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the_crazy_one vs mic-wrecker
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topical:Crossing paths 6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ill drop monday or later on today Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-29-04 at 12:50 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. Old / expired battle close |
mic-wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 01:46 PM.
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the_crazy_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 02:50 PM.
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allright here it is Mic 2000 - July 2004 On these streets, runnin things, involved in the hustle/ Dont care bout nothin', my life is jus one big struggle/ Never heard from my mother "i love you" jus "ur a mistake"/ Felt my heart break, didnt realise the impact that it made/ I stopped carin, to turmoil i became a slave, and till this very day/ Still enslaved, drama from all directions, cuz i fall short of perfection/ Kids tryna teach me a 'lesson', jus cuz i never did respect em/ Its given me a complexion, if i losin everyone, maybe its me?/ Nah, fuck them, its the life that i live on these streets/ Friends, Family, Foes...the triple F's, all tryna destroy me/ So i left them in the dust, seekin out drug dealers to employ me/ Slowly, i rose to my feet, then friends jumped back on my dick again/ Then i fell off for 9 months, in that time, they jus did that shit again/ Wonderin when will this end, i miss friends, but i know i make it alone/ At the age of 13 i was already grown, learnin everything that i was shown/ All on my own, no home, pops always leavin - mom always mistreatin/ Sis never givin a damn bout anyone, and my brother always beatin/ Jus for no reason...all this, after i was kicked out of school/ Thinkin it was cool, to break da rules and act like a big fool/ Now look at me man, 15 years old, left home, no education/ No one hired me legally, so for the chedda im gratin/ What im sayin, is u can find me on the pavement, slanging/ Whenever things get hard, i jus turn up the pressure, succumbin/ To the fact that i know i will never b somethin' - will remain a nothing. After July 2004.... Got wit my girl Sandy, whos been a big help for my life and health/ Took a new life, ripped off the wrappin, and put my old life on the shelf/ I beleiving in myself, because she told me that i got potential/ She remains always 100% real, never partial or differential/ She somethin' special, made me look at my life, and pump the brakes/ To leave the life of drugs, fights, robbin...madd will power is what it takes/ Im still the same, still got my ties and connections, and my weapons/ Cept 1 was robbed, but i dont need it, my life is now goin in a new direction/ Thanks to Sandy, my baby, who when my life was gettin crazy, saved me/ I love her for it, worship, adore, care, admire her, i let her know em daily/ Since i met her, i started believin in things happenin for a reason/ Beleive God was watchin my back, thru them badd times of treason/ Sandy is truly my gift from the Lord above, shes the one that i'll always love/ Even if i spent every second of every day tellin her this, it wouldnt b enough/ So people remember, when ur life gets tough, jus remember fools-dont-last/ When it comes to the crunch, ur dealt a punch, make sure u choose-ur-path./ |
Anger and malice is manifested when cowards say wat they say//
My heart pumps blood like well oiled pistons mind set on making him pay// Aint no delay in the rage i display aint no God gon hear da words that u pray// Caz us tanglin wit violent intentions is gon get u like Jesus on his death day// At full speed i dash mind home of demonic thoughts that'll soon surpass// Any moral action left where our paths clash feel the snap of the whiplash// my words are brash FUCK YOU! makes you back back fast// den ya IQ is lowered 30 points wen ya hed gets da blow of da bat bash// this is not a drill or a test this hate i bring is the real thing// my body's like a flesh canteen filled with satanic things you better cling// to whatever faith you have a couple haill mary's u better sing// forget shanks that puncture ya speen im cluthcin the edge of a gilluitone// to disfigure ya face so u couldnt hide the scars it wit a lump of maybeline// why scream after the pain i deliever gets ya body dismembered???// i swallow a gallon of liquor to tear up my liver hopin that i wont remember// wat happened da night b4 dats got me actn like hells most violent member// a cold night in december wit my girlfirend just the right of my center// takin pictures for prom when another guy starts dancin wit her// little did i no my sweetheart was the project freak wat makes her unique// is that she takes penis to the throat till she can hardly speak// and gets dick so bad that she can hardly stand on the power of her feet// so now my tempertures rising because of my rising heat// both him and her should get the rath of me get they ass fuckin beat// cant be mad at her just put my black stacy adams in this guy's ass// bro's before hoes right so i guess me an him paths gotta cross at last..... |
that is my verse home skillet read it and enjoy.......
