creaTivitie vs big GZ
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


oh yeah

fuck you

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-25-04 at 02:32 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

aight i cant drop right now becuz i got to go...i aint gonna prewrite i just have a life so.......pze be back tommorow

big GZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 02:38 AM.

I’m “dropping shit” on ya...like im “playin wit turds”
and “Scrabble” be the only time u “playin wit words”//
"blazin' the herb" is the only time u "rhyme elevated"
i'm meditated;think ya "rhyme is sick"......imma "medicate it"//
i'm investigative...i look deeper than most
in "hot pursuit" of u... I speak "heat" from the throat//
won't cease to "revolt"...i "rise up" but not to greet ya
lookin' like a "Reese's"..."there is no wrong way to eat ya"//
leave minds "baked" like "pizza"...or slightly "fried" like "pork"
we on a cliff...& you'll get "knocked off" like "Tommy Sports"//
I resort 2 violence...hide ya body in a mattress
take ya bitch on the bed...and really let her have it//
I "Work Magic"...like "Bank$" and Harry Potter
u in "deep shit" like "public restroom toilet water"//
I'm boling water...u "hott" enough" to "warm" milk
plus ya verses gettin' "slept on"...like a "worn quilt"//
I'm strong and was "born built"..."pick up this win" with ease
on ya "paychecks""...is the only time u wanna "see big G'Z"//

and i can't get dq'd...there is no specifying whether it iz 6 - 10 linez or barz...i went wit barz

d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 10:37 AM.

aye yo awe are donf a topical right.....?? so wat is the topic

we not doing a topical...just spit 10 bars...then holla back!

i didnt no we was doina regular battle i thought it was topical.....but ohwell i will still merk you.......

^^^stop wasting my time and hurry up and write ya verse...and wut do u mean u thought it wuz a topical battle??? u set it up...u should know and clarify wut type of battle it wuz...and i know you are just doing this to waste some more time so u can try and "perfect" ya verse...it don't matter tho...you just volunteered for a loss!

HOLLA BACK!

^^^stop wasting my time and hurry up and write ya verse...and wut do u mean u thought it wuz a topical battle??? u set it up...u should know and clarify wut type of battle it wuz...and i know you are just doing this to waste some more time so u can try and "perfect" ya verse...it don't matter tho...you just volunteered for a loss!

HOLLA BACK!

kid your wack.......im gonna show oy how a vet owns a newb

Kid im glad you think im the shit……but next time don’t try and find a battle in EFL

My different strokes will cut your life short like Gary Coleman`
Big gz you couldn’t post clean shit if you cleanzed your colon`
You’re the key illustration of why newbs get a bad reputation`
Got you facin defeat like your leg was ready for amputation`
You the type of nigga to sneeze and still not receive a blessin`
Kid don’t get offended by your lose, I just had to teach a lesson`
as your skill level grows your record just continues to decline`
You got heart but next time try and keep your self in frontlines


Look kid you got skills I give you that much…but just take more time to elevate
But good shit…….one love

lets go...this battle is officially on & poppin'...so lets get theez votes coming in and leave an honest opinion.

Voted For: big GZ

good battle yall, nice flows but i give my vote to GZ, he packed more puches n gave more of an effort but its a close call
check out my battles id appreciate it

nutzb vs oreo-----open
nutz-b vs wish----open

thnx peace.

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Voted For: creaTivitie

k creativity won what with this shit, he took this with ease hwo did this other guy get a vote???? i wonder lol but heres why i think creat won he basically has one of the best verses on this site lol hes got good wordplay punches vocab hell i look up to this guy lol but heres what i got on diss battle:
punches: creat
vocab: creat
wordplay: hell creat
metas: creat
multi's: creat
stucture: creat
flow: both got it
opener: creat
closener: big gz not realy anyone
vote: creativty, why you change yer name?

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this was my old name...when i first started it was this name but everyone said iw asnt creative enuff so i changed my name to creativitie

thank you exclusive...would u like to explain your explanation for voting...i mean, u do it with your verses in other battles...WUT A WEAK ASS EXCUSE FOR AN EMCEE.

Voted For: creaTivitie

i think em sce took this one by a far..he had better wordplay and better punches...even tho he didnt come that hard...that first line was hot, but i think yall both need to elevate and get better, cause yall kinda weak...

gz was just focusing on his punches, and fucked up the rest of his flow. they was hot, and most of em hit hard, but some lines were shakey, and he started to fall off near the end...


-all around good battle, and some nice verses...em sce took it in my opinion

^^^thanx 4 da vote...but as for us being kinda weak...I DON'T THINK SO. ain't u the emcee wit 12 losses??? u can't even talk about being weak.

^^^this guy is funny......but yup he do got 12 looses....hahaha uppin for votes....

uppin...for...votes

uppin this shit once again...

we really need votes...i will return the favor...its easy 2 see i won this battle so cast your vote!

Voted For: creaTivitie

D.J EM
shit was hot nice vocab punches
wordplay all was hot 1 of da
hardest drops i seen so far nice
shit


Big GZ
nice wordplay ok punches
but didn't get u da win diss time
fix ya structure lines were kinda stretched
but verse was still hot overall nice battle

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

uppin for votes....c'mon where they at............

uppin for votes................why is getting slept...

uppin for votes...............................this is one of the better battles still out there and it is getting slept on.

uppin for big z's L ......where the voters at.........

uppin 4 votes...this battle has been open 4 like two weeks now...lets get this thing done with

Voted For: creaTivitie

DJ got my vote, he had a slightly better flow and it was consistant.

uppin for votes..........c'mon were they at.........

Voted For: creaTivitie

big gz-not very impressed. keep elevatin on ya complexity and try to use the type of wordplay that hasnt been used 1000's of times. punches need to be better cuz some of those werent punches at all.....4/10

create/dj-either you werent trying or you just didnt realize how played those concepts are. regardless, this was average def. seen you do better man just keep it up and work on complexity.....6/10

v//dj em sce

RTF....links in the sig. (u better)

aigtt thanks for the vote i will return the favor wheni have time.....and i can only vote on two battles all the others are in my crew

Voted For: creaTivitie

d.j em sce wins for staying inside the line limit indicated in the rules.
pz.