the_crazy_one vs insane16
 

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Check in by: 09-27-04 at 12:21 PM

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the_crazy_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 12:22 PM.

you called for a quick battle and you got on:;

I should call u dan rathers the way you makes shit up
Chicken lines must be played, curnal sed u was original
So u joined this year & you should of calimed u were a former criminal
but i know that Hes just your typical rook, quoting immortal so He still playin small ball, hes jus a littlel league slugger
Coasting on his skill, cause riding my dick is prohibited
No point showin u off, u aint good enough to be xzibited
So wipe the egg off ya face… your whole state is a joke an,
Did this chicken cross the road, or were u just being choken
Must be Thinking your mature, cause ur the big one eight and minus a two
and i still dont know why D&D accipted you

done jus a kwick keystyle
………..they way they always break down to second place

insane16 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 12:39 PM.

u steped up to the finest from ~Dopeness Defined~/
cuz my shyt drop and im dope wit da rhymes/
u can see cuz dis shyt is defined im my lines/
my whole life plan is designed in my mind/
and ima neva stop - keep on rhymin through time/
im gettin pussy and dome in da backs of cribs/
dees the streets dat i own but i gat to da backs of kids/
and leave pussy bitches under earth where the rats can dig/
and now my dopeness defined yea baby dat da sig/
and jus to let u kno we gunna be number one/
we ant the kinds mutha fukers that u should shun/

iight good luck kids lets get some voters on dis shyt peace ~1~...................

all right uppin for some votes for this battle

les go les go les go we need some voters...............

uppin this battle bitchesssssssssssssssssssssssssss

yo this is insane16 but my new name is Soul Sickness but im jus here to up the battle and let u kno i changed my name but my record and all are the same.................

ok good for me Soul Sickness who did you get a hold of to do it
uppin this battle bitchesssssssssssssssssssssssssss

uppin for some more voters...........................

uppin this bitches come on uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

uppin for someone to be the first god damn voter wtf lets go ......

Voted For: the_crazy_one

break down

vocab - crazy
flow - crazy
structure - insane
punchez - crazy

crazy beat him in about every cat. there iz no doubt about it

Unexplained/crew vote removed

Voted For: the_crazy_one

this battle sucked but gonna vote anyways

Soul Sickness: ur verse just sucked, it was all about self glorification and u being in dopeness defined, these are battles so u throw punches, use personals, no one like self glorification unless it's in a song. 2.5/10


The Crazy One: ur verse was better cause u attempted to throw punches, alot of ya shit didn't rhyme but u still attempted, ya structure was off which through ya flow off, i guess the ending bar was ya personal, no multi's, punches weren't much but enough to beat soul sickness. 4/10

both u guys could elevate alot, no hate to any of ya


vote: The Crazy One

return the honest votes, battles are in my sig

This was feedback posted for the_crazy_one
 

This is hate feed back i no you must no no who it be or you won't be voting against on a battle i won--- Dis is A.K.A. and u say you my dawg than say i'm ass what the fuck is dat if you got beef tell me in a fuckin PM not in a vote 111111111111

uppin for more voters to get this goin..................

uppin for some voters to keep this movin in here iight....

uppin for voters to keep this shty movin..........

uppin for some voters damn this is slow.....................

Voted For: insane16

-Soul

verse: IP:


u steped up to the finest from ~Dopeness Defined~/
cuz my shyt drop and im dope wit da rhymes/
u can see cuz dis shyt is defined im my lines/
my whole life plan is designed in my mind/
and ima neva stop - keep on rhymin through time/
im gettin pussy and dome in da backs of cribs/
dees the streets dat i own but i gat to da backs of kids/
and leave pussy bitches under earth where the rats can dig/
and now my dopeness defined yea baby dat da sig/
and jus to let u kno we gunna be number one/
we ant the kinds mutha fukers that u should shun/

He took this battle. Overall beter punchers,decent flow.
the crazy,your shit dint even rhyme kdi ... and your punches was lacking fa'real .. u need to elevate some more

Voted For: insane16

waddup urs flowed better but work on the number of words that rhyme ya kno what i mean

uppin for some more voters to keep this shyt moving..........

Voted For: insane16

soul had more flow and structure (i got lost in yours crazy)
soul also had more multis none of you really had any punches
i also enjoyed souls more b/c it was easyly flowed to a beat

Voted For: insane16

punches-i16
multi-i16
met-none
mul-i16
stukta-i16
insane-he wins his punches land and there were 100%harder it was all good
other guy-he had some lttle punches wasnt hard didnt land
pz

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Voted For: the_crazy_one

uppin this boyz i need votesont this

i messed up and hit the wrong button sorry man i didnt mean to

Voted For: insane16

I should call u dan rathers the way you makes shit up
Chicken lines must be played, curnal sed u was original
So u joined this year & you should of calimed u were a former criminal
but i know that Hes just your typical rook, quoting immortal so He still playin small ball, hes jus a littlel league slugger
Coasting on his skill, cause riding my dick is prohibited
No point showin u off, u aint good enough to be xzibited
So wipe the egg off ya face… your whole state is a joke an,
Did this chicken cross the road, or were u just being choken
Must be Thinking your mature, cause ur the big one eight and minus a two
and i still dont know why D&D accipted you
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE U HAD FLOW SOME "OK" PUNCHES ELEVATE USIN HARDER PUNCHES OK

BUT NICE FLOW "OK" PUNCHES USER PERSONALS AIGHT



u steped up to the finest from ~Dopeness Defined~/
cuz my shyt drop and im dope wit da rhymes/
u can see cuz dis shyt is defined im my lines/
my whole life plan is designed in my mind/
and ima neva stop - keep on rhymin through time/
im gettin pussy and dome in da backs of cribs/
dees the streets dat i own but i gat to da backs of kids/
and leave pussy bitches under earth where the rats can dig/
and now my dopeness defined yea baby dat da sig/
and jus to let u kno we gunna be number one/
we ant the kinds mutha fukers that u should shun/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW GOOD WORDPLAYS

V-SOULSICKNESS

CAUSE HE USE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS,,,,,,,,PUNCHES WERE HARDER FLOW WAS GOOD NICE WORDPLAYS


THE_CRAZY_ONE-WORK ON YO PUNCHES IN DIS BATTLE U DIDNT HIT HARD ENOUGH ELEVATE,,,,,,,,,AND USE PERSONALS AIGHT


RETURN AN FAV SOULSICKNESS

~PEACE~