Diabolic_aka_134 vs Verbal Phenom
 

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Check in by: 09-28-04 at 09:38 AM

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Diabolic_aka_134 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 09:09 AM.

Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 09:13 AM.

If this was a chess game this move would b "check-mate"
jus like ya chance in fame all they say is son "your-fake"

The only phenom that u claim to b is your "foul-taste"
You only contain venom like a "brown-snake"

The only time your verbal is in "english-class"
Just shutup smoke ur herbal and "puff-puff-pass"

You a poser son your not the "Notorious-One"
Your faker than plastic coated "B.B-Gunz"

The colour of your nickname i "Silver-And-Gold"
The verb u b hearing begins wif a-l n its the only thing u "will hold"

You betta retire now while ur records "still-clean"
Or ill jus do the impossible n "spit-ur-spleen"

This rap game was just anutha "dream"
like a fat man walking 2 the store n buying whipped "cream"


Explanations:
fat men walking.. obviously a joke kuz they're steriotipically lazy
notorious one - his email address
silver n gold - his colours of his nick name

hopefully ull understand the rest

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The colour of your nickname is "Silver-And-Gold" i missed the s in is

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

one sided battle in my opinion,


Verbal Phenom: nice structure, nice flow, hot punches, good meta's, not really any multi's, hot opener, hot closer, no personals (try to use some) 7.5/10

fav line:"I'll Flip Ya Lid Like Opening A Can Of Coke Coz Boy You Know Ya "Shook"
You Couldn't Get A Winning Run If Ya Had Rockets Attatched To Ya Foot"


Diabolic: could have been better, nice structure except for one stretched line, flow was ok, weren't really feeling ya multi's, punches didn't hit that hard, meta's were kinda weak too, ya one personal was ok. 4.5/10


vote: verbal phenom


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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

Lyrics:134
Opening:134
ending:134
Metas:neither
Multies:neither
Personals:134
Originality:134
Wordplay:134
Punchs:134
as you can see it is 134 wit the win

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

yeh wow this was not that great of a battle you both laced a lot and wasnt feelin either verse too much but diabolic had better personals and punches but wordplay for both coulda been a lot better
verbal-wasnt feelin your punches the were wack esp the those were really wak punches mayn you def need to elevate yur shit work on punches throw in multi's and personals also work on structure
diabolic-ive seen you drop better then this you shouldnt underestimate newbie's cuz you dont know if they hot or w/e so always be on top of your game...work on some punches i saw some multi's but they werent that great
both elevate on your stuff

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

verbal got this his lines were more complexed n he had some alrite punches, prefered ya structure also, diabolic ya flow was o.k but i didnt like ya structure n none of ya punches hit real hard in my eyes, verbal's complexity won this one...

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

This Battle You Won't Pass This Test Coz You Aint Got Tha Answers
Ya Death Time Limit Is Shaved Like People Being Cursed With Cancer
^ Badly worded punch, but a nice concept

I'll Flip Ya Lid Like Opening A Can Of Coke Coz Boy You Know Ya "Shook"
You Couldn't Get A Winning Run If Ya Had Rockets Attatched To Ya Foot
^ An okay punch, first part was better

This Fag Is Burnt Out Leave Him Twisted With infinitely Exposed scars
This Battle Is A Farce The Only Time u Be On A Roll Is Sitting In Shopping Karts
^ Pretty played and weak

This Deal Is Past It Sell By Date Thats why Your Lines Are Going Cheap
Throwing Your Test Scores At Me Is The Only Time I'll Get A D-Feet
^ Where did the feet part come from? Badly executed

Imma Make Ya Lungs Burst Call Me Bewitched The Way I Leave Ya Cursed
The Only Time Ya Verse Gets A "W" Is Because You Allways Come Off "W"erse
^ An okay punch but not great


Now for Diabolic


IP:


If this was a chess game this move would b "check-mate"
jus like ya chance in fame all they say is son "your-fake"
^ Not a strong punch for an opener

The only phenom that u claim to b is your "foul-taste"
You only contain venom like a "brown-snake"
^ You say he has venom? That's not an insult.

The only time your verbal is in "english-class"
Just shutup smoke ur herbal and "puff-puff-pass"
^ Not a punch at all, weak

You a poser son your not the "Notorious-One"
Your faker than plastic coated "B.B-Gunz"
^ Nice punch, but really is only one

The colour of your nickname i "Silver-And-Gold"
The verb u b hearing begins wif a-l n its the only thing u "will hold"
^ Badly streched, not that good

You betta retire now while ur records "still-clean"
Or ill jus do the impossible n "spit-ur-spleen"
^ Not a strong punch

This rap game was just anutha "dream"
like a fat man walking 2 the store n buying whipped "cream"
^ Badly streched, no punch, weak closer






overall neither verse was great, but verbal took it with slightly stronger punches and he was more consistent. Stay Up.

Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

vocab was super weak in this battle but i seen a better verse by diabolic he jsut came way harder with punches n shit heres what i got on this battle:

verbal phenom:
kinda copyied name from phenom-in-all. but anyway you need to elavate on vocab opener was nice tho liked yer additude on it nice verse to but you didnt come as hard coulda been way better.

Diabolic_aka_134:
you also have a copyied name from (diabolic). but anyway you came way harder with the punches and wordplay and yer stucuter was super hot like yer verse better man:D

VOTE: Diabolic_aka_134

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