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Empire vs Soulless
-[p-S-a]- Tournament Quarterfinals
Battle Rules: 10 - 15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-26-04 at 01:56 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Im Not Wasting A Verse Accept And I Will Accept And Drop Im Tired Of No Shows
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Soulless has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 03:24 PM.
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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 09:39 PM.
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I hurt fakes like earthquakes ill leave ya verse at a tilt
Talk hard but ya bigshot bars is just midgets on stilts(1) What you going through you was 0-2 reset ya record with strobe(2) Couldnt spit fire with a lighther or hold cypher if you wrote on a globe(2) You going down this all around K.O like L through N(3) Like i blast steel at ya glass shield no chance to defend Leave un with broke hope cuz like i ghost wrote i lyrically own you Rap shit only whacker spit would be if they spirtually cloned you Damn fool like Ja-Rule only thing youmurder is INK so stop wowling You so soft in ya crib beating off to the cover of ya N'SYNCE album Lyrical exercise i strech guys this verbal areobics for whack rappers Ya shit basically rated unground is ya elevation like backpackers(4) EXPLANTIONS- 1)basically his shit is whacked but he look like a BIGshot cuz his record its a false reality like midgets on stilts looking big 2)he reset his record he was 0-2 now hes 12-1 and a cypher is a rap circle just like a globe is a cypher both 360 degrees 3)''ALL AROUND K.O" metaphore the letters around l-n is k and o 4)his shit is so unelevated its underground backpackers are rappers who only listen to underground rap another methaphore |
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-- I dunno… if ur on this board at all u will get everypersoanl in every line-- Empire… Merk me!!…. Just like you said-that-you-can… Cuz we know… if you don’t… you’ll just go reset your record-again!!! Stick to text… cuz ya audios… sure ain’t nothing to boast…* Cuz I think ya voice couldn’t ‘cut it‘ if I slit ya throat!!!! Ya skills are crap… you’re the only one screaming-tremendous… You got played lines… you’re the reason geometric grids were invented!! Just be real don’t change ya record like you scared of defeat… Take my edvice… ur best ‘key’… would be to ‘press delete!!! Your poorly constructed… just like your avatar.. Why u try to be tight.. And your new crew must be stupid… your name ain’t even spelt right!!!! Stop ya text I’ve had enough of your shit… and so has your peers… Honeslty… the last time you had A….W was drinking the root beer!!! Why u start unneeded beef… shit… reading ya text makes me mad… Cuz ‘Claiming you’re the best’ was prolly the best punch you ever had!!!!!** Sonned!!! |
---- i dont want to try to sway----
but i never reset my record... |
Voted For: Soulless
DAYUM!!!! this is hot shit i gotta go bar for bar. Empire I hurt fakes like earthquakes ill leave ya verse at a tilt Talk hard but ya bigshot bars is just midgets on stilts(1) i like for some reason.....8/10 What you going through you was 0-2 reset ya record with strobe(2) Couldnt spit fire with a lighther or hold cypher if you wrote on a globe(2) ehh its aight i guess....7/10 You going down this all around K.O like L through N(3) Like i blast steel at ya glass shield no chance to defend ehh just alright AGAIN....7/10 Leave un with broke hope cuz like i ghost wrote i lyrically own you Rap shit only whacker spit would be if they spirtually cloned you dopeness child, dopeness...9/10 Damn fool like Ja-Rule only thing youmurder is INK so stop wowling You so soft in ya crib beating off to the cover of ya N'SYNCE album punches like this=played....5/10 Lyrical exercise i strech guys this verbal areobics for whack rappers Ya shit basically rated unground is ya elevation like backpackers(4) good enuff for a closer.....8/10 coulda been better worded in some places but pretty damn dope, and stop explaing every fuckin line man Soulless Empire… Merk me!!…. Just like you said-that-you-can… Cuz we know… if you don’t… you’ll just go reset your record-again!!! dope opener, just fuckin sick.....10/10 Stick to text… cuz ya audios… sure ain’t nothing to boast…* Cuz I think ya voice couldn’t ‘cut it‘ if I slit ya throat!!!! ehh aight but kinda simple....7/10 Ya skills are crap… you’re the only one screaming-tremendous… You got played lines… you’re the reason geometric grids were invented!! complex, good punch just has everything.....9/10 Just be real don’t change ya record like you scared of defeat… Take my edvice… ur best ‘key’… would be to ‘press delete!!! played even tho u flipped it......5/10 Your poorly constructed… just like your avatar.. Why u try to be tight.. And your new crew must be stupid… your name ain’t even spelt right!!!! alroght but not dopeness as usual....7/10 Stop ya text I’ve had enough of your shit… and so has your peers… Honeslty… the last time you had A….W was drinking the root beer!!! dope, nothing else to say.....9/10 Why u start unneeded beef… shit… reading ya text makes me mad… Cuz ‘Claiming you’re the best’ was prolly the best punch you ever had!!!!!** good enuff for the closer i guess.......7/10 u were kinda on an off but it was dopeness oh shit. hold tight while i bust out the calculator.... *digging thru backpack* got it! empire-44/60=73.33% souless-54/70=77.14% damn close shit, empire dont blacklist, soulless just came harder this time around u know i dont hate vote on u.just both of yall came tight but definatly not a ko. RTF....links in da sig v//Soulless |
This was feedback posted for Soulless
checkin polls for Mindz Kollide....
