Da Point vs Fiya Spitter
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-27-04 at 11:36 AM

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Da Point has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 11:39 AM.

okay make dis quick for dis herb
flya spitter nothin but a bull shitter thinks he's a nigga fuck you i'll pull ya da trigga
admit it your shit when I see your shit it's gonna be liek a fuckin singer
you don't got good verses only herbish start spittin like some ger man
you fuckin bitch ass gerbal i'll slit your fuckin wrists u sound like my gran!
this punk is shitless and he got a problem wid MENTAL SICKNESS!
just a ignorant dipshit talkin about suicide m8 is just plain thinkness!
this hoe is dickless he has no intrest thinks hes da best
he's a rap guest someone unknown he's got no talent unblessed
This boys a cock muncher whos gonna get bullet hole punture
don't worry i'll hunt ya i'll rip your ugly face and stun gun yer
you migit your a pissed boy on computer who's growin 2 be a loser
a microphone abuser wid no punches but pussys about me and accuses

Fiya Spitter has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 11:57 AM.

(1)- Sticks and stones-Dicks and balls (fuckin' fag :) )

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Voted For: Fiya Spitter

ok~
SPuL~your verse had me laughin,i liked the sticks and stones line, and the history line,actually your opener was good too, nice way to start off.. and your flow was on point, some nice punches and personals,this was good, yours was easy to read, your structure was perfect......
DaPoint~your verse was good too, but you had some trouble with the flow of this verse, you should have seperated your pauses and breaks, as well as punches, and corrected your spelling, but you had some good punches too, but this might throw readers off...but nice job both..

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Ok, this bitch ass hoe, hates everyone includin' him self
If he had self pride, why would he ask EVERYONE and their cousin for help?
lmao, good opener with a decent personal
When I look at yo verse, I choose to jus remember "Sticks and stones"
You do that too.... but yo gay ass begins to bone (1)
nice punch, pretty decent
Don't get excited, cuz those lines were jus the start
If I wanted to hear from an "ass", I'd jus let out a stinky fart
lol, decent punch man
Yo lines all suck, why you rap still is a mystery
Jus like my social studies book, I'm gon make yo ass history
another decent punch, keeps em comin
Every time you spit yo shit gets worse and even worse
Jus like the Red Sox, I'm gon leave yo ass cursed
nice punch again, baseball....
My verse will have you out of breath, you be thinkin' you Darth Vader
I'll make you start to dissappear, like you were set on fader
that is a good closer, best i seen in a while

okay make dis quick for dis herb
flya spitter nothin but a bull shitter thinks he's a nigga fuck you i'll pull ya da trigga
admit it your shit when I see your shit it's gonna be liek a fuckin singer
pretty poor opener, ok multies, but 2nd line made no sense
you don't got good verses only herbish start spittin like some ger man
you fuckin bitch ass gerbal i'll slit your fuckin wrists u sound like my gran!
that was weak, i mean weak, did u say u wnated to slit your grans wrists?
this punk is shitless and he got a problem wid MENTAL SICKNESS!
just a ignorant dipshit talkin about suicide m8 is just plain thinkness!
thinkness? did he tlk bout suicide? ok punch maybe
this hoe is dickless he has no intrest thinks hes da best
he's a rap guest someone unknown he's got no talent unblessed
best punch i seen from you, ever
This boys a cock muncher whos gonna get bullet hole punture
don't worry i'll hunt ya i'll rip your ugly face and stun gun yer
too much net thug, how you gonna do that man, this is text battle[b]
you migit your a pissed boy on computer who's growin 2 be a loser
a microphone abuser wid no punches but pussys about me and accuses
[b]weak closer, and poor punch

Sinner, elevate, SPuL nigka, thas dope

aiight, uppin' this shit............................

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Spul- your verse was much better i thought ...but dont get my wrong the other dude had an aight verse but yours was better...your punches hit hard too...some were kinda funny...your structure was good very eays to read and everything ...so overall ya got my vote for better verse and punches i thought honest vote...

Da Point- your verse was good too...but your punches were aight but seem just didnt seem to connect or hit hard...your structure was decent but could use a little fixer upper...ya know...overall elevate more kid...

v/Spul...

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Vote-Fiya Spitter
came harder no real punches but
was still good nice flow overall decent
verse


Da Point
seriously wut was da point i mean
ya verse was really wack u had no punches
no wordplay n ok structure u need 2 elevate
a lil more but u'll do good after a few battles

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Ok, this bitch ass hoe, hates everyone includin' him self
If he had self pride, why would he ask EVERYONE and their cousin for help?
^ Kinda a weak opener man

When I look at yo verse, I choose to jus remember "Sticks and stones"
You do that too.... but yo gay ass begins to bone (1)
^ Again, not a strong punch

Don't get excited, cuz those lines were jus the start
If I wanted to hear from an "ass", I'd jus let out a stinky fart
^ Hehe, juvenile but fun

Yo lines all suck, why you rap still is a mystery
Jus like my social studies book, I'm gon make yo ass history
^ An average punch

Every time you spit yo shit gets worse and even worse
Jus like the Red Sox, I'm gon leave yo ass cursed
^ Hahahaha, Red Sox....smh

My verse will have you out of breath, you be thinkin' you Darth Vader
I'll make you start to dissappear, like you were set on fader
^ An alright closer


now for Point


flya spitter nothin but a bull shitter thinks he's a nigga fuck you i'll pull ya da trigga
admit it your shit when I see your shit it's gonna be liek a fuckin singer
^ Doesn't really rhyme, empty multis

you don't got good verses only herbish start spittin like some ger man
you fuckin bitch ass gerbal i'll slit your fuckin wrists u sound like my gran!
^ Not a good punch at all

this punk is shitless and he got a problem wid MENTAL SICKNESS!
just a ignorant dipshit talkin about suicide m8 is just plain thinkness!
^ Again, pretty weak. Nothing strong about it

this hoe is dickless he has no intrest thinks hes da best
he's a rap guest someone unknown he's got no talent unblessed
^Doesn't really make much sense. Bad grammer

This boys a cock muncher whos gonna get bullet hole punture
don't worry i'll hunt ya i'll rip your ugly face and stun gun yer
^ Yer? Yer? Are you some kind of a hick?

you migit your a pissed boy on computer who's growin 2 be a loser
a microphone abuser wid no punches but pussys about me and accuses
^ An alright closer




Basically Spul just came a lot harder with his punches. His were actually on point and hit harder. Point has a lot of elevating to do. Stay Up.