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teken. vs Intellekt
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting good luck... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-24-04 at 11:27 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
teken. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:28 AM.
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Intellekt has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:41 AM.
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i'm "intellekt"ual, stab you in "your neck" and you'll
act like a retard, fingers fucked up you'll start to drool ill give you a "stroke of genious" with a swift back hand cut off your tongue so your food starts to taste bland on the mic imma "genius", i write rhymes for "einstein" this rookies "rhymes" are predictable i can tell line by "line" ill saw through your head and leave it stuck half way, the only way you get rhymes is through the bank, you pay your a homo who likes to spend quality time with "boys" playing with dirty "toys" trying not to make a loud "noise" |
ill nurture this kid but not how mother nature would//
but infect and defect this mind like no Satan could// maybe shoulda got ur posts up, maybe u shoulda bit// no matter, i spit clean, maybe even make ur clothes fit// ill kill u for naming urself after a fighting game, such a shame// elementary lines bully this kid off this sites mainframe// im the ill rhyme slayer ultimate spine breaker... this pussy wouldnt fuck with me if i was a vibrator!! |
yo learn how to spell.............. its genius
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upppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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and lighten up will ya....(name)
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uppin 4 votes......................................
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Voted For: teken.
i'm "intellekt"ual, stab you in "your neck" and you'll act like a retard, fingers fucked up you'll start to drool ^^^^^^^^^ LOL RETARD LOL NICE PUNCH ill give you a "stroke of genious" with a swift back hand cut off your tongue so your food starts to taste bland on the mic imma "genius", i write rhymes for "einstein" this rookies "rhymes" are predictable i can tell line by "line" ^^^^^^^^^^ YOO GOOD PUNCHES MAYNE KEEP HITTIN IT ill saw through your head and leave it stuck half way, the only way you get rhymes is through the bank, you pay your a homo who likes to spend quality time with "boys" playing with dirty "toys" trying not to make a loud "noise" ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA AND AN PUNCH ill nurture this kid but not how mother nature would// but infect and defect this mind like no Satan could// maybe shoulda got ur posts up, maybe u shoulda bit// no matter, i spit clean, maybe even make ur clothes fit// ^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD FLOW BUT WASNT HITTING HARD ENOUGH ill kill u for naming urself after a fighting game, such a shame// elementary lines bully this kid off this sites mainframe// im the ill rhyme slayer ultimate spine breaker... this pussy wouldnt fuck with me if i was a vibrator!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^AIGHT U GOT GOOD CLOSA AND GOOD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WASNT HITTIN HARDA YO KEEP I THINK TEKEN WON DIS BECUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND INT KEEP IT UP BUT BRING PUNCHES TO DA TABLE NEXT TIME MAYNE// V-TEKEN BECUZ OF HARDA PUNCHES |
Voted For: teken.
i vote fo tek better punchl;ines, better flo also well dun m8 keep it up |
yo uppin for votes stop sleepin n start votin...
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aight uppin stop slepi ya'll all votes will be returned just leave a link...
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This was feedback posted for teken.
nice structure and flow in this, try and direct your punches at the other person more and try and get some more personals in your verses. good job.
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uppin for votes... votes will be returned leave a link
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uppin for more votes stop sleeping and get voting fair votes will be returned just leave a link...
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uppin for votes... leave a link and ill return the favour... peace.
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Voted For: Intellekt
this battle was very wack.Neither had any good personals or punches,then structures were decent,nothing special about flows or wordplay,but Intellekt had the upper hand with his vibrator line but in the end,both need to elevate. V/Intellekt. Return an honest vote in the battle in my dig. |
This was feedback posted for teken.
Not sure why you qoted your words, If a verse is good, then it is good no need to try and point things out IMO< ,, Anyway dont have enough post to vote . But if i could vote i dont really know who i would vote for both could have been better, and its a hard call,
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Voted For: teken.
I gotta say Explicit won it He had a nice openin Verse He came hard at da opponent Good punchlines, Structure good didn't came weak in any parts keep doin ya thing explicit Intellekt Openin Verse also good structure nice Punchlines didn't hit dat hard though he came hard at explicit it was a close match both of ya did ya thing, keep doin what u do both of u guys.... no hate or notin on this vote |
aight uppin for votes leave a link and ill return the favour peace...
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uppin for votes lets get this over with
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Voted For: teken.
vote explicit, hes flow was smothe N easy to follow, punches was effective and easy to grasp while diss was preety funny, creativeness was slightly above average and all around nice drop intell not a bad verse, but u need harder punches to win battle u'r punches just wasnt up to par but u also had a smothe flow and some lines was decent and creativeness was average but still not a bad verse some good lines but u just need it more good lines then what u did have but nice drop... |
return honest votes only plez.....
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Voted For: teken.
ill nurture this kid but not how mother nature would// but infect and defect this mind like no Satan could// ^^^^^^^^ EHHHH NOT AN GOOD PUNCH NEWBISH TOO BASIC maybe shoulda got ur posts up, maybe u shoulda bit// no matter, i spit clean, maybe even make ur clothes fit// ^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK MAYNE NOT AN GOOD PUNCH TOO BASIC ill kill u for naming urself after a fighting game, such a shame// elementary lines bully this kid off this sites mainframe// ^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH NICE im the ill rhyme slayer ultimate spine breaker... this pussy wouldnt fuck with me if i was a vibrator!! ^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE MAYNE GOOD CLOS INTELLEKT-YO VERSE WAS "Ok" TOO BASIC TO ME DA 1ST 3 WAS TOO BASIC,,,,,ELEVATIN USING CREATIVE PUNCHES MAYNE i'm "intellekt"ual, stab you in "your neck" and you'll act like a retard, fingers fucked up you'll start to drool ^^^^^^^^ ERM "OK" PUNCH ill give you a "stroke of genious" with a swift back hand cut off your tongue so your food starts to taste bland ^^^^^^^^^^ THATS NICE GOOD PUNCH on the mic imma "genius", i write rhymes for "einstein" this rookies "rhymes" are predictable i can tell line by "line" ^^^^^^^^^ ERM TOO BASIC ill saw through your head and leave it stuck half way, the only way you get rhymes is through the bank, you pay ^^^^^^^^^^ ERM WEAK PUNCH your a homo who likes to spend quality time with "boys" playing with dirty "toys" trying not to make a loud "noise" ^^^^^^^^^ HUH NOT AN GOOD CLOSA EXPLICIT CONTENT-OK VERSE MAYNE U HAD GOOD FLOW AND "OK" PUNCHES OVERALL=YALL BOTH CAME A LIL WEAK IN DIS BATTLE TOO BASIC DIS AN "OK" BATTLE,BUT I HAVE TO GO WITH "EX" HE CAME A LIL HARDER ON PUNCHES,,,,,,,,,IT JUST INTELLEKT WAS TOO BASIC AND NEWBISH ELEVATE ON USING CREATIVE PUNCHES~! V-"EX" CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES (EDGE IT) INTELLKT-WORK ON USING CREATIVE PUNCHES AND USE MORE PERSONALS ~peace~ |
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