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This was feedback posted for Soulless
Just check'n the count .
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thanks...
alright drop some honest votes peeps....... |
Voted For: Soulless
Souless- An okay verse. Great with the personals and a few good punches. an alright structure. Nice wordplay especially with that A W thing. And the closer was nice. keep it up Empire- an alright verse. nothing really personal about this and your punches weren't as hard. I know you can come better then this empire. It seemed like you rushed this. No need to explain punches we get them. Vocab wasn't as nice either. you should rematch. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Empire
break down... Flow - Emp (easy 2 read relative length in barz) Vocab - Soul Punchez - Emp (that wack rapper line got this) Metaz - Emp (urz actually made sense) no further xplanation needed pretty 1 sided but i wuz feelin empz verse more then soulz |
further xplanation jus incase it might get DQ'd empz verse wuz harder an had more structure it wuz easier 2 read cuz it wuz more spaced out so u could tell which wordz rhymed an which 1'z didn't soulz verse had a couple multiz that didn't rhyme all tha way but empz verse wuz tha 1 i wuz feelin more
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Voted For: Empire
wow...this was a tight battle...one of the best i've seen in awhile.... Soulless - nice drop...pretty solid structure, good flow the whole time, some good punches and personals, cept you did use the same punch twice so it kinda loss effect....im talking about the record changing...you best line was definately your last line with the "best punch you ever had" haha that left me laughing...very good closer..i dunno you came pretty damn hard, and you had some peretty solid vocab on some of those lines...im gonna give your verse a 8.5/10 Empire - wow...multi heaven...hell of a drop i must say, punch after punch after punch...it felt like i was gettin hit in the face with your punches...some pretty damn good personals in there...gotta love the NSYNC punch hahahaha, so good...Damn fool like Ja-Rule only thing youmurder is INK so stop wowling You so soft in ya crib beating off to the cover of ya N'SYNCE album....i have to say your structure and flow was great too, with some solid vocab all around...this is one of the greater drops ive seen....overal 9/10 v/empire...amazing drop...close close battle Crew vote removed |
uppin.......
lets get soem votes on this... |
Voted For: Empire
i think empire did better in this. he had better punches n a good flow. his vocab coulda bin a lil beter. his personals were pretty hot to. i kno he coulda came alot harder tho but... my vote=empire |
Voted For: Empire
Empire Nice punches some of them were played and some of them were original some pretty nice multi's and meta's ya wordplay was ehh ok i guess u can up that a lil and ya punches kinda made me laugh so thats a plus ya structure was damn near horrible u gotta fix that pronto overall i gave ya drop a 7/10 Souless u had damn near flawless structure but it looked a lil stretched at times u had ok multis and ya personals were ok but ya punches is where u lost this one at it was like u were tryin 2 get them 2 hit but they werent connecting like u were tryin 2 hard try 2 put a lil humor into ya verse overall 5/10' this was an ok battle came down 2 overall better punches no hate jus truth nuff said |
aight uppin...
--- isn't a battle about personals... not punches people have heard before.... i hate to be bitchin... but 4 real... thsi is not a 3-1 battle... more like 3-3.... i dunno it jsut seems like these votes are coming with facts... blah blah... uppin for more votes |
sun you verse was dope i aready told you that but its up to what the people think here so there it is either way you still had a hard verse you should come to the council :thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for Soulless
Just peepin to see how its goin for my bet.
