Reloaded vs cordless
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 10

Check in by: 09-24-04 at 07:01 PM

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cordless has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 07:02 PM.

reloaded im holdin
and i am hopin your jokin
your so outta focus
and i can see you are hopless
you might not have noticed
that this is not an opus
this a battle with no cuts
no bits from songs you cant show us
you can go and shrug your small shoulders
i hit you with bolders
and blaze your ass with my tokers
this kids with a chauffer
with lether socks in my loffers
go run with all your cock loaders
bitch, dont run into chokers

i didnt even finish this shit becuase i woulda gone more than 15 lines. thats just the INTRO MOTHER FUCKER!

yo kid im tired of waiting on you

Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 04:26 PM.

living up to my past/
Reloaded bout to pull the cord on your ass

damn your names something i missed/
forgot your little bitch ass was "cordless"/

your liked a fucked up webstite that would not work in the past/
now im here to "Reload" your ass/

cant fuck with me what types of drugs you on/
you beating me will be flat out wrong/

probally sitting there rapping in the nudity/
your the first bitch i battled so its sort of new to me/

between you and your mother i cant tell which ho is which/
so from now on you better respect my gangster too bitch/

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Voted For: cordless

aight man cordless in in my crew
just posting feedback

cordless-aight nice drop in all i liked the flow and style work on not stretching out too many lines tho its bad for structure, nice punches, and you coulda threw some harder personals in there but its aight nice wordplay too

reloaded-ok man u got an okay structure but ur punches were weak and you also rhymed past and last in two sets of lines.that dont look good...your personals lacked but u had more than cordless so thats somethin and just work on some wordplay cuz its looks better also work on structure cuz some lines were stretched too and ya flow wa aight but nice battle

if i wasnt in cordless's crew he'd get my vote

return feedback(either or) our honest votes(reloaded) since cordless is in my crew

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yo man my bad take that vote out it was meant to be posted ass feedback not a vote my bad ill fix it

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upping for votes. dont slepp on this battle. i fryed this faggot.

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Voted For: Reloaded

Cordless u need to step up your game dawg
well reloaded took this one...

openin verse- reloaded
punchlines- reloaded
structure- reloaded
overall- reloaded

reloaded came way harder then cordless
no hate on this vote just pure honest vote

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This was feedback posted for Reloaded
 

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Voted For: Reloaded

v/reloaded.
had the better verse, was still weak tho
dont like the structure, get that shit together,
work on some witty concepts n u may be desent.
liked that cordless line, line of the battle.

the other guy dropped weak.
flow was on point nothing else tho.

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Voted For: Reloaded

Reloaded took this battle. Cordless needs some help. Up his vocab and punches. Reloaded came harder. Both of yall really need work but im givin it to reloaded. No hate. Reloaded i like the line about the messed up website. Anyway return tha fava. Honestly

Voted For: Reloaded

reloaded came harder here but both need elevation on wittier and more creative punches.reloaded dissed him good on this rhyme tho.....
damn your names something i missed/
forgot your little bitch ass was "cordless"/
...that was decent and well cordless had a bad flow and structure and was a quick and simple and weak punch readso my vote easily goes to reloaded.
ps.return the favor in my sig plz,and vote thx -1-

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Voted For: Reloaded

damn......blowout
cordless u got beat fair an square pimpin...yo verse was no where on par than reloaded...i'd sugest puttin more words in ya linez.....elevatin yo vocab an include some decent punchlinez caz i jus was not feelin ya verse it looked boney lol