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~{EXCLUSIVE}~ vs MIKE HAWK
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting CREW BATTLE E-STYLE vs N.O.K CREW FORUM BANISHMENT BATTLE NO SHOW IS A LOSS Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 09-27-04 at 10:23 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Exclusive DQ'ed for PMing for votes: Quote:
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Mike Hawk has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 10:33 PM.
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ill have my drop lata tonight :D
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~{ExClusive}~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 05:15 AM.
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look hard for my starts to wordplay i dint realy try but i got what i could in but i have a lil wordplay in there but try and look i had some multi's to in there so hit this up quick heres my verse:
Mike hawk whats with that wack ass name and yer fucked e-style shit?... Don’t ask cuz im not the first to quit but ill be the first to make you commit/ Frontin sayin words off the top of my mouth is me to yer wack crew e-style… You gonna lose but make sure yer verse comes out good and worth-my-while/ Your shit is so fake ill just try and make this dope as fuck for my introduction… Ill come out smash you into a liven pulp and end this over more destruction/ I Don’t care if you stop cuz its not workin I reflect it back like im elastic… Your so fake people must think yer plastic, I aint playin cuz im not sarcastic/ If you dont understand the name look it up you might find it in the dictionary… Even if you don’t find it I can still pronounce it and drop you off at the cemetery/ |
ive got my verse just waitin for mike hawks aight 1
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Kid's Exclusive...not, your a goddamn queer.
All them exclusive lines...I used em last year. And this wack bastard should know he's ass. Thats why he was in the back of LI's elevation class. A fag in the street, known to get stucked and jerked. Act stupid, I'll put slashes in you like ya newbie verse. Thinks his crew's strong, I laughed in this fool's face. NOK. ressurected, wonder how they died in the firstplace? They sucked lil nigga, you know I'm truthfully speaking. So get outta my face, cuz now I know whats reeking. :love: |
This was feedback posted for ~{ExClusive}~
O U Know Who Won Lol
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of coarse i won lol uppin
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uppin vote bastards! !
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uppin vote bastards! ! :cussing:
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This was feedback posted for ~{ExClusive}~
checkin tha polls.................................
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WOW@somebody thinking he won.
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
this was a close battle.....let me explaine Mike hawk whats with that wack ass name and yer fucked e-style shit?... Don’t ask cuz im not the first to quit but ill be the first to make you commit no that great of a opener but aight Frontin sayin words off the top of my mouth is me to yer wack crew e-style… You gonna lose but make sure yer verse comes out good and worth-my-while this line was aight could of been better Your shit is so fake ill just try and make this dope as fuck for my introduction… Ill come out smash you into a liven pulp and end this over more destruction/ nice punchline Your shit is so fake ill just try and make this dope as fuck for my introduction… Ill come out smash you into a liven pulp and end this over more destruction/ this line was aight..could of been better Your shit is so fake ill just try and make this dope as fuck for my introduction… Ill come out smash you into a liven pulp and end this over more destruction/ this line failed Kid's Exclusive...not, your a goddamn queer. All them exclusive lines...I used em last year. And this wack bastard should know he's ass. Thats why he was in the back of LI's elevation class. A fag in the street, known to get stucked and jerked. Act stupid, I'll put slashes in you like ya newbie verse. Thinks his crew's strong, I laughed in this fool's face. NOK. ressurected, wonder how they died in the firstplace? They sucked lil nigga, you know I'm truthfully speaking. So get outta my face, cuz now I know whats reeking. all that was played but aight... |
^lol rrigga messed up with my verse o well i still got the vote and he explained it dos tha tprove i win mike hawk?
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You gotta be kidding me...he actually voted on my battle...what type of bullshit is this nigga tryna pulll...go look in the lounge and see if thats fair...no wonder I have that many L's...
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This was feedback posted for Mike Hawk
Man, this is just feedback for my man Mike, fuckin dont mess with E-Style Xclusive, You'll get clapped,
Plus this battle is gonna seem wierd to newb asse, since you aint in NOK no more, but Shabba throws them punches like shotputs nigka. weeerd |
^ Holla!...e-style in the building...
When the fuck will TRIGGA's vote be removed. |
OMG...its not gonna get removed just because it was explained...when its obviously hate...wow.
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
break down..... Flow - Exclusive (rhymez were on point) Structure - Exclusive (separated barz so easily read...barz almost xact same length) Vocab - Exclusive Personalz - Hawk (not realli any but more then exclusive) felt both versez but vote goes 2 exclusive...big up`z ta both Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^what was that haha wack shit lol you can ko that i dont care haha
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Wow...look at that vote...........................
