InFiniTe-LyriCs vs ~{ExClusive}~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 07:03 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

InFiniTe-LyriCs has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 06:34 PM.

~{ExClusive}~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 06:55 PM.

Infinite-lyrics
Spinin you like yer on a “Mari-go-round” is what my vocab dos to everyone(1)
Even you agreed I could tell by the look on yer face, you were overdone/
I hope you have fun, ill drop you off like you were “trash from a garbage-can”/
To bad it already happened, you got twisted up and now you look like yer from “Japan”(2)
Fuckin you up with my lyrics is done with ease, but I still give you a little admiration/
You were changed cuz you reminded everyone like you were from a different corporation/
You think yer infinite but you got nothing but shit in yer lyrics, you need elevation/
Ill twist you up make you drop like “the twin towers”, now all you get hit back with is rejection(3)
I kno yer mouth feels numb cuz my punches felt like they hit you in the mouth/
Sry but I cant say to much cuz I played you like I was “earl Boykin’s” but he aint from the south(4)

(1)…..how marigo rounds spin around that’s what my lyrics do get it?
(2)…..A. I would drop you off basically like yer rhymes suck there trash like crappy? Get it B. and my rhymes mixed yer brain and face, now you look Japanese. Get it?
(3)…..I made you fall like the twin towers, how the afganies made the towers fall get it?
(4)……earl boykins from the Denver nuggets, basketball, hes small and fast so I played you get it?

k waitin for you now:D

OPENER
Battle’s irrelevant…
Wat’s tha point, u can’t even throw a beat hard…
You intelligent???
Kollide minds with genius and still come out a retard…
MIDDLE
But check this as I fuckin lyrically wreck this…
Project shit…leavin u set up for my next diss…
Get ure neck split, fuck dat…I’ll make ure head split…
Makin u drop a dead spit, watch as I fuckin shred shit…
Invite this site to the fight, see how I get abusive…
Arouse the crowd and make ure loss Exclusive…
CLOSER
Take it from me if this is all ure ass be bringin…
U gonna lose, cuz its straight wack that u be slingin…

nice battle man:D uppin this is how i think its ging to be
punches: im not sure
vocab: Ex
wordplay: ex
and theres more but who cares thats the basics lol
uppin

aight drop........................
few pointers.......
shorten ure lines playa...
and...
u shudn't explain ure punches, cuz if they need explainin cuz ppl don't get them then they ain't that gud to begin with

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

ok ya i got my lines shorter next time i kno that w/e tho its up to the people that vote

This was feedback posted for ~{ExClusive}~
 

aight i think that exclusive took this but i cant voet, i think his vote was dope, structure was on point, his punches were sik and over all just fo shit all yua who aint in mindz collide drop an honest vote in my battles (check teh sig)

and thats the point when u do more complicated lines, means u got some skill if u can put one on top another, gives u sumthin

aight thanks uppin for votes!

yea well the one person who has posted on here is bound to give the battle to Exclusive cuz they in the same crew..............................

but honestly, i'll let the votes decide, i mite win, i mite lose,
makes no difference to me cuz i am a little rusty after all........................

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!2

Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

iight this shyt was pretty close both droped a hard verse.....

Exclusive ur punches just didnt hit hard enough and ur lines were to long......u need to work on structure and wordplay.....

Infinite.... that shyt was hot...short but hard hitten....everypunch had a good insult and was the kinda shyt that makes the crowd laugh at the other kid in live battles....u def crushed this battle...that was hot keep doin ur thing...

iight no hate to either it was a fair vote...can some1 return a favor on the links in my sig.....exclusive if u wanna battle jus let me kno......

Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

Vote infinite lyrics,

much better wordplay structure and over all a dope verse

Battle’s irrelevant…
Wat’s tha point, u can’t even throw a beat hard…
You intelligent???
Kollide minds with genius and still come out a retard…
That was fuckin dope too

Invite this site to the fight, see how I get abusive…
Arouse the crowd and make ure loss Exclusive…
that was a dope ass personal and play on his name



You think yer infinite but you got nothing but shit in yer lyrics, you need elevation/
Ill twist you up make you drop like “the twin towers”, now all you get hit back with is rejection(3)
the weay these wnet doesnt ryme

No hate exclusive but this verse wasnt that good, i think you could have done better,,,,,

NO BEEF

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i'm 2-0 in this bitch

get UPPIN some more and i'll return tha favour like i have on the 2 that have voted already..........................................

to ice pick ya i didnt take my time and ya my opener i guess didnt rhyme but o well i need to show i battled a vet i dotn care if i lose but i edleast deserve 3 votes to 5 cuz i almost got him. maybe soon ill come back when i have elavated mor ei just got the hang of wordplay and punches the real way so ya. dont think i suck eather cuz im only 14:D

Uppin On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!3

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

just checkin the polls............................

