LyriCal HavoK vs TitoBronsky
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 12:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

TitoBronsky has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 12:26 PM.

LyriCal HavoK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 12:51 PM.

This Kid hopped on this site...like a wetback ova a border-1
ill give him a loss wit bad luck...but im no salt ova a shoulder-2
tito, ya ideas and lyrics are runnin out like the ozone layer-3
i create the same havok, n'stead of trees i put wins on da conveyer-4
rhymes sound as free as products from online popups or even air-5
everybody takes one look at it and closes it as if they even care-6

this dudes a big baby a bit lady on the low
cats 15, and his pubic hairs starting to grow
often a foe under-estamates the impact that i hold
infact i am known to cause havok on the microphone
lyricaly your unequiped for the little leauges
im spiritualy capable of making you piss your jeans
My mentals enough to stop your ramblings
trains of thought de-rail, so indeed hail an ambulance
you go to school daily, dressed in old navy
get geeked on, and say its a sweater my momma gave me
theres nothing lyrical about you except the name
so depart back to the sac from whence you came

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Voted For: TitoBronsky

hey dog you killed him....you had better personal punches...flowed better...and just came a lil bit nicer...nice job...1

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This was feedback posted for TitoBronsky
 

checkin polls... ok drop here... keep doin ya thing...

Voted For: TitoBronsky

kinda weak punches...flow was iight....but you got da otha guy in dis battle...u had da betta flow...and better structure on dis....return da motha fuckin favor son.....
me vs. lyrical madnes like is below
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151718

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Voted For: LyriCal HavoK

This Kid hopped on this site...like a wetback ova a border-1
ill give him a loss wit bad luck...but im no salt ova a shoulder-2
^^^^^^^^^ FLOW WAS GOOD,,,,,PUNCH WAS OK

tito, ya ideas and lyrics are runnin out like the ozone layer-3
i create the same havok, n'stead of trees i put wins on da conveyer-4
rhymes sound as free as products from online popups or even air-5
everybody takes one look at it and closes it as if they even care-6

^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD FLOW AND PUNCHES (OK)

this dudes a big baby a bit lady on the low
cats 15, and his pubic hairs starting to grow
often a foe under-estamates the impact that i hold
infact i am known to cause havok on the microphone
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE GOOD PUNCH NICE FLOW GOOD STRUTURE

lyricaly your unequiped for the little leauges
im spiritualy capable of making you piss your jeans
My mentals enough to stop your ramblings
trains of thought de-rail, so indeed hail an ambulance
you go to school daily, dressed in old navy
get geeked on, and say its a sweater my momma gave me
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD MAYNE NICE PUNCH NICE FLOW'Z


theres nothing lyrical about you except the name
so depart back to the sac from whence you came
^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CLOSA

TITO-HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE FLOW'Z

LYRICAL-U NEED TO WORK ON YO PUNCHES DA FLOW WAS AGIHT BUT WORK ON DEM PUNCHES

V-TITO CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES

Awwwwwww Dayum Posted And Clicked Da Wrong Shit I'll Pm Strobe And Get Dis Switch

~peace~

thanks for the vote............. uppin this 3-0 me................

Voted For: TitoBronsky

this was kinda close but in a bad way...both were very weak....but here the breakdown

opener:tito
closer:tito(only because lyrical didnt really close well at all)
punches:lyrical
flow:tito
structure:tito
vocab:lyrical

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Voted For: TitoBronsky

lyrical opener aint rhyme you had good vocab and flow as well as structure but punches and disse lacked and failed to strike your oppenant they just were wordded wrong and they fasll choppy making them seem reallky weak a 6/10
tito good structure and vocab as well as flow your punches were worded well good ass multi useage good hits here i think if lyrical worded his shit better he wouldve won this butb his shit reads choppy and therefore hurts his verse making your weaker punches seem better and thats how it came out a 6.5/10

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Voted For: TitoBronsky

Vote goes to tito!!

Intro goes to titi!!! So lyrical but your intro was a bit wack, tito, lol.....funny as hell intro, loved it!!! you deffinatly win this!!

flow goes to tito, good flow man, you keept it consstant all the way through!!
yo lyrical, not bad flow but it was short a few sylaables so it sounded a bit wack man, just a few more words and it would hav been perfect!! keep trying man!!

Punches goes to TIto!!! punches was close but i say it was tito, man your best pounch was.... "lyricaly your unequiped for the little leauges
im spiritualy capable of making you piss your jeans" and...
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you go to school daily, dressed in old navy
get geeked on, and say its a sweater my momma gave me"

lol hahahahhahahhaa soo funy, lol awesome punches!!!

Lyrical... tito, ya ideas and lyrics are runnin out like the ozone layer- i create the same havok, n'stead of trees i put wins on da conveyer
good punch but flow was a bit crooked but overal it was good!!

overall good battle on both halfs, lyrical, just work on your flow a bit and you'll be all sweet, shot guys, return the favour and vote on one of the battles below please, thx, laterz