20 Grand vs Quick Witted
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R

*explained votes only*

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-21-04 at 12:11 PM

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Quick Witted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:43 AM.

20 GraND has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:44 AM.

This kid thinks hes llyod banks... Ima show him whos ON FIRE fo real...

Ill set you "on fire", cuz pussy your wetter than B,
If i gave u my salaiva, you still couldnt spit better than me,
You "pray to god" you stand a chance, shit ur pants in da chappel,
I swear to god wit does fruit of the loom pants, your fruitier than snapple.
Kids "poor", picks up a penny if he drops-it,
Kids like a pool-table, no balls and empty pockets,
Ill stick u up like a "bank" and leave u "begen for mercy",
Your "quick wit it" when it comes to taking it in da hersey,
Quick cant see "straight", so come and "peep" dis,
If you really was a man, youd pick a pussy ova a penis.

this kid couldn't bribe for a win even if he had 20 Grand
coulnd't come near to touching me even if he had 20 hands

ya skills don't exist~like parapelgic's trying to bungi jump
taking ya whoopdie to "texaco" is the only time you'll touch a pump

lyrics slain this faggot~leaving victims in critical masses
this ya funeral, no burial~creamating u into physical ashes

u beating me~their's a better chance of chris reeves playing tennis
bring a full arsenal of lyrical grenades to ya door like al-queda sent us

in ya mind i want u to focus and really visualize this loss
if u straight then how come i always see u rocking lip gloss

good shit, uppin for this

Ya this was a GOOD battle mayne

UppN

Voted For: 20 GraND

graaaaadn, grand, grand, grand
hands down...

more complex verse, harder hittin punches, better structre, easy to feel his rhymes, nice verse grand, keep spittin that fiyah...

witted, ta flow was aight, some nice metas n a lil humour, just step the personal n punches side of ya battlin up n you'll be aight

return the fave in sig

p e a c e

Voted For: 20 GraND

aight quick witted had a bit better structure, and you both went pretty good for punches but i think that 20GranD didnt just come up wit dissin, he used sumthn (Lloyd) to hit it, the multies were aight, and the vocav went ether side

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uppn

Voted For: 20 GraND

Ill set you "on fire", cuz pussy your wetter than B,
If i gave u my salaiva, you still couldnt spit better than me,
^^^^^^^^^^oooooooooo nice punch and an opener


You "pray to god" you stand a chance, shit ur pants in da chappel,
I swear to god wit does fruit of the loom pants, your fruitier than snapple.
Kids "poor", picks up a penny if he drops-it,
Kids like a pool-table, no balls and empty pockets,
^^^^^^^^^^ DAYUM~! SAY WAT NICE PERSONAL AND PUNCHES MAYNE

Ill stick u up like a "bank" and leave u "begen for mercy",
Your "quick wit it" when it comes to taking it in da hersey,
Quick cant see "straight", so come and "peep" dis,
If you really was a man, youd pick a pussy ova a penis.

^^^^^^^ AIGHT DIS AN GOOD VERSE U HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES



this kid couldn't bribe for a win even if he had 20 Grand
coulnd't come near to touching me even if he had 20 hands
^^^^^^^^^ NICE LOL GOOD OPENER MAYNE GOOD PUNCH


ya skills don't exist~like parapelgic's trying to bungi jump
taking ya whoopdie to "texaco" is the only time you'll touch a pump

lyrics slain this faggot~leaving victims in critical masses
this ya funeral, no burial~creamating u into physical ashes
^^^^^^^^^^O AIGHT NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCHES (HIT HARD MAYNE)


u beating me~their's a better chance of chris reeves playing tennis
bring a full arsenal of lyrical grenades to ya door like al-queda sent us

in ya mind i want u to focus and really visualize this loss
if u straight then how come i always see u rocking lip gloss
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DIS AN GOOD VERSE MAYNE NICE CLOSA


I THINK 20 CAME ALOT HARDER WIT DEM PERSONALS MAYNE AND HARDER PUNCHES

QUICK UR GOOD MAYNE KEEP IT UP BUT HIT HARDER NEXT TIME CAUSE U GOTS TO ADMIT HE DID GET U WIT DEM PERSONALS MAYNE

V-20 CAUSE OF HARDER PERSONALS AND PUNCHES

~PEACE~

UppN

UppN

come on and vote UPPN

yo lets finish this battle plz, UPPN

yo lets not sleep on dis battle mayne... holla at me dawg

Voted For: Quick Witted

VOTE SCENARIO

better wordplay , creativity, punches and playin that line of his name



this kid couldn't bribe for a win even if he had 20 Grand
coulnd't come near to touching me even if he had 20 hands

20 grand not bad could be better with a lil elevating.....
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Ill set you "on fire", cuz pussy your wetter than B,
If i gave u my salaiva, you still couldnt spit better than me,
You "pray to god" you stand a chance, shit ur pants in da chappel,
I swear to god wit does fruit of the loom pants, your fruitier than snapple.
those were pretty wack and not hard hitting at all

GET MORE CREATIVE AND UP YA PUNCHES A LIL MORE

NO HATE JUST THE FACTS

HIT THIS UP

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uppin for this, looking for a comeback, is it possible

coming people, need to get some battles closed, i'll return the honest vote, uppin for this bitch

Voted For: 20 GraND

20 grand: this wasn't the best battle i've read... cuz this battle was pretty weak... you were only a lil bit creative..dat iw wut u really need to work on!! alot!! u should also try to think of good metaphors and even try to do personals!!!just uppin on vocab espceially k!!

scenario..your verse was very weak..it was mostly elementry.. but its pretty good for a person like u i guess.. you really need to uppin on vocab..cuz ur rhymes are elementry..and work on ur punchlines so it will hit harder...

vote: 20

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

uppin for this, i'll return the honest vote

lets finish this battle plz, vote it upppppp

UppNNN finish him.. lol

This was feedback posted for Quick Witted
 

nice drop from tha both of u... just checkin polls....

Voted For: Quick Witted

waddup imma vote for scenario b/c it flowed better n there r better use of words but it was a tough choice to tell ya'll the truth they're both really good

Voted For: 20 GraND

20 Grand Won it
Good Structure, Nice Punchlinez
Openin Verse Good, Not alot of Wordplay
but good...Came hard at Scenario
keep doin ya thing 20 Grand

Scenario
Didn't have alot of Punchlinez
Wordplay Not alot
Good Structure
Openin Verse Good, came a bit weak on some parts though

I was Feelin 20 Grand betta aight...
Ain't hatin or notin Scenerio...

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