Pz. |
wat the fuck for real Empire is winning? he came with a midge line for God sake.
if i hadnt bet on this battle i would of given it to Souless hands down way more personal and had hitting punches. Pz. Not swaying stating my opinion on the battle. Pz. |
Voted For: Soulless
souless.. kill the links, the bold, and the caps. ----- Empire… Merk me!!…. Just like you said-that-you-can… Cuz we know… if you don’t… you’ll just go reset your record-again!!! Personal...a very good one Stick to text… cuz ya audios… sure ain’t nothing to boast…* Cuz I think ya voice couldn’t ‘cut it‘ if I slit ya throat!!!! wordplay....lil played. Ya skills are crap… you’re the only one screaming-tremendous… You got played lines… you’re the reason geometric grids were invented!! doesnt ryhme. not sure i get it. Just be real don’t change ya record like you scared of defeat… Take my edvice… ur best ‘key’… would be to ‘press delete!!! heard this a billion times Your poorly constructed… just like your avatar.. Why u try to be tight.. And your new crew must be stupid… your name ain’t even spelt right!!!! pretty funny personal. Stop ya text I’ve had enough of your shit… and so has your peers… Honeslty… the last time you had A….W was drinking the root beer!!! Lol...good wordplay. orignial. Why u start unneeded beef… shit… reading ya text makes me mad… Cuz ‘Claiming you’re the best’ was prolly the best punch you ever had!!!!! very true personal. overall nice verse. online didnt make sense. thats all. Empire No explaining. -------- I hurt fakes like earthquakes ill leave ya verse at a tilt Talk hard but ya bigshot bars is just midgets on stilts(1) midgets on stilts are still big... What you going through you was 0-2 reset ya record with strobe(2) Couldnt spit fire with a lighther or hold cypher if you wrote on a globe(2) how u can punch about a record change is beyond me... You going down this all around K.O like L through N(3) Like i blast steel at ya glass shield no chance to defend I read the explanation. THATS NOT WORDPLAY Leave un with broke hope cuz like i ghost wrote i lyrically own you Rap shit only whacker spit would be if they spirtually cloned you you and you....creative. Damn fool like Ja-Rule only thing youmurder is INK so stop wowling You so soft in ya crib beating off to the cover of ya N'SYNCE album doesnt' ryhme to me.. soft anyways. Lyrical exercise i strech guys this verbal areobics for whack rappers Ya shit basically rated unground is ya elevation like backpackers stretch...just like ur lines huh?...last line was played as hell no good..... wasn't really close..... Soulless had a much better verse... personal's.... punches...... wordplay..... empire u had some as well...but the well.... THEY SUCKED. my vote- soulless |
Voted For: Soulless
He definetly won this... Alot better personals and alot more punches that hit... Empire came pretty good, though the more you need to explain the whacker the verse... Soulless definetly takes this shit... Nice opener and closer... The Press Delete punch wasnt that great... Neither was the "cuz i think ya voice couldnt cut it if i slit ya throat" line... Other than that some really great punches... Good spit from both... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152468 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Hit that up... |
lol too dudes i beef with everyday have thenerve to hate vote in my shit lol the punch obvious hate vote both yall is fucking faggots :gfy:
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Voted For: Soulless
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUULESSSSS.... i could tell that you have no soul tha way you mercilessly ripped this mark... i like soul's better because it came a lot harder with better personals and better punchlines... and it was even better because i always knew what he was talkin about so it was much more enjoyable than empire ( no hate man)!!! empire... you always got hella wordplay in yo raps but as you can see, majority of the people here vote for the one with the most entertaining verse and that one will almost always be the funniest or the one wit the best punches... so, you bein the one who's been here a lot longer than me, you prolly wont take my advice but... i suggest you work on your punches... maybe somewhere in the cypher or in yo crew... you should have some elevation threads... anyways, no hate man V/ Soulless |
Voted For: Empire
Soulless: he had some nice lines, but his rhymes gets stretched towards the end, and the first couple of lines are hard to read because of the flow, there was too many pauses in your verse(the ... ) the last line made me laugh so that was sweet Empire: you shouldn't explain your verses cause if your punches are good, you shouldn't need to explain it, your first couple of lines was stretched up and down but your structure was solid towards the end, you had some witty punches and nice vocab Both had some nice lines but empire had the better you yall two...... vote empire |
Voted For: Empire
good battle..props to both empire-good hard punches, a couple personals, nice flow and some good wordplay with that k.o l to n line that was tight..not the best i have seen from u but i think it was good enuff in this battle..dont come at me with that verse tho haha soulless-u had some nice bars but ur punches didnt hit as hard as empires did, u did have personals and a little wordplay but ur flow was off a towards the end..this was a good verse but not good enuff against empire..no hate v/empire |
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