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was that on topic at all?????
crossing paths u just gave like a whole life story |
uppin this shit...........................................
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uppin this yet again come on lets get some votes here
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uppin this again....isnt this gettin repitive lets get some votes in
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oh my godd uppin this...my battles r always slept on
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oh my god again uppin this old ass battle vote mutha fuckaz
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This was feedback posted for the_crazy_one
of coarse crazy one, won haha
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uppin this...i cant stand when battles r slept on...shit is ridiculous
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Voted For: the_crazy_one
omg mic wrecker aint drop why??!!the crazy one wins by dq Removed |
This was feedback posted for the_crazy_one
uppin for some more votes yall come on dont sleep yall dont sleep
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Voted For: mic-wrecker
ok flow good but you need better vocab and a better imagery see how mic said you have a couple hail marys you better sing and you said seek out drug dealers to employ me?big image diffrence there he had a more complex deep image while yours was straight up which is cool but not good in a topical to win mic had better vocab structure and gave a better image and in topicals that wins so he gets my vote for showing me a verbal picture better |
This was feedback posted for mic-wrecker
checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573 |
uppin this right here it needs to be closd...an with that votin game it should be in a matter of minutes.....UPPIN!!!!!!!
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uppin this right here!!!!!
its been slept on too many days hours minutes watever |
uppin this thread!!!!!
people need to fuckin vote |
Voted For: the_crazy_one
I neva voted on topicals, but this 1 is a close 1!!! I like how t.c.o.(tha crazy one) went back and then brought it back and i like how third shift kept it on topic UNTIL u went to tha whole gurl and stacy adams in his ass and it wasnt needed basically, but ur closer kinda made up 4 it. But this goes to t.c.o. for his individuality and his creativity |
return tha fava..........
.............................. link is in my sig.......... .............................. on tha bottom........... |
This was feedback posted for the_crazy_one
wow ok.........................can't decide.....just wanted to say that:)
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this shit is gettin ony my fuckin nerves......
vote ppl dayum |
yo 3rd just go to battle closeings and close it and we will open it up again in frount lines so we can get more votes on it quicker
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yea rite what is that gonna do....thats bullshit jus upp it more
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ok what ever man its just boring havin all these open battle that are gettin slept on
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i feel you so get out an up it fam caz this is terrible
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Voted For: mic-wrecker
landslide....no im kiddin it was close...but i think that 3rd-shift takes this because of structure and it was much easier to read....um...his just made more sense then the crazy ones....keep goin the way ur flowin.....lol crazy one you need to fix your structure...you may not think it but it is much easier to read when the structure is nice... i didnt really understand some of the things you were trying to point out..elevate in all areas..aiight.. v/3rd shift |
Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!1
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uppin for votes on this shit again boys and fuckin GURLS
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how many times u gonna change yo name lol^^^^
but yeah famo uppin!!!!! |
Voted For: mic-wrecker
I think that 3rd-Shift got this battle because i feel that 3rd-Shift came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt 3rd-Shift got it was effective and was on point Crazy one u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to 3rd-Shift good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to 3rd-Shift and flow and structure i'll give to 3rd-Shift. V/3rd-Shift There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly (vs JPoll) |
thanks^^^^^^^
uppin this shit...its been open entirely too long |
uppin this god dammit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: the_crazy_one
Hmm...close battle but I'ma say the crazy one got this...but only barely. Everything was close...flow, structure, vocab...everythin. But in the end, crazy one came wit the better punches. No hate. Vote- The Crazy One |
^^^^^^^respect your vote pimp...now back to uppin this for me!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: mic-wrecker
Anger and malice is manifested when cowards say wat they say// My heart pumps blood like well oiled pistons mind set on making him pay// Aint no delay in the rage i display aint no God gon hear da words that u pray// Caz us tanglin wit violent intentions is gon get u like Jesus on his death day// ^the whole beginning was very nice, it only got better towards the end.. you put great emotion into ur topic.. and i like where it leaded.. ur vocab was nice, the imagery was excellent... you're pretty good at topicalz, u took this easily.. good job.. pz.. |
UPPIN FOR THE LAST VOTE!!!!!!!
close this out today...better yet right now...niggaz better vote |
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