*lyrical madnes* vs Lyriclesolja
 

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Check in by: 09-25-04 at 06:47 PM

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*lyrical madnes* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 02:59 AM.

i step up to da myk ur ryhmes r shit they leave me without a hit ur face is wack it looks lyk a piece of shit//
u lyk a nit so anoyin my rhymes os hard they distroyin i bet ur mams ashamed to look at u ill push u donw tha pit//

im suprised strobe anit kicked u of u anit a rapper ur ryhmes r craper mine r **dapper**//
man u so despret u need to become a rapper to get ppl to lyk u witch will never happen u kid napper//

man u cunt u need to get ur 1st **grunt** i bet ur still a virgincoz ur face is wack//
my rhymes that reality opps there gose gravity,ill kick u in da face so go pack ur bags go on pack//

u cant rhyme my nick is lyrical madnes ill drive u crazy my rhymes hit u like **mazey**//
my rhymes r ill so go take a pill ill stress u out without a dout man im drivin u crazy//


**dapper**=wicked
**mazey**=mase

Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 03:54 PM.

Yo you wanna be 'high' but you not 'dope',
you wanna be 'fly' but you dont have any 'hope',
you a wanna be 'dog' butt you a 'mutt',(1)
i saw your battles those dudes 'choped' you up like 'cattle',
and it seemed like you stiched it up but you still got bitched up,
you a 'pussy' i saw those battles you ducked,
sewed a 'clit' to your dick and now your a slut,
you wont win this battle if you had irish luck,
my word play fuckes you up,
worse than a "Night In Paris" homie you gettin fucked.
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1. He is a dogs ass

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

weak battle

flow-lyrical madness, it was pretty good, soljas was sometimes stretched or too short didnt match too good

punches/personals-solja got this,
lmao lyrical madness..........my rhymes that reality opps there gose gravity

number 1 thats eminem^ and 2 it made absolutely no sense for the punch, my rhymes that reality?,< wat is that?, gotta fix those things up to make more sense out of wat your sayin
soljas were ..ok.., they hit harder though in this battle

multies-lyrical madness- had more multies here nothin much to say but wont win u battles if the punches arent good with it

vocab and creativity,solja got both, not as good but still beat lyrical madness in these categories

no hate on anybody honest vote
good luck peace

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dis guy cant even spell lyrical lol
look at his sig lyricle lol

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

yo i had ta give it 2 solja cuz all madnes did wuz say ur face iz wack ur face iz like shit ur face this ur face that plus he made up sum goddamn word i mean wtf iz "mazey" but herez tha break down so i don't get DQ'd

Punchez - Solja (actually made sense)
Flow - Solja (barz were relatively tha same size)
Vocab - Madnes (he did have sum good vocab tho)

but still 2 outta 3 so solja got it

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Voted For: *lyrical madnes*

ill vote for lyrical madnes
he voted for me and will again in bradley_thomas vs NewKid
vote of r me man i need.
and me he wooped th other guys ass as i thought he would
man i hope he wins buy a mile

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

i step up to da myk ur ryhmes r shit they leave me without a hit ur face is wack it looks lyk a piece of shit//
u lyk a nit so anoyin my rhymes os hard they distroyin i bet ur mams ashamed to look at u ill push u donw tha pit//
^ Weak punch, terrible structure and stretched

im suprised strobe anit kicked u of u anit a rapper ur ryhmes r craper mine r **dapper**//
man u so despret u need to become a rapper to get ppl to lyk u witch will never happen u kid napper//
^ Weak Punch again, nothing

man u cunt u need to get ur 1st **grunt** i bet ur still a virgincoz ur face is wack//
my rhymes that reality opps there gose gravity,ill kick u in da face so go pack ur bags go on pack//
^ What the FUCK is wrong with you?

u cant rhyme my nick is lyrical madnes ill drive u crazy my rhymes hit u like **mazey**//
my rhymes r ill so go take a pill ill stress u out without a dout man im drivin u crazy//
^ Okay terrible terrible terrible




Now for solja


Yo you wanna be 'high' but you not 'dope',
you wanna be 'fly' but you dont have any 'hope',
^ okay, not really a punch

you a wanna be 'dog' butt you a 'mutt',(1)
^ Um, kinda weak

i saw your battles those dudes 'choped' you up like 'cattle',
^ Very whack punch

and it seemed like you stiched it up but you still got bitched up,
you a 'pussy' i saw those battles you ducked,
sewed a 'clit' to your dick and now your a slut,
you wont win this battle if you had irish luck,
my word play fuckes you up,
worse than a "Night In Paris" homie you gettin fucked.
^ Okay, the Paris line was the only good thing here. Kinda played though





Wow, this battle was ass. Both MC's were horrible. Lyriclesolja won this because of his closer. Even though it was played it was the only real punch in this entire battle. Both of you need some serious elevation.

This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja
 

Straight forward blatant attacks, very good metaphorical phrase as well.

"i saw your battles those dudes 'choped' you up like 'cattle',
and it seemed like you stiched it up but you still got bitched up,you a 'pussy' i saw those battles you ducked,"

why: lyricalmadness just didn't do it for me, because the rhyme scheme wasn't very creative or rhythm like, didn't really come off as battle like, in a battle i like to hear hard smashmouth lyrics that don't take a long timt to get to the point

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

You get this but not by that much. Both of you could use some elevation(no beef). This wasn't one of the best battles i've read on RV. You win because you had alittle bit more punches and your structure was better.

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Lyriclesolja took this but both were seriously wack as fuck.
*lyrical madnes* structure? flow? you ever heard of them?
if not ask for help off vets.
pz.