KaNg kOrRuPt vs Word-Scape
 

Tpoical Battle Rules:
Topic: "The Love of Money"

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 80

Check in by: 09-27-04 at 04:45 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Word-Scape has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 08:16 PM.

im the poorest nigga over here, its a horrible sight
i cant get good food, a nigga aint eatin right
my car is non-existant my daughters almost starved
my son is beggin in da streets and it aint gettin very far
i would love to have money i dont know what i would do
buy a whole box of top ramen, a loaf of bread or two
but all this is a dream, unfactual at the least
diggin in trash cans and dumpsters for a little piece of meat
i look to the skys and pray for life to be easy
have my pockets slightly deeper, my face less greasy
but the fact is im a nothin aint a damn thing funny
cuz this whole world circles around the greedy love of money

BLAH!:thumbup:

KaNg kOrRuPt has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 08:43 PM.

aight not one of my best works but o well here goes nothing

money makes the world go 'round, we're drowned
in a sea of greed, green paper, gold since the playground(since we were younger)
we're bound, like blood hounds to material things
gold's our god, stacking dough, platinums our king
we cling to what we got, take what we can, and that stuff ain't funny
i've heard the root of all evil is "The Love of Money"
but see i'm sick and tired of, money hungry thugs
the drugs, mug shots, murder, blood stained rugs
police men coming to the door at 12 a.m.
"your son has been shot in the chest, his life might end"
but i can't condemn them who be causin mayhem
life in the ghetto's tough there's only a few good men.
the effects of greed and the need to get the green
make people go insane and good boys obscene
we need to clean up our act and start actin together
cuz we're all broke once in a while and under the weather
but there ain't no reason why we can't try hard work
it's better to be poor with a heart then rich and a Jerk

nice spit man, ay everyone we're done!!! vote up!!!!

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Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

i vote for kang korRupt
ayo that was iight

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uppin 4 votes ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

im the poorest nigga over here, its a horrible sight
i cant get good food, a nigga aint eatin right
my car is non-existant my daughters almost starved
my son is beggin in da streets and it aint gettin very far
i would love to have money i dont know what i would do
buy a whole box of top ramen, a loaf of bread or two
but all this is a dream, unfactual at the least
diggin in trash cans and dumpsters for a little piece of meat
i look to the skys and pray for life to be easy
have my pockets slightly deeper, my face less greasy
but the fact is im a nothin aint a damn thing funny
cuz this whole world circles around the greedy love of money
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT GOOD VERSE HERE,,,,,HAD GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,GOOD IMAGINARY,,,,,,,,,,GOOD PAINTIN AN PICTURE,,,,,,,,AND U PUTTIN YOSELF IN THE PICTURE,,,,,,BUT IT NEEDS MORE FEELINGS AIGHT



money makes the world go 'round, we're drowned
in a sea of greed, green paper, gold since the playground(since we were younger)
we're bound, like blood hounds to material things
gold's our god, stacking dough, platinums our king
we cling to what we got, take what we can, and that stuff ain't funny
i've heard the root of all evil is "The Love of Money"
but see i'm sick and tired of, money hungry thugs
the drugs, mug shots, murder, blood stained rugs
police men coming to the door at 12 a.m.
"your son has been shot in the chest, his life might end"
but i can't condemn them who be causin mayhem
life in the ghetto's tough there's only a few good men.
the effects of greed and the need to get the green
make people go insane and good boys obscene
we need to clean up our act and start actin together
cuz we're all broke once in a while and under the weather
but there ain't no reason why we can't try hard work
it's better to be poor with a heart then rich and a Jerk
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT NICE MAYNE GOOD VERSE RIGHT HERE,,,,,,,,,,U HAD,,,,,,,,,,FLOW,,,,,,,,,IMAGINARY,,,,,,,,,,,PAIN TIN AN PICTURE,,,,,,,,,FEELINGS,,,,,,,,,AND BEING REALISTIC

WORDSCAPE-U HAD GOOD FLOW BUT I WAS LOOKIN FOR MORE DEEPER FEELINGS,,,,,,,U HAD GOOD IMAGINARY,,,,,,AND PAINTIN AN PICTURE WAS GOOD


KANG-KORUPT-IT LOOKED IT LIKE U KNOW WHAT U SAYIN,,,,,,GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,NICE WORDPLAYS,,,,,,,,,GOOD IMAGINARY,,,,,,,,AND BEING MORE REALISTIC

^^^^^^^^^ THATS WHY I VOTED FOR KANG KORUPT

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

umm yeah i definitely think kang korrupt tried harder in his verse. i see word scape came from a different point of view but it jus wasnt workin. kang had more feeling in his, more emoition definitely better vocab. word scape i think u jus need to expand ur vocab

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

uppin 4 votes ya'll!!!!!

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

kang got diz hands down
much more enjoyable verse, da puns were sickening an hiz verse connected much better
word ya flow was awful, i wuznt feelin da melody, i couldnt get into da puns n personals u used, sorry homie, but datz jus how i see it yo

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

man u ripped the shit kang,,,,,,,, honestly u had flow and it had reality man and structure//
man u kinda make me see wat life really is man honestly that wuz sum nasty shit ........u have my vote,,,,,,,,, but really man evry1 has an opputunity to wrk man like word scape man u kept on talkin bout how poor u are but kang had values of both ,,,and u must b pretty desperate to luk in a trash can,,,,, and realy evry1 has oppurtunitez to like wrk and go 2 skool,, man and b smart fuk wat am i doin .. im bekomin spirtual,,, anywayz kang ate this kat