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Empire vs FLUIDMOON
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Links No Quotes DAMN I GAVE PIMPING UP A LONG TIME AGO GUESS ITS TIME TO PUT THE FEATHER BACK IN MY HAT AND PIMP SLAP A HO LETS GO SLUT!! Minimum posts to vote: 20O Check in by: 09-25-04 at 12:20 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. fluidmoon DQ'ed for pming for votes |
and no feeding either, i know how you operate, grimy punk
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^^rn't u feedin tha battle by puttin it in ur sig?
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nope, i meant feeding off verses,,,,,,thats what that means, and look at his sig, c'mon now, he does the same shit
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oooohhhhh i get it i thought u meant like advertisin it
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fluidmoon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 10:59 AM.
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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 09:38 PM.
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EXPLANATIONS FIRST-
HER CREW IS MIND KOLLIDZ HER OCCUPATION IS LISTED AS POETRY SHES A FUCKING CARSON jET GROUPIE HER SIG IS THE SUN SHINING ON A MOON AND HER PICTURE IN MEMBER MUGSHOTS SAYS SHE BOUGHT HER HAT IN A THRIFT SHOP.SUCKING DICK IS GIVING BRAIN=MINDZ KOLLIDE HER CREWS NAME AND YOU HAVE TO STAY IN THE LINES AT CAR TEST OBSTICKALS- ----------------------------------------------------------- THE MERKING ---------------------------------------------------------- Shopping in thrift stores this bitch whore need to step up her chips No flowetry got ya occupation as poetry......damn yall never be rich No hate but you couldnt elevate if you wrote on a skyscaper roof Daily basis in rotation ''MOON''s get sunned ya sig is obvious proof No lie but im basically surprised you can spit Since ya mouth usaul occupied by Carson's dick All that whack spitting ya groupies is blacklisted a win is immpossible Bars of a vet trap you in text you in my lines like car test obsticals Fuck ya perfect record like checkers jumping over you is breeze The closest ya Mind came to Kolliding was SUCKING DICK on ya knees |
No question,i leave you washed up-this moon brings the tide,
And easily drowns Empire statements, with fluid rhymes, You prewrite more played lines then lyrics have rhymes, Sayin a Wendy's salaries high,ya garbage,trash, panderin fries, You can dish out the shit talk, but can't take it like a man, Callin me whore,slut,but if i reply,you'll try to have me banned You whinin crybaby, your like a bitch on the "rag", A lattin kitten incarnate, only your titties bigger, kid,its a fact You posted a pic, got sonned,couldn't take it,face it,you ugly Empires adams apple alone,is the size of IT,THING,and PUGSLY .............LMAO explain: innuo, i dont need em, cus my verse says it all!!! |
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Voted For: Empire
Empire - good drop, had some solid flow, only time the structure went off was the surprised you can spit, carsons dick line, other then that solid structure....good punches and personals, everyline basically ripped on her the best that it could. the vocab was excellent, and the wordplay was pretty tight...good rip on the crew, the being poor, and the flowetry poetry haha had me laughing...good opener...overal a solid verse, basically just one big KO punch....8.5./10 fluidmoon - pretty solid drop as well...the punches weren't thrown as good as they could have been, and the vocabulary was pretty weak...rhymes twice...meh...personals were there but not as strong, you had the better structure overal, the flow was good, but your punches weren't near as hard as empires.. your verse overal was a 7/10 v/empire...harder punches, better personals... Crew vote removed |
Yo, empire, no crew votes, you said it yourself,,damn,red bull did this in your battle with soulless too,damn,your not honest,,NO CREW VOTES!!! A.I is not aloud, neither is the COUNCIL....uppppiiiinnnn
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ill battle yall...............
its an early morning for me......... doing mad ish......... so i'll be back to drop a vote......... |
This was feedback posted for fluidmoon
nicenice- uppin for a.i famoz- when you comin up to the crib again ???
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This was feedback posted for fluidmoon
da fuck...
i though fluidmoon was good at this and yous a mod... hmmm really empire got a winning side |
This was feedback posted for fluidmoon
^supportin' my fam- nice drop fluidmoon and not bad empire either... good luck you two with this one..
