits harder |
upiin for votes!
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
lol matee your flow vocab and structure are all good but punches and disses are weak as fuck you need to work on that for real thats where you slacked 5/10 mistic good structure vocab and flow as well your punches werent great but they were good and disses hit this is where you won at and got my vote you have room for improvement but punches gave you a better verse here 7/10 voth of you return honest votes |
uppin for some votes!!
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This was feedback posted for MATTEE1
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
mistic-rogue took this purely bcoz of better vocab and structure... Flow/M-R Vocab/M-R Punches/Tie Metas/none Vote/Mistic-Rogue No hate return the vote |
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