-..Jono..- vs *lyrical madnes*
 

Battle Rules:

Read the rules, since 'Im' settin it up clearly
10 Lines Mininum
20 lines maximum
'30' to drop
'5' to check in..

Agree, only if you carefully read the rules homie..


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-27-04 at 05:16 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

-..Jono..- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 04:50 PM.

*lyrical madnes* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 04:58 PM.

im only doin 6 lines tha was my rule

..Told you if I was to set it up, they would be mine..you chose to still tell me to set it up, n the thread i stated read the rules carefully, write what you got, lets go

ya call yaself yungd ur a old fart i bet just becoemin a pedo//
ur face so ugly u never had a gal u just act lyk 1 givin it a while lyk a low*//
ur life is a misary u need to go to e-bay get a life cut in slices with a knife//
i kill get 1 of my gubns just 4 u make it a bozuka so it looks good die 1 shot get a life//
u such a cunt cant get a shag ull be the biggest virgin in da world get it in the record**//
i shall not be beat by u when i win dis i will celabrate when i win u call me lord//
fuckin nob i said 6 linez so he puts 10minimum is he a dick of just thick i anit worked it out//
im gonnawin hit him hard put his face in mud hes the new discriase i win without a dout//
kick him punch him my rhymes will do shit head go take a poo on ur face is ya game wack ur name//
ur gonna lose im hittin u to hard u can stand up much longer u fall to da ground my ryhmes hit u like game//

*=(low)life
**=hard to get in

ya call yaself lame as ur just a old fart i bet just becoemin a pedo//
ur face so ugly u never had a gal u just act lyk 1 givin it a while lyk a low*//
ur life is a misary u need to go to e-bay get a life cut in slices with a knife//
i kill get 1 of my gubns just 4 u make it a bozuka so it looks good die 1 shot get a life//
u such a cunt cant get a shag ull be the biggest virgin in da world get it in the record**//
i shall not be beat by u when i win dis i will celabrate when i win u call me lord//
fuckin nob i said 6 linez so he puts 10minimum is he a dick of just thick i anit worked it out//
im gonnawin hit him hard put his face in mud hes the new discriase i win without a dout//
kick him punch him my rhymes will do shit head go take a poo on ur face is ya game wack ur name//
ur gonna lose im hittin u to hard u can stand up much longer u fall to da ground my ryhmes hit u like game//

*=(low)life
**=hard to get in

o shit i posted it 2ce the 2nd 1 was the right 1 soz peeps

you never had no realistic 'Abil-ity', to come 'Swingin' Purposely 'Dissin me'
the way i pop drinks i put the 'Crisp' in 'G', you a fag n fags get 'Frisked for free'
The kind who prfers kerry on war homie, n my 'opinion' you'll jus bitch n flee
That aint National Sec-urity, if your a 'Vet' than we all should practice AWOL Mut-iny..

"Mutiny's" goin against 'my' authority, so synonomous with n aids patient your a mutant
niggas tell you to quit actin stupid, Dre drops 'Chronic 01' n your askin who produced it
your the high school goof pick, foreshadowed to be the same at his high-school 're-union'
to be the same shape he went to school wit, the body size of a wet bent toothpick

I don' care who your crew is, i jus care what your punk ass can bring to the table
You a righteous nigga readin bible tales?, cus i got enough 'Cain' to make yo ass 'Abel'
to feel more unstable, than when n 'impotent' bitch feels more than able
to prevail with pre-paid viagra under the table, fuckin more seniors than mae young n Mabel..

I'm all over this sale, the same way white is on a good grain of mothers made rice
i got a 'Bounty' on yo head, with ted barker screamin for Jono the 'Price is Right'

uppin...lets get this shit closed, uppin for votes with adequete opinion...

uppin this shit
honest votes only
no bullshit vote either

Voted For: -..Jono..-

this was a pretty equal battle, the strucure was aigh for both, i think some lines were streched to much. I liked the vocab for Jono, it was tight, and the punches were aight. The Personals hit when they were used, but for Jone it hurt when they heat
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Voted For: -..Jono..-

you got this jono
holla at me....





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ight, uppin for votes, get this shit closed...hollah back with votes with information

uppin, lets get this shit closed..post honest votes with feedback explained, peace

uppin for feedback n votes, hollah back...apperciate the feedback so far

uppin for feedback n votes, hollah back...apperciate the feedback so far

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ight, uppin for feedback along with votes, lets get these battles closed

uppin, lets get some adequete feedback and votes.........

Voted For: -..Jono..-

ok:
lyrical~your verse was decent,, your punches were strong here, but work on your spelling and grammar, it would help your flow, but good job
jono~you had nice multies, great flow, nice structure, your vocabulary was strong, and you used original punches that hit hard here,your opener was good, it set the verse up nicely,,and your closing bar was one of the best in this battle,,it was funny
my vote goes to jono for originality and hard punches....but good job both of you



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Voted For: -..Jono..-

dis battle was weak, i thought dat jono won because had had stronger punches and betta wordplay, lyrical had good vocab, but jono won dis

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Voted For: -..Jono..-

This battle was wackness.
Neither had very good personals or punches but JONO had some better wordplay and disses.lyrical,your shit was horribly typed and I didn't get half your shit.You need to install All the rite type on your computer or something man.JONO,your verse was quarter decent,nothing too special there,some decent punches and wordplay,so this goes to you.Return the fav when i get some battles up.
V/JONO

Voted For: *lyrical madnes*

i think lyrical had harder punches and better flow. the other guy had some good vocab. but my vote is goin to lyrical madness.

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Voted For: -..Jono..-

vote goes to Jono..-, i like you style mate!
you had some very nice punches, which used good vocab, nice metas and wordplay and it was funny and interesting to read!

Flow on both sides was a bit stretched but both sides had nice structure and besides the stretched lines, Jono..- had nice flow!

vote to Jono..-, please return the favour and vote on one of the battles below