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fotosynthesis vs Verbal Phenom
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-27-04 at 03:32 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 03:08 PM.
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fotosynthesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 03:11 PM.
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Fotosynthesis Is A Poor The Only Time You See Green Is Watering Plants
You A Bitch Man Nobody Feels Ya Spit Like Defective Kick-Stands Ya Speakers Can't "Bear" Ya Thats Why Left They In Hibernation Ya Can't See Wat Ya Facin Thats Why Ya Last Mic Died of Dehidration Claiming u Da Champ, Huh Maybe In Wrestling Coz Everyone Know Ya Fake Shy N Not Reliable Dats Why When U Do Live They Pay Da "Going-Rate" Ya Access Is restricted I'll Leave ya Ripped Up Like An Unwanted Ex's Clothes You "Sad" And Ya Make Me "Laugh" Them Aint Punches More Like "Depressin Jokes" Should Be Enough... If Ya Dont Get The Punches...Don't Vote! |
yo fotosynthesis gunna take verbal phenoms energy and turn it into light/ shine it so bright he wont be able to sleep at night/ he will be walkin around deprived of sleep for years when this battles done you wont be hearing any cheers,peeps or sqeaks youll never be able to spit another verse, when people ask what happen to verbal phenom theyll say fotosynthesis recycled you first.
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Voted For: Verbal Phenom
Nice Drop... Punches - Verbal Multis - Verbal Personals - Verbal Creativity - Verbal Set Up - Verbal Verbal Took This Easy... Much Easier To Read N Punches Hit Harder... Foto Your Drop Was Good But It Was Simple.. Set It Up Better N Use Personals N Work On Ur Punches One Sided Battle... No Hate Jus Votin Fair... RTF Peep Sig |
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Voted For: Verbal Phenom
This 1 goes to Verbal phenom he Did his Thing, Good openin Verze Punchlinez good, Not dat Good of of a Structure Brought it 2 him hard.... Keep doin ya thing Verbal Phenom fotosynthesis openin verse kinda good, Structure lacked a lil bit no good punches or not at all i think, kinda of a weak verse dat he brought though keep tryin dawg... no hatin or notin.... |
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Voted For: Verbal Phenom
ok~ verbal:you verse had good flow, the opening bar had a nice effective punch to start this off, some good multies in there as well,nice wordplay in the "bear, thats why left they in hibernation", line was good, you had some good punches towards the end and you kept the momentum, nice job foto:your verse had the flow, but you lacked in punches and personals, but it wasnt too bad, liked your last line, but i'm going to give this to verbal phenom because of wordplay and vocabulary... Return the favor............. |
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Voted For: Verbal Phenom
This is a one sided battle Verbal takes this on all accounts better punches that hit harder, more personals, and punches were more creative. Foto your shyt was too basic, elivate a little you'll get there just keep battle'n try and take shit away from every battle. |
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