~{ExClusive}~ vs Soul Sickness
 

Battle Rules:

6-12 lines
no dr hate or crew
u spit first
u gettin 30 mins to drop ya verse after u accept the battle
i will drop as soon as i see ur battle acceptance show up

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-29-04 at 11:33 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Soul Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 11:52 AM.

everynight we gotta be duckin our heads/
whether we be screwin the cops or fukin the fed/
get tuff give it a week ull be fukin laid dead/
das y i always gotta be lookin ahead/
the length of ya life goes on how u treat us/
we mean ass kids find pregnant bitches and blow out da fetus/
so go ahead get ya whole crew and try ta beat us/

iight i droped im uppin for exclusive verse................

k soon i will have my verse aight im gonna write it right now k

~{ExClusive}~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 12:33 AM.

if you dont understand my wordplay and wierd style of punches dont vote then cuz its not worth yer time then lol heres my verse:

Soul sickness whats with that changes his name to soul sickness from insane…
He probably happy cuz he plays RV like its not a game, but probably a campaign/
You better go and hide cuz my rhymes make most people scared, even worldwide…
Most people say I make heads collide with my rhymes, there like a huge tide/
Man you realy mix people with that herbish combination, didn’t hit my expectation…
Most people probably will laugh cuz yer verse is like a weak presentation/
I hope this battle dosent make tension over rise, but anyway I got this a KO prize…
My verse is like it says surprise, you better have came out hot, most people advise/
Ill force you if I hafe to by staring right into yer eyes, watch cuz im more wise…
You better come out strong or ill win like most of the trippy teams personalize/

uppin coem on vote!!!! !!

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

exclusive takes this with ease, first of all he had about ten more lines which ment more effort and the punches were infanitly better and flow was good, soul sicknness you need to work on punches, talk more about yo oppnent than about yourself ok, no hate just sauing it how it is, vote to eclusive

This was feedback posted for Soul Sickness
 

Whoa Ex Came Hard On Dem Punches And Wordplays Nice Mayne Just Checkin~!!!!!!!!!!

thanks uppin

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

Exclusive merked this......
operner - Exclusive
closer - Exclusive
flow - Exclusive
punchez - Exclusive
man this is no hate he just had a way better verse, soul urz was a bit to pussy..... return favour plz

v. Exclusive

lol dis battle dont ev en matter to me really....i didnt exactly get a chance to do shyt because i was in school but yo ex u gunna win thie in a 5-0 ko prolly so how about a rematch so i can show u my skills....

maybe some time later i dont got time for battles to much soon i have the coast wars comin and im gonna try and write soem songs for audio lol but ya later i will

yo uppin for some voters cuz we really need to get this shyt movin....

lol uppin anyone ?

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

yo man exclusive came hard i think. his flow was iight n he had sum hot punches. his personals need sum more but they was iight. he need a lil mor vocab but looked good

vote=exclusive

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

okay 1 sided....

flow - soul (wordz matched up on time)
structure - xclusive (damn u got sick structure...barz same length)
vocab - xclusive (soul only used basik rhymez)
Multiz - Xclusive (didn't realli have any but more then soul)

both versez wuz okay pretty uneven battle but vote goes 2 xclusive

uppin anyone else 1 more vote left!!!!

uppin to finaly end this exclusive i wanna rematch and yes i will merk u this time.........

uppin for some more voters to get this shyt goin............

This was feedback posted for ~{ExClusive}~
 

soul sickness didn't diss his opponent once..... it seemed like he was self-glorifying his crew or sumthin'... ExClusive, u need sum work on ya structure, but at least you dissed him sum what...... if this was supposed to be a topical battle- y'all should have stated it, if not ExClusive took this easily, vocab and all..
~good luck and no hate~

This was feedback posted for ~{ExClusive}~
 

this was a weak battle i relli cant choose nun of ya NO HATE

lol upfront you jsut a faggot. uppin

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

soul no good punches it sounded like a weak written when i read it no real disses vocab and flow was ok but this is no verse for a battle you aint get at your oppenant at all and thats mnost always a loss a 3/10
exclusive good vocab flow was decent a few nice little multis also a few good dissses and punches were good your elevating nicely structure could be better but the fact you actually battled your oppenant and dissed him won you this and you had a better verse a 6/10

both of u return honest votes in my battles