Removed

FUCK....ill pm Strobe........:(.....................

Uppin Again On This Battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!4

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

yo dis goes to Ex man he ahd wordplay and vocab altho his struc n flo cud use some work his punchea came pretty hard and hit directly, good verse, Infinite dawg yo verse was tite too son but i dont think u need to lable ur opener and shit like tha ur verse was pretty good um good vocab great wordplay ur struc was decent to but ur punches were barely good da retard one was iite but besides that there wasnt that much so i have to say this goes to ex on this one
No hate!

Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

u killed EXCLUSIVE...u know how u can tell if you're weak: its when u have to explain almost everything u said in a verse...you're opener, middle and closer was just a lot easier to follow...plus u get this win becuz u did not have to explain anything, it wuz that easy to read.

EXCLUSIVE...nothing u said really made any sense even after u took another paragraph to explain that shit u wrote...i think u should sit down and think hard about your future as a emcee. I have never heard Jay-Z or any other top 5 emcee...take time out to explain what their verse meant. If u think I am being too harsh...GOOD!

UPPIN ON THIS SHIT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5

and can strobe fix the polls, one of Exclusives votes shudnt count cuz the guy was just trying to check the polls................................

C'mon man UPPIN on this bitchin battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!6

k big gz that was a hate vote and you realy think yer good but yer wack as fuck haha you should be gettin Koed by them vets yer battlin haha

This was feedback posted for InFiniTe-LyriCs
 

...yo I Cant Vote But Here To Up This Shit For Infinite My Dawg Vote Hoe's.....

Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

Ight this wasnt very hot but infinite got this... his shit was short and simple, but had punches and personals.. infinite u needa elevate bro but u got this battle..

Explicit... bro ur shit is FORCED.. u just come up wit anything and make em rhyme.. really no good punches,personals or wordplay.. u was average dogg

overall:
infinite:7/10
explicit:6/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^got the name wrong dog (its Exclusive).

same thing,...............

wateva man....................just get uppin on this battle................

i wanna get it closed..................................7

once again
i'm uppin this battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!8

This was feedback posted for InFiniTe-LyriCs
 

Weird... i though you was good...or did you not try hard in this battle

This was feedback posted for InFiniTe-LyriCs
 

wtf............. ima jusss check the feedback, pretty wack battle overall to be quite honest, and there was no reason for exclusive to explain his lines, cuz they were so simple to figure out.......... i shoudl juss vote against u just for that but ill check for feedback

yo, honestly to every1
no i didnt try in this battle, just check back on my other battles and u'll see that i'm far better than this................but i'm still winnin so its all gud!!!!!

get uppin on this bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for InFiniTe-LyriCs
 

uppin this shit for the 10th time.............................

Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

wow InFiniTe-LyriCs u came hard in this battle good structure nice flow okay punches overalll a very hott verse much props man....


~{ExClusive}~

ur sturcture was fucked punches were wack didnt even wanna waste my time reading it all it was wack from the jump off herbs....

v/InFiniTe-LyriCs


return a in da sig holla

^i hate guys like this lol from my crew that vote against me there nto susposto do that lol its gettin d/qed lol and ya i didnt realy try eather the way he spited i could of dune better as well i was tryin somin new i dont like stucture its messed o well soon my record will be 8-1 maybe 10-1 cuz some guys are gonan get KOed soon:D
uppin for my oppenent im nto even gonan d/q that vote im gonna lose anyway but atleast im nto gonna get KOed:laugh:

Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

to me this was kinda a blow out
infinite..ur structure is a lil weird but it flowed fairly nice
good opener nice strong personal punch
also a good ending in ur middle good name personal

exclusive
you had a nice verse well actually it was fair..
bad structure..fair punches..fairly weak personals
your ender was wack
middle was nice
beggining was stretched and wack..
my vote i L