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Lil Rip vs Lil-Youngstah
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-26-04 at 05:20 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 11:01 AM.
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This foo wants a competetion, he wanna take my tittle
Though this Mc Thinks it's an "Audition" 4 American Idol... LilRip Chokin he about 2 "Inflate" into a bubble & "Burst" This Foo Raps if he Was da 2nd Version of Fred Durst.. Lil Rip come on Foo u a 2nd Class mc Freestyler This Foo Works as a Prostitute a Sex Dialer... dat's my verse... |
Lil Rip has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 05:01 PM.
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yo yungstar i heard it take you two hours to fuck//
a hour and fifty-nine min to find it and one min to bust a nut// what's up, got all your girls on point// they laughing at you, saying blowing you is like smoking a joint// man fuck this, you just a waste of my time// cause i've already kill you with the first two lines// my verse is hot and smoke weak mc like that getty// some tell your mom i'll be home to night and to have dinner ready |
yo i did that to just crush you so uppin for vote best man win
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hey uppin for votes.....................................
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Voted For: Lil Rip
lil rip deff. won this shit the first 2 lines killed him, good flow good punch lines |
uppin for votes still...........................
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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah
yo yungstar i heard it take you two hours to fuck// a hour and fifty-nine min to find it and one min to bust a nut// ^^^^^^^ WEAK PUNCH what's up, got all your girls on point// they laughing at you, saying blowing you is like smoking a joint// man fuck this, you just a waste of my time// cause i've already kill you with the first two lines// my verse is hot and smoke weak mc like that getty// some tell your mom i'll be home to night and to have dinner ready ^^^^^^^^^^^ IT WAS AIGHT BUT NO DECENT PUNCHES WAS THROWIN DOUGH GOOD VERSE THOUGH KEEP IT UP USE BETTA PUNCHES AND FLOW NEXT TIME This foo wants a competetion, he wanna take my tittle Though this Mc Thinks it's an "Audition" 4 American Idol... ^^^^^^^^^^ LOL GOOD PUNCH NICE OPENER LilRip Chokin he about 2 "Inflate" into a bubble & "Burst" This Foo Raps if he Was da 2nd Version of Fred Durst.. ^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCH BETTA DAN LIL RIP BUT YEA NICE PUNCH Lil Rip come on Foo u a 2nd Class mc Freestyler This Foo Works as a Prostitute a Sex Dialer... ^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AGIHT GOOD VERSE YO I THINK LIL YOUNG GOT DIS BECUZ OF BETTA PUNCHES AND FLOW LIL RIP USE BETTA PUNCHES AND FLOW'Z ~PEACE~ |
aight dat's coo thanks street poet
uppin for votes still |
uppin for vote i kill this bitch............................................. ..........................
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uppin 4 votes on this battle.................come on people don't let this
battled get died on............ |
Voted For: Lil Rip
weak flow-lil youngstah, some lines were stretched and some were short in lil rips verse punches/personals-lil rip, this is basically what one the battle for him, had harder hittin punches even though both werent that good lil rip took this punches was worth more then the flow here good luck no hate on anybody peace |
Voted For: Lil-Youngstah
short battle not realli 2 go off but oh well herez my break down... Structure - Young (easier 2 read an barz relative length) Flow - Young (barz matched up) Vocab - Rip (not realli that much tho) Punchez - Young (punchez wuz felt more...made more sense then rip) vote = youngstah so therez my vote both pretty basik but i felt youngz verse more so it got my vote |
hey uppin for vote let get this over wit
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uppin for votes still.............................
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come on people still uppin votes..................
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don't let this battle get died on people
still uppin 4 votes.............. |
This was feedback posted for Lil-Youngstah
sorry but dis was whack
lil youngstah if u want a rematch wit me den lets go i beta u 5-1 at least u got a vote |
Voted For: Lil-Youngstah
ok.... Flow-Lil Youngstah came harder on this battle right here...he had a better flow coming into this one...Lil Rip You have to beef up ya flow a lil bit...some lines were too short and some were too long.. Personalz-Lil Youngstah again came harder in this one.Had dissed a lil bit more harder. Lil Rip you shoulda dissed on him..i mean you dont know he could live with his grandma or somthing...and you said make your mom have dinner ready...all that shit lol...well beef up both of ya on that Vocab-Both of you really need to elavate on this because your vocab was kinda played out shit i hear all the time...so elavate with some one or a crew. Humor-Lil Yungstah woulda had me laughin on the streets about as much as Lil Rip..so this one right heres tied. Overall Vote-I think that Lil Youngstah overall came a lil bit more harda with his flow and his punches....keep it up ~1~ |
aight dat's coo thanks infector mindz
still uppin votes people........ honest votes will be returned |
come on u guys vote on this battle................still uppin votes
honest votes will be returned |
come on people let's vote on this battle....still uppin votes
hones votes will be returned... |
Voted For: Lil-Youngstah
This foo wants a competetion, he wanna take my tittle Though this Mc Thinks it's an "Audition" 4 American Idol... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCHES COOL LilRip Chokin he about 2 "Inflate" into a bubble & "Burst" This Foo Raps if he Was da 2nd Version of Fred Durst.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PUNCH GOOD FLOW GOING ON Lil Rip come on Foo u a 2nd Class mc Freestyler This Foo Works as a Prostitute a Sex Dialer... ^^^^^^^^^^^ ERRRRRR NOT AN GOOD CLOSA U HAD GOOD PUNCHES BUT DA CLOSA JUST TOOK ME OFF GOOD FLOW THOUGH yo yungstar i heard it take you two hours to fuck// a hour and fifty-nine min to find it and one min to bust a nut// what's up, got all your girls on point// they laughing at you, saying blowing you is like smoking a joint// man fuck this, you just a waste of my time// cause i've already kill you with the first two lines// my verse is hot and smoke weak mc like that getty// some tell your mom i'll be home to night and to have dinner ready ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW MY VOTE GOES TO LIL YOUNG BASICALLY HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES I LIKED HIS FLOW ALTHOUGH AT DA END IT TOOK ME OFF BUT ANYWAY IN MY OPINION LIL YOUNG HAD HARDER PUNCHES LIL RIP UR GOOD MAYNE U HAD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN HARDER,,,,,,,,,GOOD BATTLE THOUGH KEEP ELEVATIN STAY ACTIVE BE ILL ~PEACE~ |
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This was feedback posted for Lil-Youngstah
i like how your bitch ass is tading votes with bk i will be sure to have your homo ass banned
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calm down dawg shit, what did i do what just cause
i said honest votes will be returned look at your bitch ass HONEST VOTES ARE RETURNED- so why u talkin shit about me...like otha people don't do dat shit... still uppin votes people..... |
Voted For: Lil-Youngstah
punches-ly stukta-tie pers-none best-ly lil y wins plz return http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153569 pz |
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