J-Will vs J. Pigeon
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-27-04 at 03:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

J. Pigeon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 03:55 PM.

J-Will has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 04:40 PM.

J WILL
THE PROBLEM

I'll butter your gutter / close the shutter/
while i murder your mother plus your brother/ so would of i could of / see my reflection in death personified my words are murder weapons/ I cause more pain then a blatter effection/ i'll do to u like osamin binladen did on 911/HIT YOU WITH EVERYTHING like its no Tomorrow fuck up your chest and send you to heaven to meet Ray Charles/ and trust me nigga i aint goin to feel sorrow/ i'll borrow your glock cuz i got a whole lot of Enemies/ but if u lay figure on me u goin to get Assassinated like John F. Kennedy/

THAT shit was wack spit some shit again for i can rep you again u bitch ass muther fucker
ITS EASY

yo i didnt even try thats the funny thing about it
lol you suck
and next time i aint goin to take it easy on you
JWILL THE PROBLEM N.O.K

Voted For: J. Pigeon

PIGEON Got my vote

better structerd verse, few nice multies an punches...
vocba was okay too, decent drop pigeon..

will ya flow was aight, your structure was horrible! ...couldnt find the rhymes in some places, no hate just improve on ya structure, cause thats an important thing in txt battles....

no hate, just tellin it how i see it

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p e a c e

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[QUOTE=J-Will]J WILL
THE PROBLEM

I'll butter your gutter..... close the shutter...while i murder your mother plus your brother... so would of i could of see my "reflection"in death personified my words are murder "weapons" bitch ass pigeon I cause more pain to u then a blatter "effection".... i'll do to u like osamin binladen did on '911"...HIT YOU WITH EVERYTHING like its no "Tomorrow"... fuck up your chest and send you to heaven to meet Ray Charles.....and trust me nigga i aint goin to feel "sorrow".... i'll borrow your glock cuz i got a whole lot of "enemies"....and u one of them .. but if u lay figure on me .. u goin to get Assassinated like .."john F. Kennedy"

Punchlines
Im 100 percent right that im the "Best"
more accurate then a patanity "Test"
Bring more ...then bullets to your "Chest"

Voted For: J. Pigeon

J pigeon wins this one... i liked his structure a lot more, had multis, personals and harder punches... i liked the line about philly's field also. overall a good drop... no hate tho to j will i mean you had your shit goin good also i just think u need to elevate the structure a lil tho dawg. no offence tho ofcourse. both of yall did good but pigeon takes this one.

VOTE-J.PIGEON

Voted For: J. Pigeon

J.Pigeon
had overall better verse structure was better
had nice wordplay n punches make word bigger
but overall good


J-WILL
seen u do way better ya punches wasn't hittin
as hard should came a lil harder don't under estimate
n e body my nig but ok verse

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Voted For: J. Pigeon

damn this battle

Punches j.p
Flowj.p
Multisj.p
Creativityj.p
Vocabj.p

really will you nice but damn he got you

return the fav links in sig holla

Voted For: J. Pigeon

pigeon...tight tight!!...u had some hard punches mixed with ur wordplay...dats a gd shit yo..i was feelin ur flow and ur structure was decent...vocab was decent too..

j.will..lmao...u said u wouldnt battle me thinking i was gonna prewrite...well readin ya verse i can c u prewrote a keystyle...but besides all that ur verse was off...no fow,no rhymes..no personals,no wordplay..no metaz...you thinkin to kill..but thats not all u gatta talk about in a battle...you gatta diss ya opponent NOT xplain how ya gon kill him..get me?...no hate tho but elevate in ALL aspects...no hate i repeat!!..

return the honest and motivated vote...thanx