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thefranchise vs eyvon
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-26-04 at 04:33 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 04:34 PM.
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thefranchise has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 04:35 PM.
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yo this chick thinkin she the next eminem//this aint no 8 mile so u aint gunna win//get out ur rhyme book and grab a pen//cuz im alyrical excorist man//cuz ill drop bombs on u like a hail mary// u a lactose intolerant nigga and to u im like dairy//u a damn lucky girl yo, i only got six lines// cuz ide murder u even if i was a god damn mime
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hell, might as well drop first.
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fuck that shit bitch, u cant b serious/
this guys PMSin, this dudes gittin his period/ im serious, u must b delerious/ so dreary, the weariest/ sit yo ass back down bitch, now hear me on this/ all u lookin 4 is a little bitta trouble/ u musta runned and bumped yo head cause u b seein double/ triple, its just me myself and i/ i aint bout 2 lose a battle oer sum guy/ u just tryin 2 take advatage of me cause im a female/ i got more balls'n summa yall, but lets not git in2 detail/ so try 2 run from me, bitch, but u cant hid/ the only waay u leavin this war of the sexes is thru suicide! |
uppin, i rock (as cocky as that sounds....)
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ha, weak punch. bullshit vote but, i dont make tha rules...... UPPIN! |
uppin! i WANNA win! VOTE 4 ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin, cmonany time now.... i won so just vote for me already!!!
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cmon uppin so i can retire............
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uppin PLEASE!!! so i can fuckin WIN this battle (im so cocky:P)
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Voted For: Eyvon
aight eyvon got this hands down humouress opener babygirl, the period thing lol, niiiice but yeah, more complex structured an better personals means eyvon gets my vote..... franchise, ya verse was horrible, poor structure, no really hard hittin personals an i didnt see a decent punch... improve on all fronts franchise eyvon got this... p e a c e |
lol that lil chi vote is whaaaaack, i'd get that bullshit removed if i was u eyvon
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ya, u klnow wut? im gonna. brb. that was a bulshit vote
UPPIN!!! |
uppin PLEASE!!! i really need a win!!! cmon, i merked em! vote 4 me!!!
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uuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Eyvon
franchise yo struture is messed up work on dat though ok i read yo verse but der wasnt any decnt punches nor any flow so elevate on dat aight mayne eyvon- u had good flow and good punches i'll give dis to u vote on my battles aight (honest) |
Voted For: Eyvon
Etvon - good spit, your flow was hot, and your punches was srt8 fire. Best Line - im serious, u must b delerious/ so dreary, the weariest/ sit yo ass back down bitch, now hear me on this/ Worst Line - triple, its just me myself and i/ i aint bout 2 lose a battle oer sum guy/ the - iight spit, you need some work on your flow.. and your punches need some work. Best Line - yo this chick thinkin she the next eminem//this aint no 8 mile so u aint gunna win// Worst Line - u a damn lucky girl yo, i only got six lines// cuz ide murder u even if i was a god damn mime OVERALL - good battle, but I gotta give that too Eyvon, she came harder.. and her flow was better. The work on your flow.. and get some more thought out verses happenin. VOTE - Eyvon RETRUN THE FAV http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153753 |
Voted For: Eyvon
very newbieish battle it was vey weak. punches- i gave it to eyvon because his punches ere more clear, personal and hit harder than all of franchise's vocab- neither had high vocab although i think evyon got da one too, because franchise's vocab was relle basic structure and flow- went to eyvon because his verse was much more clearer than franchise. franchise u need to elevate and work on ur structure and flow and take off dem slashes its to rookish. my vote goes to eyvon |
Voted For: Eyvon
eyvon won diz i cul make sense ov her rhymez so she winz |
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