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Critic 09-27-04 07:38 AM

Free and needing a crew!
 
Sup people I'm new to this site need to roll with a hott crew holla @ me

Topical Key:

Simplistic words adjacent to others with profound meaning
Feeling to express in tongue,.. Impossible minds still racing
Muted by my captures, circulation cut, legs tightly fastened
Blinded by them, by gunpoint I was taken felling frightened
The atmosphere is damp, like I’m trapped in a tiny dry sauna
Airs really musky, smells of urine, this is slow mental torture
Voices getting stronger, dialect in verses I can’t comprehend
I don’t want to be interrogate or torture unconscious I pretend
Footsteps enter my hell, I hear the safety click out of position
I need to reaction now,,. or will this be my last final decision
I need to unleash my rage to brake out of the hell I’m hidden
The primal instinct explode as I brake out, my actions forbidden



Take it easy

iamthatdude87 09-27-04 08:17 AM

yo go drop that verse off at the c.s try out thread......the links in my sig.....o and if u didnt already know we the dopest crew on this site......so go figure....peace

Critic 09-27-04 08:43 AM

Sup yeah I will drop a try out tonight not really feeling this verse.


PC.

Status 09-27-04 11:55 AM

that verse had mad potiential just make so the words rhyme a lil better...becuase the way i read it that shit didnt rhyme but yeah kid just elevate and hit us back

Parallel 09-29-04 08:29 PM

that was fuckin dope man tryout for psa pot smokers alaince aight man no tryout needed that was the best newb ive ever heard in my life:D

-Eternal- 09-29-04 09:27 PM

come tryout for 50th Brigade

G Deuce 09-29-04 09:30 PM

PSA is where its at man. Come join the Dynasty. Its your destiny.

Scenario 09-29-04 09:32 PM

try out for the 50th Brigade, we looking hot

e-dubz 09-29-04 09:34 PM

CS..we the dopest on the site

BIGPAPPA76 09-29-04 09:38 PM

50th brigade is THE place to be. peep our roster and youll know why, peace

Implicit 09-29-04 09:46 PM

ayo man come to 50th Brigade. i like that verse and i like ur style

runway 09-29-04 11:08 PM

need a hott crew
 
yo i need a hott crew so help me out


its like a slam 2 da face
tell me hows this 360 taste
now u jus anotha posta, yomamas disgrace
trus me, ull get dropped, wen u go against my team
lose yo self-esteem, when i thro anotha screen
when i perform anotha dream
its reality ofcourse
i b rokin da goggles, horace grant use 2 sport
u comin up short, like spudd webb
jus start walkin
ill pull a mutumbo and let my finga do da talkin
cuz im only 14, but my rhymes r fo real
dont b surprised if shady recordz offers me a deal
if u interested in ne single word i got2 say
jus put me on yo crew and u b hearin me all day


if uz like wut uz heard holla bak........e-mail me or sumthin

God 09-29-04 11:13 PM

A.I All you need

50Cal. 09-29-04 11:15 PM

lol you dont see under his name we got him already this is closed

-Eternal- 09-29-04 11:17 PM

^naw... join up 50th Bridage fam lol

Critic 10-07-04 08:06 AM

Seems Like I'm Free again holla @ me if you want me in.

NO SHIT CREWS PLEASE!!!

iamthatdude87 10-07-04 09:12 AM

yo hit me valors crew...phab-yu-lous....we upin coming....nuff ced

Mad Dog 10-07-04 09:44 AM

Blah all them other crews CritiC A.I nuff said :thumbup:

Critic 10-08-04 07:45 AM

Sup I'm working on a new open mic which will be droped tonight,,...

Mad Dog 10-08-04 08:15 AM

Word dawg...i'll hit it up for ya...and um...did i say A.I...nuff said...i think i did :thumbup:

Critic 10-08-04 08:17 AM

Lol yeah man you know that, got loads of old fam rolling in A.I looks like thats
where I'm heading if you got room DV.

Mad Dog 10-08-04 08:22 AM

I'll talk to him...he's cool

Critic 10-08-04 08:31 AM

Thanks man I gonna be stepping to audio soon haha, droping some audio
topicals and shit, stay tuned for that. DV knows me so he should be cool
I just don't know whats going on with the council no ones replying to my
pm's.

Red Stroke 10-08-04 11:08 PM

aye yo
tha mic gettin hott cuzz im blowin up tha stage
my rekord 0-1...but ill still tear up this page
ill up my rekords watch me go on a killin rage
ill murder niggas with lines now they can join "murder inc"
i leave niggas "brain dead" with rhymes they "cant think"
i spit more "bars" at you then "soap"
leave ya neck hangin from a tree with a thick rope
my trigger finger start squuezin leave nigga into "bones" like "snoop"
or kill you slow with ^tha rope turn you "blue" now you can be a "fruit loop"
when i spit niggas start runnin like some body blastin nines
thats enuff for now niggas you dont get no more lines

Red Stroke 10-08-04 11:23 PM

aiight cuzzo ill check that out

Red Stroke 10-08-04 11:38 PM

nigga im still spittin like "clips reloaden"
my "chrome" bling heavy it will leave ya ass frozen
like "water" in a "freezer"
you niggas lines cant be "understaned" its like a "brain teaser"
consider what i say
im not tha best but i put niggas away
if you fuck with me you'll be lucky to survive till tomorrow
like blades i put my rhyme down ya throat and tell you swallow
when i post replys
i hurt niggas eyes cuzz its frightning
you "shocked" that im back like "lightning"
ill send you niggas to RV hevaen
fuckin niggas talk shit to much ya mouths open 24/7 like 7-11
with Crip from LB right "behind me"
standin in tha front and crews still cant "find me"

Red Stroke 10-08-04 11:46 PM

you niggas want more?? you niggas want more niggas huh??

Parallel 10-09-04 12:25 AM

if your still free dont know coem to rhymin aresenals man we dont got are forum yet but we will soon... we almost got enough in are crew..we pretty hot right now

Red Stroke 10-09-04 12:35 AM

you talkin to me cuzz?????

Red Stroke 10-09-04 01:12 AM

look okay imma spit againe
cuzz niggas cant comprehend
what im tryn say
nigga look my way


i got beats and im flowin like "crazy"
a "phsyko" with raps and i got niggas retirin like Jay-z
pussie ass nigga tryn and run they mouth at me
ill put "red spots" on ya face like "acne"
i dont reall care if i get recruted or not
give me a little bit time to elivate more and imma make vets rott
like a body layin out for days
and tha sun beatin down on and makin it blaze
you fonnie ill "shut ya down" like a "dell"
tha flames i thorw is hotter then hell
you chumps is fake i can "read" you like a "book"
this lines you know how long it took?
it took a minute enuff time for YOU to fuck ya gurl and come back
talkin all Gangsta but ya never made a Gun Clap
i still see niggas yappin
so yall better stay tuned to see whats gone happen

Red Stroke 10-09-04 01:17 AM

sorry for usin ya thred cuzzo lol i dont know im just spittin some shit hommie thanx tho
one(one)

KaNg kOrRuPt 10-09-04 02:01 AM

^^^^ay that was weak too and why don't you just spit in the open mic thread man. that's where you're supposed to go freestyle. anyways you need to elevate in order to get in any good crews around here

Red Stroke 10-09-04 02:15 AM

ha ha whatever nigga im new in this bitch so i aint gotta do shit im just freestylin i aint lookin for no crew really im just doin this shit for fun nigga like i said so stop ridin dicks for i have my hommie NEWKID murk you when he get back from VA


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