fotosynthesis vs sHoTTaBoY
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 02:40 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 02:42 PM.

fotosynthesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 02:45 PM.

This Kids All Like ''I Dont Care If U Murder Me'' Like Hes A ''Good-Sport''..
Lets See How Much U Care When Ya ''Vocal Cords'' Are Cut ''Short''..
Broadcasted Over The ''Net'' Like The 'Afgan' Did To Our ''Soldier''..
Bein Unable To Speak Would Mean This Battle Is ''Over'' n I Still Got Lines To ''Spare''..
So I'ma Use These Lines Like A ''Questionnaire''..First Question, Why Is Ya Ass ''Soakin Wet?''..
Im Assuming From Ya ''Lyrical Nonsence'' You Wouldnt ''Get'' Respect On The ''Front Line'' Even If U Stayed ''Pokin-a-Vet''..!
(Pokin As In Sex)

yo when i drop this verse, you gunna be leaving in the back of a black herse, your style is so weak its like you was born with a curse, no matter how hard you try u cant brake it, its like your sitting in front of a thrown and you cant take it. im gonna murder you like a savage, leave your body in a alley to rot and smell like cabbage.

Upin

leave a link n we'll return the favor

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

im given this to
shottaboy reson
punchlines/shottaboy
flow-shottayboy
strucher-shottabiy
i think foto should work on your punches and strucher your flows iight but those thing need work iight but good battle i give this to shottaboy

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 

Cheat.....how Come I Clicked Ill Bing Name And Shottaboy Name Came Up In Tha Battle Thas A Cheat Strait Up

HAHA..MIH BAD I WAS LOOKIN AT THA WRONG THING SHOTTA AINT CHEAT :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: MIH BAD THO

I Was Wonderin What The Fuck You Was Talkin About Then lol

upin......

leave a link an honest vots from us both will be returned

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

omg shotta wins dis battle so fuckin easy he won hands down no matter wot man foto u r weak man u need mor punches n mor personals learn from da best ^^^(shotta)geeze i wudnt battle him again he wud whopp u 4 a 2nd time

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

foto- change ya structure cuz its whack. no punches no nuthin so just peep the tutorials cuz u r WHACK!!!....1/10

shotta- good shit man. i like the punches and personals were on point, u just keep gettin better playa. things in ur shit could get stronger but for now you are doin good.....7/10

return the fav.....shotta i think u voted on everything of mine except for my battle against trigga so u do that. pz.

Upin ya'll.............................................

Upin this fuckin bullshit god damnit

returned favors will be made if u leave links

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

iight since this battle was so short it was pretty weak but it was a landslide...

punches - shotta...they came harder n was more direct

personals - blahh...shotta had 1 in his first bar n photo had absolutely none..catagory goes to shotta

meta4s - blahh...give it 2 shotta again...photo's verse was str8 forward wit weak punches that werent hard at all...no metas that made me think...same wit shotta but at least he had some

wordplay - tie...both verses was simple but shotta's structure is all over the place but i can still read it clear...i jus haev to find out where 1 bar stops n another begins...photo...wow...u dont even no what a BAR is...dis nigga jus spit 1 continuous verse...work on dat

enjoyment - tie...wasnt feelin either punches more over the other but it was proll cuz this battle was madd short...shotta got potential but photo needs to up his game tremendously

Vote - Shottaboy

Upin.....................

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

shot took this shit, man foto u gotta work on ur line structre try splitin them at the end of ur sentences it jsut looks really messy....
opener - shot
closer - foto
flow - shot
punchez - shot
vocab - shot
v. shot, no hate foto but he just took it to ya....
return favour. plz