J-Will vs AITZ
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



uppin the votes would b nice

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-24-04 at 01:31 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 01:06 AM.

yo u wanna scramble with aitz cause u think ur tougher,//pop pop pop// swallow that motherfucker// those r called bullets they got em in every state//to keep playas like u in place, and since im the trigga happy wigga// look for ur place to be in a//cemetary// you got damn sucka// u be lay next to another motherfucker// wit ya finger in his ass// lil faggot it aint my bad that u cant hack it// spitten lines like a rabbit runnin across the feild//dodgen bullets cause im lucky//nuttin gonna b funny wen im on my way// bitches and gentlemen get a grip cause im hurr to stay

J-Will has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 01:17 AM.

J Will I hit you so hard you goin to get parkenzen disease /studdren just like muhammond ali / i said i float like a burtterflly and sting like bee / but none of cowards cant fuck with me /i'll drop your sholder blade you get drop so hard that alliaha start turning in her grave/ im a nucler radiaration thats in the microwave / i beat you worser then white people beated the slaves in back of the day /and trust me bro i got crazy cash i said my cake bigger then trina ass.

cake is money
not fucking wit me man i didnt even try hard

This was feedback posted for AITZ
 

this battle buns my eyes

start uppin the votes ppl............ come on read and up the votes

Voted For: J-Will

THAT LAST LINE SOUND LIKE SOMTHIN CASS SAID AGAINST THAT BATTLE AGAINST FREE.....BUT JWILL TOOK THIS EASY AITZ YA SHIT WAS CORNI BOTH OF YALL VERSE WAS BUT JWILL PUT MORE EFFORT AND HAD SOME OK PUNCHES,THA FLOW WAS TERRIBLE CORNI DISSES JUSS ELIVATE A LOT

iight good looking newkid..



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na fuck that shit ppl..............start uppin the votes

uppin the votes
 

case used the same words but not in the same way i wrote it and
plus other rappers talk about that same thing all the time

Voted For: J-Will

J-Will won it From my Opinion
openin Verse Good, not alot of Punchlinez
Good Structure, Kinda got Weak at da End...
Keep doin ya thing j-will

Aitz
didn't have some good linez
openin verse good
Didn't have punchlinez, Didn't bring it to him

Keep doin ya thing though aitz

no hate on this vote

Voted For: J-Will

i vote for J will aitz was wack as hell.......
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word of advice
stop biting other niggas rhyms aitz

ayo people we need some more votes

holla at me
return fav

Voted For: J-Will

umm this battle was weak. no hate but it was. the only reason i voted for j-will was cause his verse was easier to read. none of the verses had any real punches or personals or anything.since they didnt i went on strucuture and flow and j will definitely won

drop some honest votes in my sig

Voted For: J-Will

yo AITZ lines didn't even rhyme... that's the deciding facter but if you want more J-will had better structure, flow, and punches. AITZ were more like slaps! lol return the favor the link to my battle is in my sig!! peace ya'll no beef AITZ