Automatik™ vs Fiya Spitter
 

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10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-26-04 at 11:30 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Fiya Spitter has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 11:02 AM.

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"Can't you See My Perfection?"

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^His old sig (Was something like that)


(1)- his AIM name
(2)- old sig (look at top)

ok, I posted my verse, so you're up. pc

AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 11:10 AM.

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Voted For: Fiya Spitter

aight battle man..............

Fiya Spitter nice drop overall, nuthin in there that sucked ass in my opinion, although no need to explain punches at the end. ure flow was on from start t ofinish, a nice structure, but puttin shit in the centre is kinda pointless unless it means sumthin, or so i was told when i did it. nice wordplay in there, no rhymes that got too complex, but i dont know maybe u werent tryin, sumtimes i do that. punches were gud, not all of them hit hard, but majority were gud, personals were gud, nice play off his name and his old sig, funny shit. nuthin over creative, just a basic rippin verse, so all in all gud shit!!!

AutoMATIK nice verse to, but yo man there aint no need to enlarge the text, unless there is MC's on here that are partially blind. ure flow was nice, the opener was pretty choppy and rhymin "want trouble" with "stunt devil" aint really a perfect rhyme, although it did rhyme a little. wordplay was aight, nuthin over complex but it was better than fiya spitters. punches were there, but overall i think fiya brought harder punches. personals were aight, nuthin too creative, u shud try playin off names and sigs and shit, bit of self-glorification at the end, no one really likes that, but i suppose everyone does it. overall a nice verse but i think fiya beat u!!!

VOTE: Fiya Spitter

i peeped ure shit, return the favour and peep my shit thats in my siggy.........

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

I thought this was the best verse it had better flow and nice inners amd a few multies. This verse had better punches overall it was the most entertaining to read with lots of personals and more creativity plus complexity.

^lol @ you hate votin'. This shit wasn't explained either. *PMin' strobe to remove it*

And Automatik look at the threads in LL and how I'm battlin' him. He is a hate vtoe, I hate him he hates me. So yea... uppin' for

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

iight Fiya Spitter


Yo verse couldn't be electrifyin' if you spat in a pot-a-static
At gettin' losses after losses, yo ™ is "Automatik"
^^ROFL LMAO HOLY SHIT KILLA OPENER 9/10

I ain't gonna show my verse early, cuz this ain't no show and tell
How can you be a lyrical menace, when we kno you cannot spell? (1)
^^^good shit 8/10

You think you're 20/20, and that you're the perfect dude
But yo record is 17/21, I guess perfection ain't for you (2)
^^ god damn son 10/10

You throwin' a personal punch, is like a baby not bein' whiney
You try and hide yo no punch verse, by makin' yo font all tiny
^^some1 help this kid he is on FIRE o.0 9/10

I ain't the one to tattle, but I gotta spread the word
That you spit verses more blank, than the shit of a fuckin' bird
^^wasnt that HOTT 6/10

Lookin' at E Looch's avatar, is the only time you'll have cash
You predicted how fast you'll lose this battle... in a "flash
^^ okay closer 7/10

overall an HOTT verse personals punchs very good


now for AutoMATIK™



My 'blazin scripz' it's easily defeatin this 'choke'
Im 'takin hints' you call yoself Dope cuz you're 'easily smoked'
^^^^ 7/10 wasnt that good

It's Too Easy Battlin Kids ... This Little homee dont 'want Trouble'
Quit Rappin ... And Stick To Being Lil Romeo's 'Stunt Devil'
^^ would have been better if u said stunt double dont devil 5/10

Flatten you out until you're see through, like displaying ‘Stormed Page of Vectors’
Eating you alive, Sh!tting out bones and teeth, like re-incarnations of ‘Hannibal Lecto
^^ nice nice hot shit 8.5/10

These Cats Are Done My Rhyme Spit Immaculate Verbs Just To Leave Yo ‘Head Chizzled’
This Battles Done When My Verse Drop You ‘Drawin Blanks’ Like Broken 'Lead Pencils'
^^^ROFL 10/10 that was dope!

My Wins is ‘AutoMATIK™’ … my flow will leave you mentally shocked, Im ‘causin Static’
I see you 3-0,you’re not use to losin … but battling me im causin 'habbits’
^^^ wansnt that good of an closer but 7/10

AutoMATIK™ u started off weak very weak at that but u came hard towards the end good punches and stuff okay structure but i think fiya came harder no hate

v/fiya

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Pretty weak battle

Auto....I hate dat font size, your flow was good but your structure was ass, your punches were not hitting an u didn't have many for dat matter, personals were attempted but were really weak. no metas, or wordplay an only a few multies, not a impressive verse at all.

Fiya...not much better got it by a hair with that opener good name flip, the rest of ya lines were weak personals, but your flow killed his an structure was way better, metas not really, wordplay a lil nothing noticeable, an no multies, an your vocab was really basic but u still won wit a slightly overall better verse.

Vote: Fiya

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

auto- not impressed. not many punches and the ones that you did have were played as fuck. just think outside the box more, and try to hit more personals......5/10

fiya- ehh started aight and then ended whack but because you had more punches and less played lines i gotta give it to you. seriously get more complex tho, cuz when u start battlin vets, this aint gunna work.....7/10

^^those were being generous....RTF..pz.

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

wow!!! i think it was pretty close but auto jus came out on top i think. his punches were pretty nice n the flow i was likin the vocab coulda bin a lil betta but u pulled out on top

vote=auto

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Voted For: Fiya Spitter

ok fiya good opener here lol at second bar good personal lol at 3rd bar thats funny as fuck the link killed it 4th bar no that was corny good ender also 5th bar was ok good strcuture and flow here a 7/10
automatik dope fucking vocab and flow here good punches but no real disses or personals hit and thats what wins battles you had a real nice verse but in a battle that type of shit dont mesearure up structure is good a 6.5/10
basically a close battle here i think automatik could win but he slacked and dropped a verse for a track not a battle and fiya killed him with personals
vote-fiya


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