poison vs Xdecent
 

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Check in by: 09-28-04 at 04:50 PM

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Xdecent has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 04:58 PM.

yo poison...you gone drop ur verse...ur da 1 that made the callout

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 12:01 AM.

u shouldnt battle me cuz my shits harsher than listerene/
u'l get hit wit a elbo, leave u pale yellow and ur pockets clean/
if u walk by i'll blast my gat like its a rocket beam
i like to rhyme by myself cuz im better alone
i never walk around without the vest and the crome
plus my jewls are rocky like sylvester stalone
if i bust my gat, its in ya chest or ur dome
ur rhymes are rusty g
u cant fuck with me
thats y u probly hiddin in protective custody

yo r u gonna rhymmee or did i do that for nothin??

the callout...den ur the one thats supposed to go first....




so drop ur verse den imma go




~1~

i already droped my verse
look up^
its a 10 liner

i dont see it



try copying and pasting it back up again...i guesss



peace

u shouldnt battle me cuz my shits harsher than listerene/
u'l get hit wit a elbo, leave u pale yellow and ur pockets clean/
if u walk by i'll blast my gat like its a rocket beam
i like to rhyme by myself cuz im better alone
i never walk around without the vest and the crome
plus my jewls are rocky like sylvester stalone
if i bust my gat, its in ya chest or ur dome
ur rhymes are rusty g
u cant fuck with me
thats y u probly hiddin in protective custody

X drops hot "tracks" so prepare for a full throttle "attack".....i guess this guy doesnt notice how much he is "wack"....so imma wipe his "shit"(verse) up nice n slow like usin "charmin" to wipe ur "ass-crack"//

U lost already, no sense in "complaining"....cuz when it comes to the end im da truest emcee "remaining".....ur flowz wack so its urself u shuld be "blaming"....so whether ur "Sergfield" or "Roy" ur stuff still isnt that "entertaining"//

my words elevate with "amp"(plitude)....we know u suck....so imma do u a favor....place my flow on a "stamp"...and fedex it to ur house...just so u can get a "peice-of-da-champ"//

i tear rapperz up in different "sections".....poisons losin this like a bad "connection".....i'll render this dude, leave em scared of his own "reflection".....ko him and have him quick to change his whole identity like "witness-protection"//

u have him "misunderstood"...hes not able to be as "good" as you think he "could"......his lyrics are to soft..he thinks bout participating in this lyrical event which he "should"..but he chooses to "BEAT-around-the-bush" like "madsturbatin" in the "woods"//

dat shuld be it.....dis is my furst battle on dis site...lookin for a win

X drops hot "tracks" so prepare for a full throttle "attack".....i guess this guy doesnt notice how much he is "wack"....so imma wipe his "shit"(verse) up nice n slow like usin "charmin" to wipe ur "ass-crack"//

U lost already, no sense in "complaining"....cuz when it comes to the end im da truest emcee "remaining".....ur flowz wack so its urself u shuld be "blaming"....so whether ur "Sergfield" or "Roy" ur stuff still isnt that "entertaining"//

my words elevate with "amp"(plitude)....we know u suck....so imma do u a favor....place my flow on a "stamp"...and fedex it to ur house...just so u can get a "peice-of-da-champ"//

i tear rapperz up in different "sections".....poisons losin this like a bad "connection".....i'll render this dude, leave em scared of his own "reflection".....ko him and have him quick to change his whole identity like "witness-protection"//

u have him "misunderstood"...hes not able to be as "good" as you think he "could"......his lyrics are to soft..he thinks bout participating in this lyrical event which he "should"..but he chooses to "BEAT-around-the-bush" like "madsturbatin" in the "woods"//

can a mod please delete the first post of my verse that i dropped....i just realized i posted it in da wrong place:)



thankz....voterz...dunt get confused that i dropped the same verse twice


uppin^^^^^^^^^^

damn



can we get some votes in here?




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Voted For: Xdecent

WOW other kid was extremely wack no comment for that...

Punches:x
personals:x x
wordplay:x
Multis:x

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we need some votes ppl comon

Voted For: Xdecent

i hated both verse.
1.neither had flow or structure especially Xdecent, had no flow. poison had no verse basically, but xdecent had da more complete verse, so i would have to go wit X

alright...thanx i gues...uppin.......................

This was feedback posted for Xdecent
 

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This was feedback posted for Xdecent
 

X got this..... ...

cant vote tho....

just checkin polls...

Voted For: Xdecent

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a bad touch to POISON flow (to much self glorifacation) AND it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, XDECENT had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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Voted For: Xdecent

I like this battle it seem to have some personal conflict in it but here how The King Breaks it down

Personals..X
Punchez..X
Multi..P
Meta's..x
Vocab..x
Structure..P

So there You Have it folks i hope i helped in a good way ...........now RTF in my Battle against Hang-man Please
Thank you you are so kind

Voted For: Xdecent

clearly whatchamacall won this battle.... he murdered wit punches and personals.. and had the superior flow overall....

next time u in a battle poison write as much as u can becuz if you don't then you are askin' for no votes....

return the favor on my battle against Youngsoulja ....
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Voted For: Xdecent

Xdecent: fix your structure, yo punches were aight on this, not hard hittin tho. flow was lacking due to your structure but overall elevate way more

poison: work on yo punches, they need improving. decent flow & structure, but overall work on yo punches tho..and the structure to it