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up!............................................... .................................................. ...
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
This was nothing but an all around ass kicking...lemme show ya why... Opener - Ex...hawk called him a queer, thats weak Closer - Ex...Not only hard, but hawks was self glorified Punches - Ex...Tech, hard, punches, hawk wasnt even trying Personals - Ex...hit harder than hawks one personal Metas - Ex...won this one for the elastic line, dope Multies - Ex...Elastic/plastic/sarcastic line, hawk had none Structure - Tie...both were fine Vocab - Ex...hawks was elementary Wordplay - Ex...hawk didnt have wordplay period Flow - Ex...Wasnt feelin hawks at all As you can see^^^ pretty easy decision for me to pick Exclusive as the winner, very nice drop dawg. Hawk, elevate your punches/personals skills...also, try usin a lot better wordplay man, you can eleavate if you actually put in the effort, no hate dawg, if you need help with anyhting i would be glad to help you out, but in this battle, Ex took it, wtg/ Payce. |
i thanks for that vote. uppin for more!
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WTF???
I'm never battling in frontlines ever again...The guy had no fucking punches, no wordplay, and how was my closer self glorifying...wow. |
Voted For: Mike Hawk
ok~ mike hawk~your opener was good,nice personals on the name, good way to start off,ok, second bar,,,was funny,good L.I. elevation line,nice punch,,3rd bar was ok, then you have the personal about NOK, which was a strong punch, affective here,hence a crew battle,,funny as well, and nice ending lines as well, this was a good verse, you said a lot in a little amount of space, but your punches were hard, your verse was full of them, and your flow never fell off....good job exclusive~your verse was good,you tried to say a lot, but it messed your structure up,your lines were a little stretched as well, and you had no personals, you mentioned e-style but didnt really use it to be effective against him personally,and your punches lacked against him,but overall good drop,because you did have good vocab, but could have set it up better,....... Return the favor................ |
nice vote theresa real vote explained well and he didnt hate on it and that exactly how you do it right there uppin
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
Good Drop From The Both Of Yall Punches: I Prefered Exclusives Punches Kuz They Hit Harder... Mike Yours Were Weak.. Ive Seen Betta From U...Keep Practicin The Both Of Yall Creativity/Word Play: Id Say This Was A Time Conciderin If Was Straight Forward... There Was A Lil From Both But Keep Practicin... Multis: Tie... Both Had This But Couldn't Decide Who Had Better... Personals: Exclusive... Nice Personals Dissin His Crew... Bcuz He Always Does Over-Front His Crew... NOK Died Kuz Ppl Left.. But Nice Try Mike But He Took This Part But Just By Abit Vocab: Exclusive... Much Better... You Still Both Can Elevate Here But Personally I Believe Exlusive Took This Part.. Overall Winner: Exlusive, You Had Better Punches,Vocab N Slightly Better Personals... Mike Work On Your Punches... This Was The Aspect That Let You Down.. Fair Vote.. RTF |
Voted For: Mike Hawk
wow mike hawk came kinda weak, but exclusive came even weaker... mikes punches were more original, the Li's elevation class line was strong... horribly closer though... all in all sub-par but Mike Takes this on originality- and his bars are flowable and not stretched across the page like his Oponents. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
wow glad I came and dropped an honest one... looks like d/r shit vote central in this bitch... lol goodluck.
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^Word...I didnt try, but how....the fuck?
PS:fluid...Empire blacklisted me!!!! |
i knew he would, he does it to everyone i vote on, hes a bitch
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
punches-ec pers-ec stture-mh lyked-ec best verse-ec winner-ec pz out Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^ dumbass..Ill do the same thing.
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
v/Mike Hawk easily takes this Exclusive talks big shit like he some vet.. but he is wack.. i expected a little more from someone with so much talk..better punches from Hawk and flow.. exclusive for you being sucha huge vet u shouldnt have stretchted lines.. you should know that by now.. your verse didnt flow.. bad structure so vote goes to v/Hawk |
Uppin for his last shit vote/ d/r.
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
exclusive gets this for a better verse....he had a larger vocab and his punched his harder...both had a decent structure..but yo mike ya lines were slightly strtched....exclusive had more personals and wordplay while mike had only personals and i didnt notice a punch...so as for me exclusive gets this for a richer verse...^^^ return the vote (my sig) |
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