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N.E.T vs ~{ExClusive}~
Battle Rules:
Just battle - Unlimited No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-28-04 at 08:59 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
N.E.T has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 08:59 PM.
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wtf is this? tell me why i sould accept?
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heres my rap since i so wack
Stop, quit, drop the mic, get fired or retire You spit a little bit of heat and now you think you’re on fire I’ll serve him on a plate after I beat and kicked him Swallow him whole, sick him back up, then he’s a recycled victim You couldn’t beat me if I give you cheats or even a walk through I’ll put a bullet in your throat, so your Adams apple has someone to talk to Then I’ll murder this bitch, then do it again and then Leave him shaking, and it won’t be the adrenaline I put dashes-in-to-stretch-my-words-like-elastic But when I say your whack, its true, im not being sarcastic You’ll look back at this and say it was an historical session Is he whack? Don’t answer, that’s a rhetorical question We all know the answer; it’s a well known fact Let’s just say you’re an average rookie, and let that be that I aim at your temple for the immediate takedown You’re an enzyme, when I raise the heat, you begin to breakdown sorry to disappoint but i just raised and beat ya Dat AK will concept, and teach cha |
just rap and stop bein pussy if you scared dont except yo choice
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aigth ill accept later i got another song to make for another battle aight?
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~{ExClusive}~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 09:26 PM.
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yo
aight ill holla at cha holl
N.E.T, holla back One |
lol i jsut looked at one of yer battles and my freind here said you sound like yer seriously wack as fuck:laugh: but im almost done my first song i got goin wont be long tell mine for you is done:laugh: ill win against you haha
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if you dont understand the real way of wordplay and punches dont vote, and if N.E.T dick rides ill know cuz he has 20 posts up there:laugh: heres my verse:
This kid called me on, not knowing the meaning of romance… In fact don’t make me play him before the times up before I advance/ I already won, you got no chance but ill wait for yer rhymes to progress… If I hafe to ill just spit a quick freestyle like I was haven fun with you in recess/ My rhymes will make him never regret it, so ill leave him and upset… He’ll feel like I burned him with the hot spark from my cigarette/ Its up to you if you want to stay here cuz ill win, its you decision… If you choose to stay you’ll end up at the doctors needin an incision/ You must be mad cuz of the way my style is meen and vicious… Why did you hafe to sneak up and take a look, yer way to suspicious/ |
uppin anyone gonna vote?
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u p p i n
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Yo guess what i dont care what you say or anybody i just know wat i know and how know u won and how u gon' say im'a get dickrided i aint got no friends accept my crew so sqaush tht shit
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coem on people vote!!!! !
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anyone gonna vote? uppin
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uppin fuck vote already god dammit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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omg! uppin vote muther fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for N.E.T
ha good drop....
this should be a W for ya..... ex aint drop no complex no real punches more like hes talking... good luck..... V.T |
Voted For: N.E.T
N.E.T won this by far, very nice rhyme scheme a few hooks thrown in that round and all of them landed "I put dashes-in-to-stretch-my-words-like-elastic But when I say your whack, its true, im not being sarcastic" "Stop, quit, drop the mic, get fired or retire You spit a little bit of heat and now you think you’re on fire" why: exclusive didn't give me enuff oooohh'z and aaahhh'z i need lyrics that make me wish i had of thought of that better luk next time exclusive everday we get better righjt? Vote on my battles pimpz, i'm out Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
break down....but 1st i gotta say good battle strong match up both sick.... Structure - Xclusive - barz were close in length NET'z wuz uneven Flow - Xclusive - rhymez wuz on point...all wordz were a perfect match 4 rhymez Punchez - NET - harder punchez Multiz - None Vocab - Xclusive - definently used more complex wordz then NET did Personalz - Xclusive - didn't realli have any but still had more then NET did ...anyway like i said sick battle xclusive took it tho i felt pretty much all his shit but yeah big up`z ta both keep y'all shit up man but anyway VOTE = Xclusive |
Voted For: N.E.T
Damn...dope battle boys, props to ya both, can only have one winner tho so lets break it down a little shall we... Opener - net, Exs wasnt really a punch, nets opened nicely Closer - Ex, Nets was self-glorifying and weak Punches - net, Exs were alright, just not his best work that ive seen Personals - Neither used any Metas - net, ex didnt used any Multies - Tie, both were equal in this area (1 or 2 each) Structure - Tie, both were organized and lines were even (coulda been longer guys - UNLIMITED!) Vocab - Ex, this was very close but Ex was more consistant with his vocab Wordplay - Ex, he used dope wordplay throughout his verse Comedy - net, I made this category just for the adams apple line, hahaha, fuckin hilarious, plus i didnt really fine Exs verse that funny As you can see above ^^^, this was a very close/entertaining battle to read, but overall I feel Net had harder and more consistant punches, although Ex had a fuckin dope verse, I was just feelin nets hard ass punches and flow. No hate boys, I just critique them as I see'em ya know. Someones gotta win, no beef, payce. |
Voted For: N.E.T