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HE JOINED THE COUNCIL THIS MORNING HE AINT CREW VOTE NICE TRY |
Voted For: fluidmoon
Ok, while both of you had good structure and some good punches, I say Fluid took this. Empire, you had some multi's going, but Fluid had better vocab and her punches were harder, and by harder I also mean more original. Empire, your verse was filled with the same things you post in every thread...shit about sonning people, and calling her a Carson groupie, etc... you even said it in your verse that she won't win because you have everyone that thinks she did better blacklisted...LMAO 'nuff said... Vote - Fluidmoon Return the vote to the link in my sig, honest explained votes only please... |
^this niggas a fucking faggot we call your crew out and you immediately go vote aganist me yous a fucking bitch ass homo whatever faggot obvious hate vote :gfy:
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will you stop, hes right, it doesnt mean its a hate vote.....he didnt say anything degrading about you......
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NO YOU VOTED FOR HIM HE IMMEDIATLY VOTED FOR YOU :huh: REAL FUNNY PLUS I GO BEEF WITH HIM IN THE C.S THREAD AND HE IMMEDIATLY GOES AND VOTES AGANIST ME THATS HO SHIT FO REAL YOU KNOW YOU LOST
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How do we have beef with each other? I'm not even in the crew battle! And besides, Fluid and I were talking and had some battles to be voted on, so we voted...honestly. So don't get mad at me for an honest vote...
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Voted For: fluidmoon
Empire Fuck the explanations about shit thats obvious.. that took away big from ur punches.. structure was good.. flow fell off a little.. u had nice multis.. wordplay was dope.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. quite a bit of them were played, i.e. poetry=no money, all dick punches.. u attempted personals, but only like, 1 or 2 of them connected.. fluidmoon structure is good.. flow is on target.. u also had pretty good multis.. wordplay was decent.. some of ur punches connected, maybe i didnt get it, but what was up with the fries one?.. good personals though.. i.e. the banned one, and pugsly.. funny shit.. Overall Empire had more and better multis.. as well as better wordplay.. both had a good structure.. fluidmoon had harder, and more connecting punches.. as well as better personals.. so basing off of that.. punches and personals have always been more important then multis and wordplay, so fluidmoon gets my vote.. VOTE - FLUIDMOON |
thats some bullshit, i dont ask for votes, unlike you who gets the same people to D/R your cheating ass, your so fucked up empire.....
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Voted For: Empire
rofllllll... u both had some funny shit yo...but i gatta say empire gets this for a lil...his punches hit harder and were a lil mo funny...moon had tight punches too.. both had good personals and structure was good!!...but on my opinion empire gets this for more funny & interessting punches... 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: fluidmoon
props to both lyricists on this one, good battle but here's the verdict flow:empire seriousness:fluid punches:fluid structure:fluid vocab:empire verdict:Empire your strong points were some of the lines you spit, had some cleverness to it. But the feeling i got about this verse is that it lacked intensity, and was a lil dry. was a good use of personals, but it just seemed run of the mill from you, and i know you could come harder. Fluids off top had intensity in it, which i respect, when you battle no matter how many times you've done it, you have to continue to come raw, which she did. Also i liked her structure better, although it wasn't a lot better, i liked it better. So for better intensity, and hunger i'm giving this one to Fluidmoon. Good battle you guys. |
Voted For: fluidmoon
checkin polls Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
fuck delete that shit
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This was feedback posted for Empire
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This was feedback posted for Empire
both came decent, emp had better structure but fluidmoon had more landed punches, oper goes to fluid and closure goes to emp. if theres no hate votes, or DR votes or unexplained vote...than this battle will be close, very close. im anticipating who will win, hmmm?
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i gotta see tha out come oF this (cant vote) BUT fluid u took this 1......u kept comin at em i felt chu on that.........ROFLOL.........EMPIRE u not as bad as i thought.............BUT.,.........wendys........LO L..........LET ME FIND OUt...........hahahahaha. where u at in tha BX so i could come see u flip burgers nUcca.......................FLUID......... keep doin u YA HEARD............DI
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^LOL FUCK YOU D.I AND IM IN EDENMORE 223rd TOO FAR FOR YOUR BUS PASS TO REACH LOL
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