Emcee:~{exclusive}~ Verse:This kid called me on, not knowing the meaning of romance… In fact don’t make me play him before the times up before I advance/ I already won, you got no chance but ill wait for yer rhymes to progress… If I hafe to ill just spit a quick freestyle like I was haven fun with you in recess/ My rhymes will make him never regret it, so ill leave him and upset… He’ll feel like I burned him with the hot spark from my cigarette/ Its up to you if you want to stay here cuz ill win, its you decision… If you choose to stay you’ll end up at the doctors needin an incision/ You must be mad cuz of the way my style is meen and vicious… Why did you hafe to sneak up and take a look, yer way to suspicious/ Comments:im not gonna D-r im gonna vote honestly i think that you need to elevate in ur metas and get some sick punches out there no hate whatsoever...if you work on this i guarantee youll be just that much better... Marks: Wordplay - 5/10 Metas - 3/10 Vocabulary - 4/10 Structure - 6/10 Punches - 6/10 Opener - 5/10 Closer – 6/10 Personals – 5/10 Enjoyment – 3/10 Creativity - 4/10 Overall - 47/100 ----------47% Emcee:N.E.T Verse: Stop, quit, drop the mic, get fired or retire You spit a little bit of heat and now you think you’re on fire I’ll serve him on a plate after I beat and kicked him Swallow him whole, sick him back up, then he’s a recycled victim You couldn’t beat me if I give you cheats or even a walk through I’ll put a bullet in your throat, so your Adams apple has someone to talk to Then I’ll murder this bitch, then do it again and then Leave him shaking, and it won’t be the adrenaline I put dashes-in-to-stretch-my-words-like-elastic But when I say your whack, its true, im not being sarcastic You’ll look back at this and say it was an historical session Is he whack? Don’t answer, that’s a rhetorical question We all know the answer; it’s a well known fact Let’s just say you’re an average rookie, and let that be that I aim at your temple for the immediate takedown You’re an enzyme, when I raise the heat, you begin to breakdown sorry to disappoint but i just raised and beat ya Dat AK will concept, and teach cha Comments:kid sick drop i liked some of your metas but some of them werent as good...good job you win by metas and some vocab Marks: Wordplay - 6/10 Metas - 6/10 Vocabulary - 6/10 Structure - 6/10 Punches - 7/10 Opener - 5/10 Closer – 3/10 Personals – 4/10 Enjoyment – 6/10 Creativity - 7/10 Overall - 56/100 ----------56% return the favor...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152801 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
Exclusive took this due to the better punches, structure, flow, and vocab, i wasn't feeling both your verses though... Exclusive wasn't going that hard at the kid, but enough to win, he has better flow, vocab and structure, some of the lines was a bit stretched....aight verse N.E.T, next time you write a rap, please fix your structure, see exclusive's verse, each line is nearly as long and even as each other, aight? And focus on the topic, dont start hyping yourself, there's no point, where's the diss in that? And unless theres a diss on how he can't rap, limit your trash talk, saying I'm put a bullet in your throat etc vote Exclusive :thumbup: |
Voted For: N.E.T
my vote n.e.t i like the verse from the start till the finish had better flow better punches had more creativeness in hes lines he could of came better with the intro and ending but it was decent enough nice drop as-well from X i thought u had a decent flow some decent lines punches diss and all but i found it easy to follow and understand N.E.T verse better close battle but N.E.T gets my vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i cant believe these wqack votes lol i won this lol look at his wack lines theres nothing good in them haha
uppin |
Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
aiight battle it was pretty weak... opener - exclusive loser - N.E.T flow - elclusive punchez - exclusive vocab - exclusive v - exclusive no hate net but his was jsut better...... no hate man... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^not even explained lol whats up with that man?
uppin |
Voted For: N.E.T
ill put a bullet through ya throat so ya adams apple has someone to talk to....clever it winz this battle...most of the stuff u guyz said was played but net was the victor to me in this battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: N.E.T
damn...not bad at all...lines i liked... You couldn’t beat me if I give you cheats or even a walk through I’ll put a bullet in your throat, so your Adams apple has someone to talk to that was clever You’ll look back at this and say it was an historical session Is he whack? Don’t answer, that’s a rhetorical question that was ok..firs line was kind of wack....but the 2nd line made up for it.. I aim at your temple for the immediate takedown You’re an enzyme, when I raise the heat, you begin to breakdown that was also fairly clever...pretty decent verse..needs work..but those lines won it over exclusive...your gettin better and better..but this dude just out foxxed you...once you start understanding how to be complex/clever with jokes...you will be a force... |
Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
Exclusive i thought u had better punches and vocab. but the other guy had better flow. but my vote still goes to exclusive. CHECK OUT MY BATTLE http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153747 |
This was feedback posted for ~{ExClusive}~
oops tripped into here nice battle................
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
exclusive got this... both pretty decent rhymes.. ex ya flow was right on point tho, ya disses hit hard just like you planned, good job an keep em comin... n.e.t ya opener an finisher lacked creativity, there important when it comes to battles, but 2wards the middle of ya verse is where u was stronmgest that elastic an sarcastic bar was pretty damn dope, for overrall content in ya verse ex got my vote... no hate i'm just tellin it how i see it |
Voted For: N.E.T
kind of a weak battle i thought both of you coulda came a little harder. ~{ExClusive}~-an ok verse. i expected more out of you. not any real punches. no personals. i didnt really feel like you attacked him. your flow was good and so was your structure but the verse overall wasnt really good.- 5/10 N.E.T- a little better than exclusive but not by much. you kinda had some punches but they didnt hit hard. no personals. your verse coulda been pre written. good flow and strucutre. overall you get a 6/10 N.E.T won cause none of you really had any good punches or personals but N.E.T actually attempted to drop some. like this line: You’ll look back at this and say it was an historical session Is he whack? Don’t answer, that’s a rhetorical question i think that was the best punch out of the whole battle. not really anything good about any of the verses overall vote-N.E.T drop some honest votes in my sig |
Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
vote goes to exclusive, another battle you gonna win, had some better wordplay and his vocab was alot wider than nets both had a decent flow, structure goes to xclusive and punches goes to exclusive too. keep up the good work |
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